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请你根据下表中的提示信息,写一篇英语短文介绍你的表弟 Mike。
要求:1. 短文必须包含以上所有信息,可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
3. 80 词左右。
请你根据下表中的提示信息,写一篇英语短文介绍你的表弟 Mike。
要求:1. 短文必须包含以上所有信息,可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
3. 80 词左右。
答案
This is my cousin, Mike. He is 13 years old. His birthday is 1st May. His favourite animals are pandas because they're cute. He also likes elephants because they're clever and playful. For food, he likes beef and tomato noodles and vegetable dumplings. In his free time, he likes climbing, shopping and watching films.
Last Sunday, he had a busy day. In the morning, he went to a farm and took some photos. In the afternoon, he visited some of his friends. In the evening, he did his homework and watched TV. Do you know him now? Do you want to make friends with him?
Last Sunday, he had a busy day. In the morning, he went to a farm and took some photos. In the afternoon, he visited some of his friends. In the evening, he did his homework and watched TV. Do you know him now? Do you want to make friends with him?
解析
【分析】
这是一篇介绍人物的英语短文写作题，解题思路为：1. 确定写作人称是第三人称“he”，围绕表弟Mike展开介绍；2. 梳理表格中所有信息点：年龄生日、喜欢的动物、喜欢的食物、爱好、上周日活动，确保无遗漏；3. 适当添加细节（如喜欢动物的原因）丰富内容，同时控制字数在80词左右；4. 结尾添加简单互动句，让文章更自然，符合题目要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开头点明介绍对象：This is my cousin, Mike.
2. 介绍年龄与生日：He is 13 years old. His birthday is 1st May.
3. 描述喜欢的动物及原因：His favourite animals are pandas because they're cute, and he also likes elephants because they're clever and playful.
4. 说明喜欢的食物：For food, he likes beef and tomato noodles and vegetable dumplings.
5. 介绍爱好：In his free time, he likes climbing, shopping and watching films.
6. 描述上周日活动：Last Sunday, he had a busy day. In the morning, he went to a farm and took some photos. In the afternoon, he visited some of his friends. In the evening, he did his homework and watched TV.
7. 结尾加互动句：Do you know him now? Do you want to make friends with him?
【答案】
This is my cousin, Mike. He is 13 years old. His birthday is 1st May. His favourite animals are pandas because they're cute. He also likes elephants because they're clever and playful. For food, he likes beef and tomato noodles and vegetable dumplings. In his free time, he likes climbing, shopping and watching films.
Last Sunday, he had a busy day. In the morning, he went to a farm and took some photos. In the afternoon, he visited some of his friends. In the evening, he did his homework and watched TV. Do you know him now? Do you want to make friends with him?
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作；词汇运用；句型表达
【点评】
本文完整涵盖表格所有信息，适当添加细节使内容更生动，语言通顺流畅，符合80词左右的要求，满足题目各项规定。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇介绍人物的英语短文写作题，解题思路为：1. 确定写作人称是第三人称“he”，围绕表弟Mike展开介绍；2. 梳理表格中所有信息点：年龄生日、喜欢的动物、喜欢的食物、爱好、上周日活动，确保无遗漏；3. 适当添加细节（如喜欢动物的原因）丰富内容，同时控制字数在80词左右；4. 结尾添加简单互动句，让文章更自然，符合题目要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开头点明介绍对象：This is my cousin, Mike.
2. 介绍年龄与生日：He is 13 years old. His birthday is 1st May.
3. 描述喜欢的动物及原因：His favourite animals are pandas because they're cute, and he also likes elephants because they're clever and playful.
4. 说明喜欢的食物：For food, he likes beef and tomato noodles and vegetable dumplings.
5. 介绍爱好：In his free time, he likes climbing, shopping and watching films.
6. 描述上周日活动：Last Sunday, he had a busy day. In the morning, he went to a farm and took some photos. In the afternoon, he visited some of his friends. In the evening, he did his homework and watched TV.
7. 结尾加互动句：Do you know him now? Do you want to make friends with him?
【答案】
This is my cousin, Mike. He is 13 years old. His birthday is 1st May. His favourite animals are pandas because they're cute. He also likes elephants because they're clever and playful. For food, he likes beef and tomato noodles and vegetable dumplings. In his free time, he likes climbing, shopping and watching films.
Last Sunday, he had a busy day. In the morning, he went to a farm and took some photos. In the afternoon, he visited some of his friends. In the evening, he did his homework and watched TV. Do you know him now? Do you want to make friends with him?
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作；词汇运用；句型表达
【点评】
本文完整涵盖表格所有信息，适当添加细节使内容更生动，语言通顺流畅，符合80词左右的要求，满足题目各项规定。
【难度系数】
0.6
