随着科技的进步,网络走进了学生们的生活,但它带给学生们巨大便利的同时,也有不利的一面。
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请根据提示介绍网络的优势和弊端,并且给出使用建议。要求:80词以上。
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参考词汇:convenience, become addicted to (沉迷于……)





开头 引入话题 The Internet has become . It brings us not only a lot of convenience and happiness but also some troubles.（高分句式1）
中间 介绍网络的利弊 Some students use the Internet as a tool for . When they learn English, the Internet helps them a lot.（高分句式2） They also through it.
However, some students . It is harmful .
结尾 表达自己的看法 It is clear that the Internet has both advantages and disadvantages.（高分句式3） I think we should .
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The Internet has become an important part of students' lives. It brings us not only a lot of convenience and happiness but also some troubles.¹
Some students use the Internet as a tool for studying. When they learn English², the Internet helps them a lot. They also read news and send and receive emails through it. However, some students become addicted to³ chatting and playing games. Besides, it is harmful for students to watch bad films.³ Sitting in front of computers for too long is also bad for students' eyesight.³
It is clear that the Internet has both advantages and disadvantages.³ I think we should use it correctly².

The Internet has become an important part of students' lives. It brings us not only a lot of convenience and happiness but also some troubles.
Some students use the Internet as a tool for studying. When they learn English, the Internet helps them a lot. They also read news and send and receive emails through it. However, some students become addicted to chatting and playing games. Besides, it is harmful for students to watch bad films. Sitting in front of computers for too long is also bad for students' eyesight.
It is clear that the Internet has both advantages and disadvantages. I think we should use it correctly.

【分析】
本题为英语话题说明文写作题，解题思路如下：1. 审题：明确主题为网络对学生的利弊及使用建议，要求用一般现在时、词数80词以上，需用到参考词汇convenience、become addicted to；2. 定结构：采用“引入话题→阐述利弊→给出建议”的三段式结构；3. 填内容：结合提示的高分句式，补充具体细节（如利处的学习用途、弊处的沉迷及不良影响），确保语言准确流畅。
【解析】
按照审题确定的结构，结合提示的句式和参考词汇，填充内容形成完整作文：开头用高分句式点明网络在学生生活中的地位及利弊；中间分述利（作为学习工具辅助英语学习，还可获取新闻、收发邮件）和弊（部分学生沉迷聊天、游戏，接触不良影片，久坐影响视力）；结尾提出正确使用网络的建议，符合所有要求。
【答案】
The Internet has become an important part of students' lives. It brings us not only a lot of convenience and happiness but also some troubles.
Some students use the Internet as a tool for studying. When they learn English, the Internet helps them a lot. They also read news and send and receive emails through it. However, some students become addicted to chatting and playing games. Besides, it is harmful for students to watch bad films. Sitting in front of computers for too long is also bad for students' eyesight.
It is clear that the Internet has both advantages and disadvantages. I think we should use it correctly.
【知识点】
英语话题说明文写作；一般现在时运用；核心词汇运用
【点评】
本文结构清晰，紧扣主题，准确运用参考词汇，符合一般现在时要求，完整覆盖网络的利弊及使用建议，语言流畅，满足题目各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.5