四、书面表达。
相信你在暑假期间一定经历了很多有趣的事情。请结合以下图示信息写一篇日记,记录你在假期中难忘的一天。

注意:1. 日记须包含图示所有信息;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
3. 词数 60 左右。
相信你在暑假期间一定经历了很多有趣的事情。请结合以下图示信息写一篇日记,记录你在假期中难忘的一天。
注意:1. 日记须包含图示所有信息;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
3. 词数 60 左右。
答案
四、评分标准:
(一)内容要点认定及分值(12分)
1. 格式(1分),开头(1分)
2. 地点、人物(每点1分,共2分),具体的事情(每点2分,共6分),事后的感受(1分)
3. 结尾(1分)
(二)行文认定及分值(3分)
参考范文:
Friday, 13 August (1分)
Today was a special day for me in this summer holiday. (1分)
My parents and I (1分) had a trip to Dujiangyan (1分). In the morning, we climbed Mount Qingcheng and saw the beautiful sight there. (2分) In the afternoon, we tried different kinds of snacks at a food street. (2分) At night, we went to enjoy the light and water at Nanqiao. (2分) We all felt tired but relaxed. (1分)
It was really a day to remember. (1分)
(一)内容要点认定及分值(12分)
1. 格式(1分),开头(1分)
2. 地点、人物(每点1分,共2分),具体的事情(每点2分,共6分),事后的感受(1分)
3. 结尾(1分)
(二)行文认定及分值(3分)
参考范文:
Friday, 13 August (1分)
Today was a special day for me in this summer holiday. (1分)
My parents and I (1分) had a trip to Dujiangyan (1分). In the morning, we climbed Mount Qingcheng and saw the beautiful sight there. (2分) In the afternoon, we tried different kinds of snacks at a food street. (2分) At night, we went to enjoy the light and water at Nanqiao. (2分) We all felt tired but relaxed. (1分)
It was really a day to remember. (1分)
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