请选择一位你心目中的伟大人物,可以是具体的某位科学家、医护工作者、老师、环卫工人,也可以是你身边的家人。以“A Great Person”为题写一篇英文短文。全文使用一般过去时叙述人物事迹。要求语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,不少于5句话。
A Great Person
A Great Person
Zhang Guimei is a great teacher in China.
She worked in a poor place in Yunnan.
She saw many girls could not go to school.
So she wanted to help them.
She started a free school for girls.
She worked very hard every day. I think she is a true hero. From her, I learn to be kind and never stop helping others.
答案
A Great Person
Zhang Guimei is a great teacher in China. She worked in a poor place in Yunnan. She saw many girls could not go to school. So she wanted to help them. She started a free school for girls. She worked very hard every day. I think she is a true hero. From her, I learn to be kind and never stop helping others.
Zhang Guimei is a great teacher in China. She worked in a poor place in Yunnan. She saw many girls could not go to school. So she wanted to help them. She started a free school for girls. She worked very hard every day. I think she is a true hero. From her, I learn to be kind and never stop helping others.
解析
【分析】
本题为英文写作题,要求以“A Great Person”为题,选择一位伟大人物,用一般过去时叙述其事迹,需语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确且不少于5句话。解题思路:1. 确定符合要求的写作对象(如教师、科学家等);2. 围绕人物核心事迹,采用一般过去时组织内容;3. 确保语句连贯、满足句数要求,体现对人物的正面评价。
【解析】
本题可选择中国伟大教师张桂梅作为写作对象,围绕她在云南贫困地区创办免费女子学校帮助失学女孩的事迹,运用一般过去时叙述,最后点明从她身上学到的品质,符合题目所有要求。
【答案】
A Great Person
Zhang Guimei is a great teacher in China. She worked in a poor place in Yunnan. She saw many girls could not go to school. So she wanted to help them. She started a free school for girls. She worked very hard every day. I think she is a true hero. From her, I learn to be kind and never stop helping others.
【知识点】
英文记叙文写作、一般过去时运用、人物事迹叙述
【点评】
本题考查学生的英文表达能力、时态运用能力及对伟大人物的认知,要求结合具体事迹完成短文,有助于培养学生的价值观与英文写作能力,是初中英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英文写作题,要求以“A Great Person”为题,选择一位伟大人物,用一般过去时叙述其事迹,需语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确且不少于5句话。解题思路:1. 确定符合要求的写作对象(如教师、科学家等);2. 围绕人物核心事迹,采用一般过去时组织内容;3. 确保语句连贯、满足句数要求,体现对人物的正面评价。
【解析】
本题可选择中国伟大教师张桂梅作为写作对象,围绕她在云南贫困地区创办免费女子学校帮助失学女孩的事迹,运用一般过去时叙述,最后点明从她身上学到的品质,符合题目所有要求。
【答案】
A Great Person
Zhang Guimei is a great teacher in China. She worked in a poor place in Yunnan. She saw many girls could not go to school. So she wanted to help them. She started a free school for girls. She worked very hard every day. I think she is a true hero. From her, I learn to be kind and never stop helping others.
【知识点】
英文记叙文写作、一般过去时运用、人物事迹叙述
【点评】
本题考查学生的英文表达能力、时态运用能力及对伟大人物的认知,要求结合具体事迹完成短文,有助于培养学生的价值观与英文写作能力,是初中英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.5
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