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生态破坏导致多种野生动植物濒临灭绝(extinction)。为此，某英语杂志社开展以“爱护地球，守卫家园”为主题的征文活动。请你来说一说，我们应采取哪些措施来保护生态并说明理由。
要求:80~100词，已给出部分(范文画线部分)不计入总词数。

Protect the Earth, Guard Our Home
Now lots of wild plants and animals are in danger of extinction because of environmental damage. We must take action to protect our ecosystem.
First, we can plant more trees, because forests are home for wild animals and they help improve the environment. Second, we'd better go out by bus or bike instead of driving, to reduce pollution and make the planet fit for all lives. Third, never buy wildlife products, so that illegal hunting will disappear.
Small actions can make a big difference. Let's work together to guard our only home.

【分析】首先明确征文主题为“爱护地球，守卫家园”，需围绕生态保护措施及对应理由展开，字数控制在80-100词。解题思路：1. 开头点明野生动植物濒危的现状，引出保护生态的必要性；2. 分点列举具体保护措施并说明理由；3. 结尾发出呼吁，升华主题，确保内容紧扣要求、结构清晰。
【解析】按照征文要求，紧扣主题搭建结构：开头点出现状，中间分述植树、绿色出行、拒买野生动植物制品三类措施及对应理由，结尾发出呼吁，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求。
【答案】Protect the Earth, Guard Our Home
Now lots of wild plants and animals are in danger of extinction because of environmental damage. We must take action to protect our ecosystem.
First, we can plant more trees, because forests are home for wild animals and they help improve the environment. Second, we'd better go out by bus or bike instead of driving, to reduce pollution and make the planet fit for all lives. Third, never buy wildlife products, so that illegal hunting will disappear.
Small actions can make a big difference. Let's work together to guard our only home.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、生态保护话题表达
【点评】本次征文紧扣主题，措施具体可行，理由充分合理，结构清晰明了，语言简洁流畅，符合征文的字数和内容要求，有效传达了保护生态的理念。
【难度系数】0.6

素材积累 ＞＞
[开头句]
1. The panda is a Chinese national treasure. （地位）
2. Our school held a lecture on how to protect wild animals. （主题）
[中间句]
1. Farmers returned part of their farmland to the forests. （措施）
2. They planted trees and bamboo, so pandas could have more space and food. （措施）
[结尾句]
Let's take action now and do our best to do something to protect our planet! （发出号召）
[名言警句]
Water is the source of life, and trees are the root of life.
水是生命之源，树是生命之根。
写作演练 ＞＞
假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“保护濒危动物”的宣传活动，你们班的美国留学生Tom给你发邮件询问相关事情，请用英文回复一封不少于80词的邮件，告知他相关事宜。
[思路点拨]
1. 体裁:记叙文;2. 人称:第一人称;3. 时态:一般现在时。
[写作提纲]

[妙笔生花]
Dear Tom,






Yours,
Li Hua
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)

One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you some information about our speech on protecting animals in danger.
Many animals are in danger, such as tigers, elephants and pandas. They face threats because people hunt them for fur or ivory and their habitats are taken away by deforestation or pollution. This makes them lose their homes and food. To protect them, we should stop illegal hunting and build more nature parks for safe living areas. Also, we can raise money to help wildlife groups.
I hope you can join us and share your views. Let's work together to save these animals!
Yours,
Li Hua

【分析】本题要求以李华的身份给美国留学生Tom写英文邮件，回复他关于学校“保护濒危动物”宣传活动的询问。需遵循邮件格式，采用第一人称、一般现在时，结构分为三部分：开篇点明写信主题（告知学校保护濒危动物的演讲相关事宜）；主体阐述濒危动物的现状（举例说明濒危动物及面临的威胁）与保护措施；结尾表达愿望，邀请Tom参与并发出号召，确保内容连贯、符合字数要求。
【解析】1. 开篇：直接点明写信目的，说明要告知关于保护濒危动物的演讲相关信息，对应思维导图的开篇引入；2. 主体：列举濒危动物（如老虎、大象、熊猫），说明它们面临的威胁（非法捕猎、栖息地被破坏），再提出保护措施（禁止非法捕猎、建自然公园、筹钱帮助野生动物组织），对应思维导图的文章主体；3. 结尾：表达希望Tom加入的愿望，呼吁共同努力，对应思维导图的表达愿望，同时符合邮件的礼貌性与号召力。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you some information about our speech on protecting animals in danger.
Many animals are in danger, such as tigers, elephants and pandas. They face threats because people hunt them for fur or ivory and their habitats are taken away by deforestation or pollution. This makes them lose their homes and food. To protect them, we should stop illegal hunting and build more nature parks for safe living areas. Also, we can raise money to help wildlife groups.
I hope you can join us and share your views. Let's work together to save these animals!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语邮件写作、濒危动物话题表达
【点评】本文严格遵循邮件格式，结构清晰，涵盖题目要求的所有要点，语言准确流畅，符合字数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.5