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[2024 黔东南州期末]假如你是李华,你校英语俱乐部要开展以“Keep Safe, Start with Me”为题的英语征文活动。请根据下图内容及写作要求,写一篇短文投稿。
写作要求：
1. 短文须包含图中所有信息,可适当拓展；
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 词数 80 ~ 100(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Keep Safe, Start with Me
Do you know how to keep safe in our daily life?
[2024 黔东南州期末]假如你是李华,你校英语俱乐部要开展以“Keep Safe, Start with Me”为题的英语征文活动。请根据下图内容及写作要求,写一篇短文投稿。
写作要求：
1. 短文须包含图中所有信息,可适当拓展；
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 词数 80 ~ 100(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Keep Safe, Start with Me
Do you know how to keep safe in our daily life?
Today, I’d like to tell you some ways to keep safe.
First, always play in a safe place. We mustn’t play on the street. A park is a safe place because there are no cars or buses in it.
Second, follow the traffic rules. Before crossing a road, stop and look both ways. Never stick your head out of a running car. You may get hurt easily.
Third, be careful with scissors and knives.
Fourth, we’d better know how to give first aid in case of an accident.
That’s what I want to say. Start with me now.
Let’s keep safe in our daily life.
答案
主题 人与自我——安全与健康
语篇类型 应用文
写作思路
时态和人称 时态：以一般现在时为主 人称：以第一、二人称为主
要点 1.引出保持安全的主题
2.介绍保持安全的方法 3.呼吁从自己做起Keep Safe, Start with Me
Do you know how to keep safe in our daily life? Today, I’d like to tell you some ways to keep safe.
First, always play in a safe place. We mustn’t play on the street. A park is a safe place because there are no cars or buses in it. Second, follow the traffic rules. Before crossing a road, stop and look both ways. Never stick your head out of a running car. You may get hurt easily. Third, be careful with scissors and knives. Fourth, we’d better know how to give first aid in case of an accident.
That’s what I want to say. Start with me now. Let’s keep safe in our daily life.
解析
【分析】
本题是英语主题写作题，主题为“Keep Safe, Start with Me”，属于安全与健康类应用文。解题思路：1. 明确写作要求：需包含思维导图中所有要点（安全玩耍、遵守交通规则、了解急救知识，可适当拓展），时态用一般现在时，人称以第一、二人称为主，词数80-100，开头已给出；2. 按照写作思路：先引出保持安全的主题，再分点介绍具体安全方法，最后呼吁从自身做起，完成短文。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 承接已给开头，说明要分享安全的方法；2. 分点阐述安全方法：①安全玩耍：选择公园等安全场所，不在马路玩耍；②遵守交通规则：过马路左右看，不将身体部位伸出行驶车辆；③了解急救知识，补充小心尖锐物品等；3. 最后呼吁从自己做起，总结主题，完成短文。
【答案】
Keep Safe, Start with Me
Do you know how to keep safe in our daily life? Today, I’d like to tell you some ways to keep safe.
First, always play in a safe place. We mustn’t play on the street. A park is a safe place because there are no cars or buses in it. Second, follow the traffic rules. Before crossing a road, stop and look both ways. Never stick your head out of a running car. You may get hurt easily. Third, be careful with scissors and knives. Fourth, we’d better know how to give first aid in case of an accident.
That’s what I want to say. Start with me now. Let’s keep safe in our daily life.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，安全主题表达，一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查英语写作能力，要求学生围绕安全主题整合给定要点并适当拓展，符合初中英语写作考查目标，能检验学生语言组织与表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题是英语主题写作题，主题为“Keep Safe, Start with Me”，属于安全与健康类应用文。解题思路：1. 明确写作要求：需包含思维导图中所有要点（安全玩耍、遵守交通规则、了解急救知识，可适当拓展），时态用一般现在时，人称以第一、二人称为主，词数80-100，开头已给出；2. 按照写作思路：先引出保持安全的主题，再分点介绍具体安全方法，最后呼吁从自身做起，完成短文。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 承接已给开头，说明要分享安全的方法；2. 分点阐述安全方法：①安全玩耍：选择公园等安全场所，不在马路玩耍；②遵守交通规则：过马路左右看，不将身体部位伸出行驶车辆；③了解急救知识，补充小心尖锐物品等；3. 最后呼吁从自己做起，总结主题，完成短文。
【答案】
Keep Safe, Start with Me
Do you know how to keep safe in our daily life? Today, I’d like to tell you some ways to keep safe.
First, always play in a safe place. We mustn’t play on the street. A park is a safe place because there are no cars or buses in it. Second, follow the traffic rules. Before crossing a road, stop and look both ways. Never stick your head out of a running car. You may get hurt easily. Third, be careful with scissors and knives. Fourth, we’d better know how to give first aid in case of an accident.
That’s what I want to say. Start with me now. Let’s keep safe in our daily life.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，安全主题表达，一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查英语写作能力，要求学生围绕安全主题整合给定要点并适当拓展，符合初中英语写作考查目标，能检验学生语言组织与表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.3
