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[2025江苏连云港期中]某英语报社正在开展题为“I love my school”的征文活动。假如你是李华,请根据以下图片和文字信息,用英语写一篇短文参加活动。
内容要点:(1)What is your school like?
(2)Which is your favourite place in your school and why?
(3)What activities do you do at school?

要求:(1)词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(3)短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、校名等信息。
I love my school
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua.
[2025江苏连云港期中]某英语报社正在开展题为“I love my school”的征文活动。假如你是李华,请根据以下图片和文字信息,用英语写一篇短文参加活动。
内容要点:(1)What is your school like?
(2)Which is your favourite place in your school and why?
(3)What activities do you do at school?
要求:(1)词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(3)短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、校名等信息。
I love my school
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua.
I study in Sunshine Middle School. Our school is big and nice.
When you enter it, you can see green grass on the left. Noticeboards on the right tell us about school events and clubs. Next to the classroom building is a sports field, where we play football and basketball. I often play basketball with my classmates there! The library is next to the classroom building too. It has many books, and we can borrow one for two weeks. It's my favourite place because I enjoy reading quietly there.
My school is the best place to study and have fun in my eyes!
When you enter it, you can see green grass on the left. Noticeboards on the right tell us about school events and clubs. Next to the classroom building is a sports field, where we play football and basketball. I often play basketball with my classmates there! The library is next to the classroom building too. It has many books, and we can borrow one for two weeks. It's my favourite place because I enjoy reading quietly there.
My school is the best place to study and have fun in my eyes!
答案
I study in Sunshine Middle School. Our school is big and nice.
When you enter it, you can see green grass on the left. Noticeboards on the right tell us about school events and clubs. Next to the classroom building is a sports field, where we play football and basketball. I often play basketball with my classmates there! The library is next to the classroom building too. It has many books, and we can borrow one for two weeks. It's my favourite place because I enjoy reading quietly there.
My school is the best place to study and have fun in my eyes!
When you enter it, you can see green grass on the left. Noticeboards on the right tell us about school events and clubs. Next to the classroom building is a sports field, where we play football and basketball. I often play basketball with my classmates there! The library is next to the classroom building too. It has many books, and we can borrow one for two weeks. It's my favourite place because I enjoy reading quietly there.
My school is the best place to study and have fun in my eyes!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题写作题,要求以李华的身份参加题为“I love my school”的征文活动。解题思路:1. 承接给定开头,结合图片元素描述学校的整体情况(如布局、主要场所);2. 明确最喜欢的学校场所并说明原因;3. 介绍在学校的日常活动;4. 最后总结对学校的喜爱,确保覆盖所有内容要点,语言连贯,词数符合要求,不出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
【解析】
首先承接开头点明学校名称,描述学校布局:左侧是绿草,右侧公告栏发布学校活动;教学楼旁有运动场(可开展球类运动)和图书馆(藏书丰富,可借阅两周);接着说明最喜欢图书馆的原因是能安静阅读;最后总结学校是学习和玩乐的好地方,内容完整,符合词数要求。
【答案】
I love my school
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua.
I study in Sunshine Middle School. Our school is big and nice.
When you enter it, you can see green grass on the left. Noticeboards on the right tell us about school events and clubs. Next to the classroom building is a sports field, where we play football and basketball. I often play basketball with my classmates there! The library is next to the classroom building too. It has many books, and we can borrow one for two weeks. It's my favourite place because I enjoy reading quietly there.
My school is the best place to study and have fun in my eyes!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、学校场景表达、图片信息转换
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题,全面覆盖内容要点,结合图片信息清晰描述学校布局,语言简洁连贯,符合初中英语写作规范,适合参加校园征文活动。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题为英语话题写作题,要求以李华的身份参加题为“I love my school”的征文活动。解题思路:1. 承接给定开头,结合图片元素描述学校的整体情况(如布局、主要场所);2. 明确最喜欢的学校场所并说明原因;3. 介绍在学校的日常活动;4. 最后总结对学校的喜爱,确保覆盖所有内容要点,语言连贯,词数符合要求,不出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
【解析】
首先承接开头点明学校名称,描述学校布局:左侧是绿草,右侧公告栏发布学校活动;教学楼旁有运动场(可开展球类运动)和图书馆(藏书丰富,可借阅两周);接着说明最喜欢图书馆的原因是能安静阅读;最后总结学校是学习和玩乐的好地方,内容完整,符合词数要求。
【答案】
I love my school
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua.
I study in Sunshine Middle School. Our school is big and nice.
When you enter it, you can see green grass on the left. Noticeboards on the right tell us about school events and clubs. Next to the classroom building is a sports field, where we play football and basketball. I often play basketball with my classmates there! The library is next to the classroom building too. It has many books, and we can borrow one for two weeks. It's my favourite place because I enjoy reading quietly there.
My school is the best place to study and have fun in my eyes!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、学校场景表达、图片信息转换
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题,全面覆盖内容要点,结合图片信息清晰描述学校布局,语言简洁连贯,符合初中英语写作规范,适合参加校园征文活动。
【难度系数】
0.4
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