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九、书面表达(满分20分)
假如你是李华,新的学期已经过去一半了。请你写一封电子邮件给你的美国笔友John,告诉他你近阶段的学习和生活情况,以及接下来的计划。提示如下:
要求:1. 90词左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
2. 书写认真,卷面整洁、美观;3. 内容完整并适当发挥;全文连贯、通顺;4. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear John,
How time flies! Half of the term has passed since we wrote to each other last time. I'd like to share something that has happened and my future plans with you.
So much for my sharing. Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,新的学期已经过去一半了。请你写一封电子邮件给你的美国笔友John,告诉他你近阶段的学习和生活情况,以及接下来的计划。提示如下:
要求:1. 90词左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
2. 书写认真,卷面整洁、美观;3. 内容完整并适当发挥;全文连贯、通顺;4. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear John,
How time flies! Half of the term has passed since we wrote to each other last time. I'd like to share something that has happened and my future plans with you.
So much for my sharing. Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear John,
How time flies! Half of the term has passed since we wrote to each other last time. I'd like to share something that has happened and my future plans with you.
During the winter holiday, I stayed in my hometown for two weeks. Great changes have taken place there—people used to listen to the radio or watch TV in their free time, but now most families have computers and the internet, and mobile phones make communication easier.
Now I have learnt to use computers for word processing. I love travelling because I find travelling can help me learn about the world and enjoy the beauty of nature, and I am interested in reading books about Chinese history.
For the summer holiday, I plan to travel to Beijing, read more kinds of books, keep studying hard and help my mum with the housework.
So much for my sharing. Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件。②时态:现在完成时、一般过去时和一般现在时。③提示:根据提示从过去、现在和未来三个方面进行介绍,并注意用不同的时态叙述;写作要点已经给出,不要遗漏,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据提示介绍过去的生活情况;第二步,介绍现在的情况;第三步,介绍接下来的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生 ②used to do sth过去常常做某事
③be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
I love travelling because I find travelling can help me learn about the world and enjoy the beauty of nature. because引导原因状语从句
Dear John,
How time flies! Half of the term has passed since we wrote to each other last time. I'd like to share something that has happened and my future plans with you.
During the winter holiday, I stayed in my hometown for two weeks. Great changes have taken place there—people used to listen to the radio or watch TV in their free time, but now most families have computers and the internet, and mobile phones make communication easier.
Now I have learnt to use computers for word processing. I love travelling because I find travelling can help me learn about the world and enjoy the beauty of nature, and I am interested in reading books about Chinese history.
For the summer holiday, I plan to travel to Beijing, read more kinds of books, keep studying hard and help my mum with the housework.
So much for my sharing. Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件。②时态:现在完成时、一般过去时和一般现在时。③提示:根据提示从过去、现在和未来三个方面进行介绍,并注意用不同的时态叙述;写作要点已经给出,不要遗漏,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据提示介绍过去的生活情况;第二步,介绍现在的情况;第三步,介绍接下来的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生 ②used to do sth过去常常做某事
③be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
I love travelling because I find travelling can help me learn about the world and enjoy the beauty of nature. because引导原因状语从句
解析
【分析】这是一封写给美国笔友的电子邮件，需围绕“过去的寒假生活、当前的学习生活状态、未来的假期计划”三个核心内容展开写作。首先要明确各部分对应的时态：过去的经历用一般过去时，现在的情况用一般现在时，未来的计划用一般将来时或plan to do结构；需覆盖提示的所有要点，适当补充细节让内容连贯，词数控制在90左右，符合书信格式要求。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 介绍过去的寒假：用一般过去时，说明在家乡待了两周，补充家乡变化的细节（如通讯方式的改变，过去和现在的对比）；2. 介绍现在的情况：用一般现在时，说明学会电脑文字处理，说明喜欢旅游的原因（帮助了解世界、欣赏自然），说明热爱阅读的内容（中国历史相关书籍）；3. 介绍未来计划：用plan to do结构，补充旅游、多读书、帮妈妈做家务等内容；写作中适当使用亮点词汇（如take place, used to do, be interested in）和原因状语从句，确保语句通顺、内容完整。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear John,
How time flies! Half of the term has passed since we wrote to each other last time. I'd like to share something that has happened and my future plans with you.
During the winter holiday, I stayed in my hometown for two weeks. Great changes have taken place there—people used to listen to the radio or watch TV in their free time, but now most families have computers and the internet, and mobile phones make communication easier.
Now I have learnt to use computers for word processing. I love travelling because I find travelling can help me learn about the world and enjoy the beauty of nature, and I am interested in reading books about Chinese history.
For the summer holiday, I plan to travel to Beijing, read more kinds of books, keep studying hard and help my mum with the housework.
So much for my sharing. Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】电子邮件写作、时态运用、原因状语从句
【点评】本文符合电子邮件的写作规范，内容完整覆盖提示要点，时态使用准确恰当，适当补充细节使内容连贯，语句通顺自然，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1. 介绍过去的寒假：用一般过去时，说明在家乡待了两周，补充家乡变化的细节（如通讯方式的改变，过去和现在的对比）；2. 介绍现在的情况：用一般现在时，说明学会电脑文字处理，说明喜欢旅游的原因（帮助了解世界、欣赏自然），说明热爱阅读的内容（中国历史相关书籍）；3. 介绍未来计划：用plan to do结构，补充旅游、多读书、帮妈妈做家务等内容；写作中适当使用亮点词汇（如take place, used to do, be interested in）和原因状语从句，确保语句通顺、内容完整。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear John,
How time flies! Half of the term has passed since we wrote to each other last time. I'd like to share something that has happened and my future plans with you.
During the winter holiday, I stayed in my hometown for two weeks. Great changes have taken place there—people used to listen to the radio or watch TV in their free time, but now most families have computers and the internet, and mobile phones make communication easier.
Now I have learnt to use computers for word processing. I love travelling because I find travelling can help me learn about the world and enjoy the beauty of nature, and I am interested in reading books about Chinese history.
For the summer holiday, I plan to travel to Beijing, read more kinds of books, keep studying hard and help my mum with the housework.
So much for my sharing. Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】电子邮件写作、时态运用、原因状语从句
【点评】本文符合电子邮件的写作规范，内容完整覆盖提示要点，时态使用准确恰当，适当补充细节使内容连贯，语句通顺自然，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达范文。
【难度系数】0.6
