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主题语境:人与自我——未来畅想
写作题目:
请你根据下面表格中的信息,写一篇英语短文,介绍自己 10 年之后的变化。
要求:1.内容包含表格中所有信息,可适当拓展。
2.词数 80 左右。
Step 1.辨模式(Patterns)——辨识特征 列纲建模
1.辨人称: 第一人称
2.辨时态: 一般现在时
3.辨核心:个人信息,对未来的计划、打算
Step 2.明实例(Examples)——润色成篇 典例示范
In ten years, I will be 24 years old. I will be① a doctor. ②I will work in Shanghai because it is a big and beautiful city. I really loved it when I visited it last year. In ten years, I will travel around the world because I like to travel. I don't like living alone, so I'll live in the apartment with my best friend. I like keeping animals, so I'll have many different animals. ③I'm sure I will have a more wonderful life in ten years.
续表
范文点评:
本文要点全面,叙事条理,具体优点有:
①开篇点题,直接点明对未来的打算。
②运用 I'll. . . , because/ I like. . . 。
③表明自己对未来的希望。
写作题目:
请你根据下面表格中的信息,写一篇英语短文,介绍自己 10 年之后的变化。
要求:1.内容包含表格中所有信息,可适当拓展。
2.词数 80 左右。
Step 1.辨模式(Patterns)——辨识特征 列纲建模
1.辨人称: 第一人称
2.辨时态: 一般现在时
3.辨核心:个人信息,对未来的计划、打算
Step 2.明实例(Examples)——润色成篇 典例示范
In ten years, I will be 24 years old. I will be① a doctor. ②I will work in Shanghai because it is a big and beautiful city. I really loved it when I visited it last year. In ten years, I will travel around the world because I like to travel. I don't like living alone, so I'll live in the apartment with my best friend. I like keeping animals, so I'll have many different animals. ③I'm sure I will have a more wonderful life in ten years.
续表
范文点评:
本文要点全面,叙事条理,具体优点有:
①开篇点题,直接点明对未来的打算。
②运用 I'll. . . , because/ I like. . . 。
③表明自己对未来的希望。
答案
In ten years, I will be 24 years old. I will be a doctor. I will work in Shanghai because it is a big and beautiful modern city. I fell in love with it when I travelled there last year. I like visiting different places, so I will travel around the world if I have free time. I don't want to live alone, so I will live in a nice apartment with my best friend. I'm sure I will have a wonderful and happy life in ten years.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务是介绍10年后的自己，需遵循要求：1. 确定人称用第一人称，时态用一般将来时（描述未来计划）；2. 梳理核心要点：年龄、职业、工作地点及原因、旅行计划、居住情况；3. 按照“开篇点题-分述要点-总结展望”的结构组织内容，适当拓展细节，控制词数在80左右，确保覆盖所有要求信息。
【解析】按照写作结构，先开篇点明10年后的年龄与职业：In ten years, I will be 24 years old. I will be a doctor. 接着说明工作地点及原因：I will work in Shanghai because it is a big and beautiful modern city. I fell in love with it when I travelled there last year. 然后讲旅行计划：I like visiting different places, so I will travel around the world if I have free time. 再说明居住情况：I don't want to live alone, so I will live in a nice apartment with my best friend. 最后总结展望：I'm sure I will have a wonderful and happy life in ten years. 既覆盖所有要点，又符合词数要求，语句通顺。
【答案】In ten years, I will be 24 years old. I will be a doctor. I will work in Shanghai because it is a big and beautiful modern city. I fell in love with it when I travelled there last year. I like visiting different places, so I will travel around the world if I have free time. I don't want to live alone, so I will live in a nice apartment with my best friend. I'm sure I will have a wonderful and happy life in ten years.
【知识点】英语短文写作、一般将来时运用、未来主题写作
【点评】本文要点全面，条理清晰，准确运用一般将来时描述未来计划，通过连接词使语句连贯，符合写作要求，词数恰当，是一篇符合标准的英语短文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照写作结构，先开篇点明10年后的年龄与职业：In ten years, I will be 24 years old. I will be a doctor. 接着说明工作地点及原因：I will work in Shanghai because it is a big and beautiful modern city. I fell in love with it when I travelled there last year. 然后讲旅行计划：I like visiting different places, so I will travel around the world if I have free time. 再说明居住情况：I don't want to live alone, so I will live in a nice apartment with my best friend. 最后总结展望：I'm sure I will have a wonderful and happy life in ten years. 既覆盖所有要点，又符合词数要求，语句通顺。
【答案】In ten years, I will be 24 years old. I will be a doctor. I will work in Shanghai because it is a big and beautiful modern city. I fell in love with it when I travelled there last year. I like visiting different places, so I will travel around the world if I have free time. I don't want to live alone, so I will live in a nice apartment with my best friend. I'm sure I will have a wonderful and happy life in ten years.
