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话题概述
本单元的写作主题为“运动”，要求学生根据所学的词汇和句型写一篇和运动有关的书面表达。通常涉及的细分话题有：①介绍自己或他人最喜欢的运动；②描述学习某项运动的经历；③描述某项运动对自己或他人的影响；④描述某次运动会的场景；⑤介绍某个知名的运动员；⑥介绍某个运动团体。该话题下常见的体裁有记叙文、说明文和应用文等。
写作实例
运动不仅能强身健体，还能使人心情愉悦。你最喜欢的运动是什么？请根据以下提示问题写一篇文章，描述你喜欢的运动以及学习这项运动的经历。
要点：1）你最喜欢的运动是什么？
2）介绍你学习这项运动的经历。
3）表达你对这项运动的感受或决心。
要求：1）词数不少于80；2）必须包含上述提示要点，可适当发挥想象。
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审题指导
1. 体裁：记叙文
2. 时态：以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
3. 人称：以第一人称为主
4. 必备词汇：①be good for 对……有好处 ②start to do sth. 开始做某事 ③learn to do sth. 学习做某事 ④jump into 跳入 ⑤for a while 一会儿 ⑥become interested in 对……感兴趣 ⑦little by little 逐渐地；渐渐地 ⑧fall in love with... 爱上…… ⑨keep doing sth. 继续做某事 ⑩be busy with sth. 忙于某事 ⑪dream of 梦想
谋篇布局
_______ taught me how to _______. Soon I could _______.
I became interested in _______, and eventually I fell in love with _______.
佳作剖析
教材原文
P27 I wasn't very strong as a kid.
P27 I became fit and strong.
P27 It was also good for my heart.
P22 He enjoyed every moment of running.
优秀范文
My favourite sport① is swimming. I like this sport because② it is relaxing and good for my body.
I started to learn to swim when I was six years old. I wasn't very strong as a kid. So my parents asked me to learn to swim. They wanted me to have a strong body. When I jumped into the pool, I was nervous.③ My father taught me how to swim. Soon I could swim for a while. I became interested in swimming little by little, and eventually I fell in love with it. Thanks to swimming, my health improved a lot.④ It was good for my heart. I became fit and strong.
I enjoyed every moment of swimming. I will keep swimming even if I am busy with my schoolwork.⑤ I also dream of being a professional swimmer.
亮点评析
①点明我喜欢的运动是游泳。
②用 because 引导的原因状语从句描述我喜欢游泳的原因。
③该句属于细节描述，突出了我跳进游泳池时的紧张心情。
④该句引出了游泳在健康方面对我的影响。
⑤此句表达了我会一直坚持游泳的决心。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①have a long history 历史悠久 ②play an important role 扮演重要角色；发挥重要作用 ③play sports 做运动 ④different kinds of 不同种类的 ⑤take exercise 锻炼身体 ⑥join a sports club 加入一个运动社团 ⑦try one's best 尽某人最大努力 ⑧take a great interest in sth. 对某事非常感兴趣 ⑨take part in 参加 ⑩rock climbing 攀岩 ⑪make up one's mind 下定决心
⑫Playing sports is a good form of keeping fit, and it can make children full of energy. 做运动是保持健康的一种好的方式，它可以使孩子们充满活力。
本单元的写作主题为“运动”，要求学生根据所学的词汇和句型写一篇和运动有关的书面表达。通常涉及的细分话题有：①介绍自己或他人最喜欢的运动；②描述学习某项运动的经历；③描述某项运动对自己或他人的影响；④描述某次运动会的场景；⑤介绍某个知名的运动员；⑥介绍某个运动团体。该话题下常见的体裁有记叙文、说明文和应用文等。
写作实例
运动不仅能强身健体，还能使人心情愉悦。你最喜欢的运动是什么？请根据以下提示问题写一篇文章，描述你喜欢的运动以及学习这项运动的经历。
要点：1）你最喜欢的运动是什么？
2）介绍你学习这项运动的经历。
3）表达你对这项运动的感受或决心。
要求：1）词数不少于80；2）必须包含上述提示要点，可适当发挥想象。
_______
_______
_______
_______
_______
_______
_______
_______
_______
_______
审题指导
1. 体裁：记叙文
2. 时态：以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
3. 人称：以第一人称为主
4. 必备词汇：①be good for 对……有好处 ②start to do sth. 开始做某事 ③learn to do sth. 学习做某事 ④jump into 跳入 ⑤for a while 一会儿 ⑥become interested in 对……感兴趣 ⑦little by little 逐渐地；渐渐地 ⑧fall in love with... 爱上…… ⑨keep doing sth. 继续做某事 ⑩be busy with sth. 忙于某事 ⑪dream of 梦想
谋篇布局
_______ taught me how to _______. Soon I could _______.
I became interested in _______, and eventually I fell in love with _______.
