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品读范文，拆解核心技巧
假设你是阳光中学的李华，将有英国学生到你校访问交流。请根据下面表格中的内容提示，用英文向他们介绍你自己和你的学校生活。
要求：
1. 文中不能出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
2. 内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥，全文通顺连贯。
3. 词数90左右。
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储备金句，提升语言质感
[开头句]
1. Thanks for your email.
2. Let me tell you something about my school life.
3. I study at Hope Middle School.
[中间句]
1. My school is not big but it's great.
2. There are thirty classrooms in my school.
3. I have many good friends at school.
4. My favourite subject is Art.
5. Our teachers are all very kind.
[结尾句]
1. My school life is very interesting.
2. Come and enjoy your school life here.
3. I hope you can come and visit it some day.
[名言警句]
1. A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。
2. A strict teacher makes a good apprentice. 严师出高徒。
3. Nothing is difficult to the man who will try. 世上无难事，只要肯登攀。
品读范文，拆解核心技巧
假设你是阳光中学的李华，将有英国学生到你校访问交流。请根据下面表格中的内容提示，用英文向他们介绍你自己和你的学校生活。
要求：
1. 文中不能出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
2. 内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥，全文通顺连贯。
3. 词数90左右。
素材积累
储备金句，提升语言质感
[开头句]
1. Thanks for your email.
2. Let me tell you something about my school life.
3. I study at Hope Middle School.
[中间句]
1. My school is not big but it's great.
2. There are thirty classrooms in my school.
3. I have many good friends at school.
4. My favourite subject is Art.
5. Our teachers are all very kind.
[结尾句]
1. My school life is very interesting.
2. Come and enjoy your school life here.
3. I hope you can come and visit it some day.
[名言警句]
1. A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。
2. A strict teacher makes a good apprentice. 严师出高徒。
3. Nothing is difficult to the man who will try. 世上无难事，只要肯登攀。
答案
Hello, everyone! Welcome to our school. I'm Li Hua. I have two hobbies: reading books and singing songs.
As for our school, it is big and clean. All our teachers are very kind to us, they always give me a hand when I can't work out difficult problems. My classmates are friendly too, we get on well with each other. We have many fun after-school activities, we can play badminton, join the reading club and so on.
I hope you will have a wonderful time in our school.
As for our school, it is big and clean. All our teachers are very kind to us, they always give me a hand when I can't work out difficult problems. My classmates are friendly too, we get on well with each other. We have many fun after-school activities, we can play badminton, join the reading club and so on.
I hope you will have a wonderful time in our school.
解析
【分析】本题要求以李华的身份向英国访问学生介绍自己和学校生活，需满足无真实信息、涵盖要点、90词左右的要求。解题思路：第一步，开头用问候语引出主题，进行简单自我介绍；第二步，主体部分介绍学校的环境、师生情况及课外活动，适当补充细节丰富内容；第三步，结尾表达对来访学生的欢迎与祝愿，确保语句通顺连贯，符合字数要求。
【解析】按照写作结构，开头用“Hello, everyone! Welcome to our school.”问候，接着介绍自身爱好（reading books and singing songs）；主体部分描述学校“big and clean”，老师友好会帮忙解决难题，同学相处融洽，还有羽毛球、阅读俱乐部等课外活动；结尾表达希望对方度过美好时光，全文符合要求。
【答案】Hello, everyone! Welcome to our school. I'm Li Hua. I have two hobbies: reading books and singing songs.
As for our school, it is big and clean. All our teachers are very kind to us, they always give me a hand when I can't work out difficult problems. My classmates are friendly too, we get on well with each other. We have many fun after-school activities, we can play badminton, join the reading club and so on.
I hope you will have a wonderful time in our school.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语词句运用
【点评】范文符合题目要求，内容完整，涵盖自我介绍、学校环境、师生关系、课外活动等要点，语言通顺自然，适当补充细节，适合向外国学生介绍的语境，是一篇合格的应用文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】按照写作结构，开头用“Hello, everyone! Welcome to our school.”问候，接着介绍自身爱好（reading books and singing songs）；主体部分描述学校“big and clean”，老师友好会帮忙解决难题，同学相处融洽，还有羽毛球、阅读俱乐部等课外活动；结尾表达希望对方度过美好时光，全文符合要求。
【答案】Hello, everyone! Welcome to our school. I'm Li Hua. I have two hobbies: reading books and singing songs.
As for our school, it is big and clean. All our teachers are very kind to us, they always give me a hand when I can't work out difficult problems. My classmates are friendly too, we get on well with each other. We have many fun after-school activities, we can play badminton, join the reading club and so on.
I hope you will have a wonderful time in our school.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语词句运用
【点评】范文符合题目要求，内容完整，涵盖自我介绍、学校环境、师生关系、课外活动等要点，语言通顺自然，适当补充细节，适合向外国学生介绍的语境，是一篇合格的应用文。
【难度系数】0.5
