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朋友是我们宝贵的财富，每个人在人生中都有自己的好朋友。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Kelly想了解你和你最好的朋友的一些情况。请你根据下面的图和实际情况，给Kelly回一封80~100词的电子邮件，告诉她你和你最好的朋友的相同和不同之处。
要求：灵活运用形容词、副词的原级和比较级。
Dear Kelly,
How’s it going? I’m writing to tell you something about my best friend and me.
I hope we can be best friends, too.
Yours,
Li Hua
[审题指导]
1. 体裁：应用文
2. 话题：描述朋友跟自己的异同
3. 人称：以第一人称为主
4. 时态：以一般现在时为主
[思路构建]
[精彩范文]
Dear Kelly,
How’s it going? I’m writing to tell you something about my best friend and me.
Denis is my best friend. We are similar in some ways, but different in other ways.
He is as tall as me, but he is thinner than me. We both have straight black hair, but mine is longer than his. Denis is more outgoing than me. That’s why he has more friends than me. We both like sports, so we often exercise together in our free time. As for study, I’m better at maths and he does well in English. As a result, we often do homework together and help each other.
Although we have many differences, we are still good friends because we both don’t think friends are necessary to be the same, as long as we care about each other.
I hope we can be best friends, too.
Yours,
Li Hua
高分点评：1. 文章思路清晰，描述详细。 2. as...as, in our free time, be better at, do well in, as a result, help each other, as for 等短语的正确运用，展示了作者扎实的基本功。 3. 文中although引导的让步状语从句以及形容词比较级的正确运用成为文章的加分点。
实战演练
[跨学科·数学]你所在的学校上周开展了以“Should friends be different or the same?”为主题的调查活动，下面是对全校1000个学生的调查结果。请你根据调查结果饼状图和以下要求写一篇英语短文。要求：80~100词。
要点：1. 简要描述调查结果；
2. 谈谈你对交友的看法和理由。
提示词：percent 百分之……
36 英语 八上 R
朋友是我们宝贵的财富，每个人在人生中都有自己的好朋友。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Kelly想了解你和你最好的朋友的一些情况。请你根据下面的图和实际情况，给Kelly回一封80~100词的电子邮件，告诉她你和你最好的朋友的相同和不同之处。
要求：灵活运用形容词、副词的原级和比较级。
Dear Kelly,
How’s it going? I’m writing to tell you something about my best friend and me.
I hope we can be best friends, too.
Yours,
Li Hua
[审题指导]
1. 体裁：应用文
2. 话题：描述朋友跟自己的异同
3. 人称：以第一人称为主
4. 时态：以一般现在时为主
[思路构建]
[精彩范文]
Dear Kelly,
How’s it going? I’m writing to tell you something about my best friend and me.
Denis is my best friend. We are similar in some ways, but different in other ways.
He is as tall as me, but he is thinner than me. We both have straight black hair, but mine is longer than his. Denis is more outgoing than me. That’s why he has more friends than me. We both like sports, so we often exercise together in our free time. As for study, I’m better at maths and he does well in English. As a result, we often do homework together and help each other.
Although we have many differences, we are still good friends because we both don’t think friends are necessary to be the same, as long as we care about each other.
I hope we can be best friends, too.
Yours,
Li Hua
高分点评：1. 文章思路清晰，描述详细。 2. as...as, in our free time, be better at, do well in, as a result, help each other, as for 等短语的正确运用，展示了作者扎实的基本功。 3. 文中although引导的让步状语从句以及形容词比较级的正确运用成为文章的加分点。
实战演练
[跨学科·数学]你所在的学校上周开展了以“Should friends be different or the same?”为主题的调查活动，下面是对全校1000个学生的调查结果。请你根据调查结果饼状图和以下要求写一篇英语短文。要求：80~100词。
要点：1. 简要描述调查结果；
2. 谈谈你对交友的看法和理由。
提示词：percent 百分之……
Should friends be different or the same?
According to a survey of 1,000 students in our school, thirty-five percent of the students believe friends should be different. Twenty-five percent think friends should be the same. Forty percent of the students don't care whether friends are the same or not.
In my opinion, although it is important to have some similarities to build a strong friendship, friends should be different. Having friends different from ourselves can help us learn new things. Besides, it makes life more interesting and colourful, too. We should respect each other's differences.
According to a survey of 1,000 students in our school, thirty-five percent of the students believe friends should be different. Twenty-five percent think friends should be the same. Forty percent of the students don't care whether friends are the same or not.
In my opinion, although it is important to have some similarities to build a strong friendship, friends should be different. Having friends different from ourselves can help us learn new things. Besides, it makes life more interesting and colourful, too. We should respect each other's differences.
36 英语 八上 R
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实战演练 Should friends be different or the same?
According to a survey of 1,000 students in our school, thirty-five percent of the students believe friends should be different. Twenty-five percent think friends should be the same. Forty percent of the students don't care whether friends are the same or not.
In my opinion, although it is important to have some similarities to build a strong friendship, friends should be different. Having friends different from ourselves can help us learn new things. Besides, it makes life more interesting and colourful, too. We should respect each other's differences.
【思路分析】首段根据图表分析占比，接着写作者的观点。
实战演练 Should friends be different or the same?
According to a survey of 1,000 students in our school, thirty-five percent of the students believe friends should be different. Twenty-five percent think friends should be the same. Forty percent of the students don't care whether friends are the same or not.
In my opinion, although it is important to have some similarities to build a strong friendship, friends should be different. Having friends different from ourselves can help us learn new things. Besides, it makes life more interesting and colourful, too. We should respect each other's differences.
【思路分析】首段根据图表分析占比，接着写作者的观点。