【知识点】英语短文写作、一般将来时运用、未来主题写作
【点评】本文要点全面，条理清晰，准确运用一般将来时描述未来计划，通过连接词使语句连贯，符合写作要求，词数恰当，是一篇符合标准的英语短文。
【难度系数】0.6
Step 3. 会实践(Practice)——迁移创新 实战演练
(2024·武汉中考)
本周英语课学习围绕主题“Tomorrow’s Life”展开。请你根据以下提示问题从生活、工作、家庭等方面，写一篇英语作文，描绘25年后你的生活。
1. Where do you want to live and work?
2. What will your family be like?
3. How are you going to spend your free time?
4. Something more about your future life.
要求：
1. 必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4. 词数不少于80；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My life will be very different in 25 years.
(2024·武汉中考)
本周英语课学习围绕主题“Tomorrow’s Life”展开。请你根据以下提示问题从生活、工作、家庭等方面，写一篇英语作文，描绘25年后你的生活。
1. Where do you want to live and work?
2. What will your family be like?
3. How are you going to spend your free time?
4. Something more about your future life.
要求：
1. 必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4. 词数不少于80；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My life will be very different in 25 years.
I think I'll be a reporter in Beijing. I will live in an apartment with my sister because I don't like living alone. And I can play with her in my apartment. My parents will travel around the world and enjoy themselves.
I will meet a lot of interesting and famous people and I will go to another place on business. I will have many different pets. Maybe I will keep a pet turtle.
I think I will go shopping with my sister and do some reading as long as I have time. And I will go to London on my vacation.
I'll work hard to achieve my dream. I'm sure my life in 25 years will be better and better!
答案
My life will be very different in 25 years. I think I'll be a reporter in Beijing. I will live in an apartment with my sister because I don't like living alone. And I can play with her in my apartment. My parents will travel around the world and enjoy themselves. I will meet a lot of interesting and famous people and I will go to another place on business. I will have many different pets. Maybe I will keep a pet turtle. I think I will go shopping with my sister and do some reading as long as I have time. And I will go to London on my vacation.
I'll work hard to achieve my dream. I'm sure my life in 25 years will be better and better!
I'll work hard to achieve my dream. I'm sure my life in 25 years will be better and better!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题作文题，主题是“Tomorrow’s Life”，要求从生活、工作、家庭等方面描绘25年后的生活，需覆盖4个提示要点，使用一般将来时，语句通顺、语法正确，不得出现真实信息，词数不少于80。解题思路：先确定未来的职业、居住与工作地点；再构思家庭情况；接着安排空闲时间的活动；最后补充其他细节，确保内容连贯，符合写作要求。
【解析】
开头已给出，按提示要点展开写作：1. 工作与居住：设定职业为记者，工作地点在北京，和姐姐住公寓（不喜欢独居）；2. 家庭：父母环游世界，自己养宠物乌龟；3. 空闲时间：和姐姐购物、读书；4. 其他：出差见名人、去伦敦度假，最后表达对未来的期待，确保语句通顺，语法正确，符合要求。
【答案】
My life will be very different in 25 years. I think I'll be a reporter in Beijing. I will live in an apartment with my sister because I don't like living alone. And I can play with her in my apartment. My parents will travel around the world and enjoy themselves. I will meet a lot of interesting and famous people and I will go to another place on business. I will have many different pets. Maybe I will keep a pet turtle. I think I will go shopping with my sister and do some reading as long as I have time. And I will go to London on my vacation.
I'll work hard to achieve my dream. I'm sure my life in 25 years will be better and better!
【知识点】
英语话题作文、一般将来时运用、要点式写作
【点评】
本题为中考常见话题作文，贴近学生生活，考查学生的想象能力与语言组织能力，要求紧扣提示要点，使用正确时态完成写作，难度适中，需注意语法规范与内容连贯。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语话题作文题，主题是“Tomorrow’s Life”，要求从生活、工作、家庭等方面描绘25年后的生活，需覆盖4个提示要点，使用一般将来时，语句通顺、语法正确，不得出现真实信息，词数不少于80。解题思路：先确定未来的职业、居住与工作地点；再构思家庭情况；接着安排空闲时间的活动；最后补充其他细节，确保内容连贯，符合写作要求。
【解析】
开头已给出，按提示要点展开写作：1. 工作与居住：设定职业为记者，工作地点在北京，和姐姐住公寓（不喜欢独居）；2. 家庭：父母环游世界，自己养宠物乌龟；3. 空闲时间：和姐姐购物、读书；4. 其他：出差见名人、去伦敦度假，最后表达对未来的期待，确保语句通顺，语法正确，符合要求。
【答案】
My life will be very different in 25 years. I think I'll be a reporter in Beijing. I will live in an apartment with my sister because I don't like living alone. And I can play with her in my apartment. My parents will travel around the world and enjoy themselves. I will meet a lot of interesting and famous people and I will go to another place on business. I will have many different pets. Maybe I will keep a pet turtle. I think I will go shopping with my sister and do some reading as long as I have time. And I will go to London on my vacation.
I'll work hard to achieve my dream. I'm sure my life in 25 years will be better and better!
【知识点】
英语话题作文、一般将来时运用、要点式写作
【点评】
本题为中考常见话题作文，贴近学生生活，考查学生的想象能力与语言组织能力，要求紧扣提示要点，使用正确时态完成写作，难度适中，需注意语法规范与内容连贯。
【难度系数】
0.5
