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三、书面表达。
校英文报正在举行以“Life in 2050”
为主题的征文比赛。请你根据以下思维导图写一篇短文投稿，介绍你的2050年未来生活方案。不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Life in 2050 will be very different from life now.
校英文报正在举行以“Life in 2050”
为主题的征文比赛。请你根据以下思维导图写一篇短文投稿，介绍你的2050年未来生活方案。不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Life in 2050 will be very different from life now.
答案
Science will make transport faster, greener, and smarter.
In 2050, flying cars will replace most buses. Students will get to school in ten minutes even though they live a bit far. All vehicles will use green energy, so there will be no air pollution. For long trips, super-speed magnetic trains will connect cities underground, and people will be able to share bikes or e-scooters through a smart app.
At that time, we will use wind and sunlight as the main sources of energy. There won't be any pollution anymore, so we will be able to see clear water and blue skies all year round.
In 2050, I hope I will become an engineer. I will design solar-powered flying cars and plant trees alongside every street. From now on, I will work hard to make this dream come true.
In 2050, flying cars will replace most buses. Students will get to school in ten minutes even though they live a bit far. All vehicles will use green energy, so there will be no air pollution. For long trips, super-speed magnetic trains will connect cities underground, and people will be able to share bikes or e-scooters through a smart app.
At that time, we will use wind and sunlight as the main sources of energy. There won't be any pollution anymore, so we will be able to see clear water and blue skies all year round.
In 2050, I hope I will become an engineer. I will design solar-powered flying cars and plant trees alongside every street. From now on, I will work hard to make this dream come true.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题书面表达，主题是“Life in 2050”，要求围绕2050年的生活展开，开头已给出，需写不少于80词的短文。解题思路：1. 确定写作核心维度：可从交通、能源、个人未来规划三个方面切入，贴合“未来生活”的主题；2. 时态统一使用一般将来时，体现对未来的展望；3. 衔接开头，先介绍交通的变化，再写能源的清洁化，最后结合个人梦想升华主题，确保内容连贯、符合征文要求。
【解析】
首先承接开头“Life in 2050 will be very different from life now.”，依次展开：1. 交通方面：飞行汽车替代多数公交，学生出行更快捷，所有交通工具使用绿色能源无空气污染，长途出行用磁悬浮列车，可通过智能APP共享交通工具；2. 能源方面：以风能、太阳能为主要能源，无任何污染，能常年看到清水蓝天；3. 个人规划：希望成为工程师，设计太阳能飞行汽车，在街道旁种树，从现在努力实现梦想。全文使用一般将来时，语句通顺，逻辑清晰，达到字数要求，符合征文标准。
【答案】
Science will make transport faster, greener, and smarter.
In 2050, flying cars will replace most buses. Students will get to school in ten minutes even though they live a bit far. All vehicles will use green energy, so there will be no air pollution. For long trips, super-speed magnetic trains will connect cities underground, and people will be able to share bikes or e-scooters through a smart app.
At that time, we will use wind and sunlight as the main sources of energy. There won't be any pollution anymore, so we will be able to see clear water and blue skies all year round.
In 2050, I hope I will become an engineer. I will design solar-powered flying cars and plant trees alongside every street. From now on, I will work hard to make this dream come true.
【知识点】
英语话题书面表达、一般将来时、环保主题写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“2050年生活”主题，从交通、能源、个人规划三个维度具体展开，内容充实，时态运用准确规范，语句连贯流畅，既体现了对未来生活的美好憧憬，又结合个人梦想升华主题，符合征文要求，是一篇优秀的话题作文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语话题书面表达，主题是“Life in 2050”，要求围绕2050年的生活展开，开头已给出，需写不少于80词的短文。解题思路：1. 确定写作核心维度：可从交通、能源、个人未来规划三个方面切入，贴合“未来生活”的主题；2. 时态统一使用一般将来时，体现对未来的展望；3. 衔接开头，先介绍交通的变化，再写能源的清洁化，最后结合个人梦想升华主题，确保内容连贯、符合征文要求。
【解析】
首先承接开头“Life in 2050 will be very different from life now.”，依次展开：1. 交通方面：飞行汽车替代多数公交，学生出行更快捷，所有交通工具使用绿色能源无空气污染，长途出行用磁悬浮列车，可通过智能APP共享交通工具；2. 能源方面：以风能、太阳能为主要能源，无任何污染，能常年看到清水蓝天；3. 个人规划：希望成为工程师，设计太阳能飞行汽车，在街道旁种树，从现在努力实现梦想。全文使用一般将来时，语句通顺，逻辑清晰，达到字数要求，符合征文标准。
【答案】
Science will make transport faster, greener, and smarter.
In 2050, flying cars will replace most buses. Students will get to school in ten minutes even though they live a bit far. All vehicles will use green energy, so there will be no air pollution. For long trips, super-speed magnetic trains will connect cities underground, and people will be able to share bikes or e-scooters through a smart app.
At that time, we will use wind and sunlight as the main sources of energy. There won't be any pollution anymore, so we will be able to see clear water and blue skies all year round.
In 2050, I hope I will become an engineer. I will design solar-powered flying cars and plant trees alongside every street. From now on, I will work hard to make this dream come true.
【知识点】
英语话题书面表达、一般将来时、环保主题写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“2050年生活”主题，从交通、能源、个人规划三个维度具体展开，内容充实，时态运用准确规范，语句连贯流畅，既体现了对未来生活的美好憧憬，又结合个人梦想升华主题，符合征文要求，是一篇优秀的话题作文。
【难度系数】
0.6
