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五、书面表达(满分20分)
45.假如你是八年级学生李辉，即将参加学校英语社团组织的以“古代中国智慧故事”为主题的征文活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇文章参加比赛，内容如下：
(1) 司马光和小伙伴们玩耍；
(2) 一个小伙伴掉进水缸(water tank)中；
(3) 司马光砸破水缸救出小伙伴。
注意：
(1) 词数为80—100；标题已给出，不计入总词数；
(2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。
Sima Guang broke the water tank
45.假如你是八年级学生李辉，即将参加学校英语社团组织的以“古代中国智慧故事”为主题的征文活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇文章参加比赛，内容如下：
(1) 司马光和小伙伴们玩耍；
(2) 一个小伙伴掉进水缸(water tank)中；
(3) 司马光砸破水缸救出小伙伴。
注意：
(1) 词数为80—100；标题已给出，不计入总词数；
(2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。
Sima Guang broke the water tank
Sima Guang was one of the most famous people in ancient China.
One day, when he was 7 years old, he was playing with his friends in a garden. A naughty boy saw a huge water tank in the garden and tried to climb onto it to show his ability. Suddenly, he fell into the huge water tank and he couldn't get out of it. He cried for help.
The other children were so frightened that they didn't know what to do. At this time, Sima Guang thought of a good idea. He picked up a large stone and used it to break the water tank.
The water in it flowed out soon and the boy was saved at last.
Everyone praised Sima Guang for his cleverness and calmness.
答案
45. (参考范文)
Sima Guang broke the water tank
Sima Guang was one of the most famous people in ancient China.
One day, when he was 7 years old, he was playing with his friends in a garden. A naughty boy saw a huge water tank in the garden and tried to climb onto it to show his ability. Suddenly, he fell into the huge water tank and he couldn't get out of it. He cried for help. The other children were so frightened that they didn't know what to do. At this time, Sima Guang thought of a good idea. He picked up a large stone and used it to break the water tank. The water in it flowed out soon and the boy was saved at last.
Everyone praised Sima Guang for his cleverness and calmness.
Sima Guang broke the water tank
Sima Guang was one of the most famous people in ancient China.
One day, when he was 7 years old, he was playing with his friends in a garden. A naughty boy saw a huge water tank in the garden and tried to climb onto it to show his ability. Suddenly, he fell into the huge water tank and he couldn't get out of it. He cried for help. The other children were so frightened that they didn't know what to do. At this time, Sima Guang thought of a good idea. He picked up a large stone and used it to break the water tank. The water in it flowed out soon and the boy was saved at last.
Everyone praised Sima Guang for his cleverness and calmness.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“古代中国智慧故事”，需涵盖三个核心要点：司马光与伙伴玩耍、伙伴掉进水缸、司马光砸缸救人。写作时需注意：标题已给出，词数控制在80-100，适当补充细节使行文连贯，不能出现真实姓名或学校信息，时态以一般过去时为主。
【解析】按照记叙文“引入-发展-高潮-结局-评价”的结构写作：1. 开头点明司马光的身份（古代中国名人）；2. 发展部分：交代7岁时在花园和伙伴玩耍的场景，引出伙伴爬缸落水的事件；3. 高潮部分：其他孩子惊慌失措，司马光冷静思考办法；4. 结局：司马光用石头砸缸，水流救出伙伴；5. 结尾评价司马光的聪明冷静，呼应主题，同时控制词数，保证语句连贯。
【答案】Sima Guang broke the water tank
Sima Guang was one of the most famous people in ancient China.
One day, when he was 7 years old, he was playing with his friends in a garden. A naughty boy saw a huge water tank in the garden and tried to climb onto it to show his ability. Suddenly, he fell into the huge water tank and he couldn't get out of it. He cried for help. The other children were so frightened that they didn't know what to do. At this time, Sima Guang thought of a good idea. He picked up a large stone and used it to break the water tank. The water in it flowed out soon and the boy was saved at last.
Everyone praised Sima Guang for his cleverness and calmness.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、古代故事英语表达
【点评】本题结合中国传统文化智慧故事，考察八年级学生的英语记叙文写作能力，要求涵盖指定要点并适当拓展，注重语言连贯性与准确性，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】按照记叙文“引入-发展-高潮-结局-评价”的结构写作：1. 开头点明司马光的身份（古代中国名人）；2. 发展部分：交代7岁时在花园和伙伴玩耍的场景，引出伙伴爬缸落水的事件；3. 高潮部分：其他孩子惊慌失措，司马光冷静思考办法；4. 结局：司马光用石头砸缸，水流救出伙伴；5. 结尾评价司马光的聪明冷静，呼应主题，同时控制词数，保证语句连贯。
【答案】Sima Guang broke the water tank
Sima Guang was one of the most famous people in ancient China.
One day, when he was 7 years old, he was playing with his friends in a garden. A naughty boy saw a huge water tank in the garden and tried to climb onto it to show his ability. Suddenly, he fell into the huge water tank and he couldn't get out of it. He cried for help. The other children were so frightened that they didn't know what to do. At this time, Sima Guang thought of a good idea. He picked up a large stone and used it to break the water tank. The water in it flowed out soon and the boy was saved at last.
Everyone praised Sima Guang for his cleverness and calmness.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、古代故事英语表达
【点评】本题结合中国传统文化智慧故事，考察八年级学生的英语记叙文写作能力，要求涵盖指定要点并适当拓展，注重语言连贯性与准确性，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】0.7