佳作剖析
教材原文
P27 I wasn't very strong as a kid.
P27 I became fit and strong.
P27 It was also good for my heart.
P22 He enjoyed every moment of running.
优秀范文
My favourite sport① is swimming. I like this sport because② it is relaxing and good for my body.
I started to learn to swim when I was six years old. I wasn't very strong as a kid. So my parents asked me to learn to swim. They wanted me to have a strong body. When I jumped into the pool, I was nervous.③ My father taught me how to swim. Soon I could swim for a while. I became interested in swimming little by little, and eventually I fell in love with it. Thanks to swimming, my health improved a lot.④ It was good for my heart. I became fit and strong.
I enjoyed every moment of swimming. I will keep swimming even if I am busy with my schoolwork.⑤ I also dream of being a professional swimmer.
亮点评析
①点明我喜欢的运动是游泳。
②用 because 引导的原因状语从句描述我喜欢游泳的原因。
③该句属于细节描述，突出了我跳进游泳池时的紧张心情。
④该句引出了游泳在健康方面对我的影响。
⑤此句表达了我会一直坚持游泳的决心。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①have a long history 历史悠久 ②play an important role 扮演重要角色；发挥重要作用 ③play sports 做运动 ④different kinds of 不同种类的 ⑤take exercise 锻炼身体 ⑥join a sports club 加入一个运动社团 ⑦try one's best 尽某人最大努力 ⑧take a great interest in sth. 对某事非常感兴趣 ⑨take part in 参加 ⑩rock climbing 攀岩 ⑪make up one's mind 下定决心
⑫Playing sports is a good form of keeping fit, and it can make children full of energy. 做运动是保持健康的一种好的方式，它可以使孩子们充满活力。
答案
My favourite sport① is swimming. I like this sport because② it is relaxing and good for my body.
I started to learn to swim when I was six years old. I wasn't very strong as a kid. So my parents asked me to learn to swim. They wanted me to have a strong body. When I jumped into the pool, I was nervous.③ My father taught me how to swim. Soon I could swim for a while. I became interested in swimming little by little, and eventually I fell in love with it. Thanks to swimming, my health improved a lot.④ It was good for my heart. I became fit and strong.
I enjoyed every moment of swimming. I will keep swimming even if I am busy with my schoolwork.⑤ I also dream of being a professional swimmer.
I started to learn to swim when I was six years old. I wasn't very strong as a kid. So my parents asked me to learn to swim. They wanted me to have a strong body. When I jumped into the pool, I was nervous.③ My father taught me how to swim. Soon I could swim for a while. I became interested in swimming little by little, and eventually I fell in love with it. Thanks to swimming, my health improved a lot.④ It was good for my heart. I became fit and strong.
I enjoyed every moment of swimming. I will keep swimming even if I am busy with my schoolwork.⑤ I also dream of being a professional swimmer.
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一篇关于最喜欢的运动的英语记叙文，需包含三个核心要点：说明最喜欢的运动、介绍学习该运动的经历、表达对该运动的感受与决心。解题思路如下：1. 确定体裁为记叙文，人称用第一人称，时态以一般现在时（描述喜好）和一般过去时（描述过去经历）为主；2. 按思维导图的三段结构展开：第一段引出最喜欢的运动并说明原因；第二段详细描述学习该运动的时间、过程、帮助者及对自身的影响；第三段表达对该运动的喜爱、坚持的决心及相关梦想；3. 运用给定的话题词汇和句型（如be good for、fall in love with等）丰富内容，确保符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 第一段（引出话题）：点明最喜欢的运动是游泳，用because引导的原因状语从句说明原因，如“My favourite sport is swimming. I like this sport because it is relaxing and good for my body.”；
2. 第二段（描述学习经历）：按时间顺序叙述：①开始学习的时间（六岁）及原因（小时候身体弱，父母让学）；②学习过程的细节（跳进泳池时紧张，父亲教自己游泳）；③进步与情感变化（逐渐感兴趣并爱上游泳）；④运动对健康的好处（身体变强壮、心脏更健康），如“I started to learn to swim when I was six years old. I wasn't very strong as a kid. So my parents asked me to learn to swim. They wanted me to have a strong body. When I jumped into the pool, I was nervous. My father taught me how to swim. Soon I could swim for a while. I became interested in swimming little by little, and eventually I fell in love with it. Thanks to swimming, my health improved a lot. It was good for my heart. I became fit and strong.”；
3. 第三段（表达感受）：总结对运动的喜爱，表达坚持的决心及梦想，如“I enjoyed every moment of swimming. I will keep swimming even if I am busy with my schoolwork. I also dream of being a professional swimmer.”。
【答案】
My favourite sport is swimming. I like this sport because it is relaxing and good for my body.
