生日对于每个人来说都是非常重要的日子,你通常怎样庆祝生日?
请根据左边的思维导图的提示写一篇短文,向我们介绍你的生日及其庆祝活动。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文须包含导图中的提示信息,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
My birthday is on the tenth of October every year. I always celebrate it at home with my parents and close friends.
We prepare a fruit cake, delicious snacks, and get colourful balloons ready together. On that day, my friends come to my house after school. We sing birthday songs, share the sweet cake, and play fun games. My parents also cook a big dinner for us.
I receive lovely gifts and warm wishes from everyone. I always feel relaxed and full of joy on my birthday. It's my favourite day all year round.
答案
One possible version:
My birthday is on the tenth of October every year. I always celebrate it at home with my parents and close friends.
We prepare a fruit cake, delicious snacks, and get colourful balloons ready together. On that day, my friends come to my house after school. We sing birthday songs, share the sweet cake, and play fun games. My parents also cook a big dinner for us.
I receive lovely gifts and warm wishes from everyone. I always feel relaxed and full of joy on my birthday. It's my favourite day all year round.
My birthday is on the tenth of October every year. I always celebrate it at home with my parents and close friends.
We prepare a fruit cake, delicious snacks, and get colourful balloons ready together. On that day, my friends come to my house after school. We sing birthday songs, share the sweet cake, and play fun games. My parents also cook a big dinner for us.
I receive lovely gifts and warm wishes from everyone. I always feel relaxed and full of joy on my birthday. It's my favourite day all year round.
解析
【分析】写作时需紧扣思维导图的6个核心提示点:生日时间(When)、共同庆祝的人(With whom)、准备的物品(What to prepare)、庆祝地点(Where)、当天的活动(What to do)、个人感受(How I feel)。先确定每个点的具体内容,再用连贯的英语语句串联,确保词数约100,不出现真实人名、校名,符合写作要求。
【解析】1. 开篇点明生日时间、庆祝地点及共同庆祝的人,对应When、Where、With whom;2. 说明为生日准备的物品,对应What to prepare;3. 描述当天的具体庆祝活动,对应What to do;4. 表达自己在生日时的感受,对应How I feel,最后总结生日的意义,使行文连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
My birthday is on the tenth of October every year. I always celebrate it at home with my parents and close friends.
We prepare a fruit cake, delicious snacks, and get colourful balloons ready together. On that day, my friends come to my house after school. We sing birthday songs, share the sweet cake, and play fun games. My parents also cook a big dinner for us.
I receive lovely gifts and warm wishes from everyone. I always feel relaxed and full of joy on my birthday. It's my favourite day all year round.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作;生日话题表达
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查生日话题的英语短文写作,要求覆盖所有提示要点,语言通顺连贯,贴近学生生活实际,考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 开篇点明生日时间、庆祝地点及共同庆祝的人,对应When、Where、With whom;2. 说明为生日准备的物品,对应What to prepare;3. 描述当天的具体庆祝活动,对应What to do;4. 表达自己在生日时的感受,对应How I feel,最后总结生日的意义,使行文连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
My birthday is on the tenth of October every year. I always celebrate it at home with my parents and close friends.
We prepare a fruit cake, delicious snacks, and get colourful balloons ready together. On that day, my friends come to my house after school. We sing birthday songs, share the sweet cake, and play fun games. My parents also cook a big dinner for us.
I receive lovely gifts and warm wishes from everyone. I always feel relaxed and full of joy on my birthday. It's my favourite day all year round.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作;生日话题表达
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查生日话题的英语短文写作,要求覆盖所有提示要点,语言通顺连贯,贴近学生生活实际,考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
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