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根据表格内容，写一篇短文发出节约能源的倡议。
【要求】
1. 内容完整，要点齐全，逻辑清晰，表达流畅。
2. 不少于90词。
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名。
根据表格内容，写一篇短文发出节约能源的倡议。
【要求】
1. 内容完整，要点齐全，逻辑清晰，表达流畅。
2. 不少于90词。
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名。
答案
One possible version
Let's save energy!
Are you ready to save energy? Everybody can do
something to help save resources. It's easy, and you only have to remember three words: save, manage, reuse.
First, let's focus on saving energy in daily life. We can save water by turning off the taps when brushing teeth. In addition, we can save energy by using public transport or riding bikes instead of driving cars.
Managing energy use is another way to live a more eco-friendly life. This cuts down on waste and saves resources. For example, we can use energy-saving lights and set air conditioners to a proper temperature.
Finally, reuse. It's all about making the most of things we have. Remember that things like glass jars, old clothes, and books can be reused. Don't forget to repair broken things too.
If we all follow these simple steps, we can save a lot of energy and enjoy a greener world!
Let's save energy!
Are you ready to save energy? Everybody can do
something to help save resources. It's easy, and you only have to remember three words: save, manage, reuse.
First, let's focus on saving energy in daily life. We can save water by turning off the taps when brushing teeth. In addition, we can save energy by using public transport or riding bikes instead of driving cars.
Managing energy use is another way to live a more eco-friendly life. This cuts down on waste and saves resources. For example, we can use energy-saving lights and set air conditioners to a proper temperature.
Finally, reuse. It's all about making the most of things we have. Remember that things like glass jars, old clothes, and books can be reused. Don't forget to repair broken things too.
If we all follow these simple steps, we can save a lot of energy and enjoy a greener world!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先明确文体是节约能源主题的倡议书，核心要求是覆盖表格全部要点、字数达标。你可以按这个思路梳理行文逻辑：开篇先点明节约能源的重要性，自然引出表格给出的三个核心行动关键词：节约、管理、重复利用；之后分三个模块分别对应三个行动，每个模块先把表格给出的具体示例自然融入，再补充对应的节能意义，用逻辑连接词串联内容让条理更清晰；最后结尾发出共同践行的呼吁，同时检查有没有遗漏要点、有没有出现真实信息，确认字数满足不少于90词的要求即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：用设问句引出倡议主题，点明节约能源人人都可以出力，直接点出三个核心行动词save、manage、reuse，快速切入主题。
2. 第一部分对应“节约(save)”模块：依次写出刷牙时关水龙头、优先选择公共交通或骑行的两个示例，点明这类做法可以减少日常能源消耗，降低资源浪费，匹配表格给出的意义要求。
3. 第二部分对应“管理(manage)”模块：写出使用节能灯具、将空调调至适宜温度的示例，点明这类做法可以减少不必要的能源损耗，提升能源利用效率，践行环保生活。
4. 第三部分对应“重复利用(reuse)”模块：写出重复使用玻璃罐、旧衣物、书籍，维修破损物品的示例，点明这类做法可以最大化利用现有物品，减少资源浪费。
5. 结尾收尾：发出呼吁，说明所有人一起践行简单的举措，就能节约大量能源，收获更绿色的世界，完成倡议的收尾，整体要点全覆盖，字数远超90词，符合所有写作要求。
【答案】
One possible version
Let's save energy!
Are you ready to save energy? Everybody can do something to help save resources. It's easy, and you only have to remember three words: save, manage, reuse.
First, let's focus on saving energy in daily life. We can save water by turning off the taps when brushing teeth. In addition, we can save energy by using public transport or riding bikes instead of driving cars.
Managing energy use is another way to live a more eco-friendly life. This cuts down on waste and saves resources. For example, we can use energy-saving lights and set air conditioners to a proper temperature.
Finally, reuse. It's all about making the most of things we have. Remember that things like glass jars, old clothes, and books can be reused. Don't forget to repair broken things too.
If we all follow these simple steps, we can save a lot of energy and enjoy a greener world!
【知识点】
英语倡议书写作
环保主题表达
语篇逻辑衔接
【点评】
本题是典型的提示类初中英语应用文写作，既考察学生的英语书面表达能力，也渗透了节能环保的德育引导。参考范文结构清晰完整，所有表格给出的示例、意义要点都没有遗漏，用递进逻辑连接词串联三个核心行动，行文流畅自然，语气符合倡议书的号召属性，学生写作时注意不要遗漏给定要点，合理使用衔接词就能拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题，首先明确文体是节约能源主题的倡议书，核心要求是覆盖表格全部要点、字数达标。你可以按这个思路梳理行文逻辑：开篇先点明节约能源的重要性，自然引出表格给出的三个核心行动关键词：节约、管理、重复利用；之后分三个模块分别对应三个行动，每个模块先把表格给出的具体示例自然融入，再补充对应的节能意义，用逻辑连接词串联内容让条理更清晰；最后结尾发出共同践行的呼吁，同时检查有没有遗漏要点、有没有出现真实信息，确认字数满足不少于90词的要求即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：用设问句引出倡议主题，点明节约能源人人都可以出力，直接点出三个核心行动词save、manage、reuse，快速切入主题。
2. 第一部分对应“节约(save)”模块：依次写出刷牙时关水龙头、优先选择公共交通或骑行的两个示例，点明这类做法可以减少日常能源消耗，降低资源浪费，匹配表格给出的意义要求。
3. 第二部分对应“管理(manage)”模块：写出使用节能灯具、将空调调至适宜温度的示例，点明这类做法可以减少不必要的能源损耗，提升能源利用效率，践行环保生活。
4. 第三部分对应“重复利用(reuse)”模块：写出重复使用玻璃罐、旧衣物、书籍，维修破损物品的示例，点明这类做法可以最大化利用现有物品，减少资源浪费。
5. 结尾收尾：发出呼吁，说明所有人一起践行简单的举措，就能节约大量能源，收获更绿色的世界，完成倡议的收尾，整体要点全覆盖，字数远超90词，符合所有写作要求。
【答案】
One possible version
Let's save energy!
Are you ready to save energy? Everybody can do something to help save resources. It's easy, and you only have to remember three words: save, manage, reuse.
First, let's focus on saving energy in daily life. We can save water by turning off the taps when brushing teeth. In addition, we can save energy by using public transport or riding bikes instead of driving cars.
Managing energy use is another way to live a more eco-friendly life. This cuts down on waste and saves resources. For example, we can use energy-saving lights and set air conditioners to a proper temperature.
Finally, reuse. It's all about making the most of things we have. Remember that things like glass jars, old clothes, and books can be reused. Don't forget to repair broken things too.
If we all follow these simple steps, we can save a lot of energy and enjoy a greener world!
【知识点】
英语倡议书写作
环保主题表达
语篇逻辑衔接
【点评】
本题是典型的提示类初中英语应用文写作，既考察学生的英语书面表达能力，也渗透了节能环保的德育引导。参考范文结构清晰完整，所有表格给出的示例、意义要点都没有遗漏，用递进逻辑连接词串联三个核心行动，行文流畅自然，语气符合倡议书的号召属性，学生写作时注意不要遗漏给定要点，合理使用衔接词就能拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