I started to learn to swim when I was six years old. I wasn't very strong as a kid. So my parents asked me to learn to swim. They wanted me to have a strong body. When I jumped into the pool, I was nervous. My father taught me how to swim. Soon I could swim for a while. I became interested in swimming little by little, and eventually I fell in love with it. Thanks to swimming, my health improved a lot. It was good for my heart. I became fit and strong.
I enjoyed every moment of swimming. I will keep swimming even if I am busy with my schoolwork. I also dream of being a professional swimmer.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、运动话题表达、原因状语从句
【点评】
本文结构清晰，严格遵循三段式写作要求，紧扣题目所有要点；运用丰富的话题词汇和句型，细节描写生动（如“跳进泳池时紧张”），情感表达真实自然；语言流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题要求写一篇关于最喜欢的运动的英语记叙文，需包含三个核心要点：说明最喜欢的运动、介绍学习该运动的经历、表达对该运动的感受与决心。解题思路如下：1. 确定体裁为记叙文，人称用第一人称，时态以一般现在时（描述喜好）和一般过去时（描述过去经历）为主；2. 按思维导图的三段结构展开：第一段引出最喜欢的运动并说明原因；第二段详细描述学习该运动的时间、过程、帮助者及对自身的影响；第三段表达对该运动的喜爱、坚持的决心及相关梦想；3. 运用给定的话题词汇和句型（如be good for、fall in love with等）丰富内容，确保符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 第一段（引出话题）：点明最喜欢的运动是游泳，用because引导的原因状语从句说明原因，如“My favourite sport is swimming. I like this sport because it is relaxing and good for my body.”；
2. 第二段（描述学习经历）：按时间顺序叙述：①开始学习的时间（六岁）及原因（小时候身体弱，父母让学）；②学习过程的细节（跳进泳池时紧张，父亲教自己游泳）；③进步与情感变化（逐渐感兴趣并爱上游泳）；④运动对健康的好处（身体变强壮、心脏更健康），如“I started to learn to swim when I was six years old. I wasn't very strong as a kid. So my parents asked me to learn to swim. They wanted me to have a strong body. When I jumped into the pool, I was nervous. My father taught me how to swim. Soon I could swim for a while. I became interested in swimming little by little, and eventually I fell in love with it. Thanks to swimming, my health improved a lot. It was good for my heart. I became fit and strong.”；
3. 第三段（表达感受）：总结对运动的喜爱，表达坚持的决心及梦想，如“I enjoyed every moment of swimming. I will keep swimming even if I am busy with my schoolwork. I also dream of being a professional swimmer.”。
【答案】
My favourite sport is swimming. I like this sport because it is relaxing and good for my body.
I started to learn to swim when I was six years old. I wasn't very strong as a kid. So my parents asked me to learn to swim. They wanted me to have a strong body. When I jumped into the pool, I was nervous. My father taught me how to swim. Soon I could swim for a while. I became interested in swimming little by little, and eventually I fell in love with it. Thanks to swimming, my health improved a lot. It was good for my heart. I became fit and strong.
I enjoyed every moment of swimming. I will keep swimming even if I am busy with my schoolwork. I also dream of being a professional swimmer.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、运动话题表达、原因状语从句
【点评】
本文结构清晰，严格遵循三段式写作要求，紧扣题目所有要点；运用丰富的话题词汇和句型，细节描写生动（如“跳进泳池时紧张”），情感表达真实自然；语言流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
