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51. 下周你校英语俱乐部将举行 “How to Be a Wise Learner” 主题活动。请你根据以下提示分享自己的学习经历和建议。
提示：（1）Your experience：
have trouble doing homework
ask teachers for help
…
（2）Your advice for club members：
develop good learning habits
…
注意：（1）短文须包括所有提示信息（含两处补充内容），可适当发挥；
（2）词数80个左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hi guys,
Today I’m very glad to share my experience of becoming a wise learner.
Thank you.
提示：（1）Your experience：
have trouble doing homework
ask teachers for help
…
（2）Your advice for club members：
develop good learning habits
…
注意：（1）短文须包括所有提示信息（含两处补充内容），可适当发挥；
（2）词数80个左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hi guys,
Today I’m very glad to share my experience of becoming a wise learner.
Thank you.
答案
51. 范文：
Hi guys,
Today I'm very glad to share my experience of becoming a wise learner. I once had trouble doing my homework, which made me feel upset and frustrated. Luckily, my teachers gave me much help and careful encouragement. I learned to take notes carefully and review lessons in time. At last, I made much progress step by step.
To be wise learners, I think we should develop good learning habits. We also need to manage time wisely and stay determined, never giving up when facing difficulties. I believe we will all improve a lot through effort.
Thank you.
Hi guys,
Today I'm very glad to share my experience of becoming a wise learner. I once had trouble doing my homework, which made me feel upset and frustrated. Luckily, my teachers gave me much help and careful encouragement. I learned to take notes carefully and review lessons in time. At last, I made much progress step by step.
To be wise learners, I think we should develop good learning habits. We also need to manage time wisely and stay determined, never giving up when facing difficulties. I believe we will all improve a lot through effort.
Thank you.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题应用文写作，要求围绕“How to Be a Wise Learner”主题，结合自身学习经历（需包含“做作业有困难、向老师求助”）和给俱乐部成员的建议（需包含“养成良好学习习惯”），适当补充内容，词数80左右，开头、结尾已给出。解题思路：1. 先梳理写作结构，分两部分展开：第一部分分享个人学习经历，点明遇到的困难、求助过程及后续改变；第二部分提出合理的学习建议；2. 确保覆盖所有提示信息，补充细节使内容连贯；3. 注意语言通顺，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
首先衔接开头，讲述个人经历：说明自己曾有做作业的困难，感到沮丧，向老师求助后，学会记笔记、及时复习，逐步取得进步；接着提出建议：除养成良好学习习惯外，补充合理建议（如合理管理时间、遇到困难不放弃），最后收尾。写作时需注意用词准确，语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Hi guys,
Today I'm very glad to share my experience of becoming a wise learner. I once had trouble doing my homework, which made me feel upset and frustrated. Luckily, my teachers gave me much help and careful encouragement. I learned to take notes carefully and review lessons in time. At last, I made much progress step by step.
To be wise learners, I think we should develop good learning habits. We also need to manage time wisely and stay determined, never giving up when facing difficulties. I believe we will all improve a lot through effort.
Thank you.
【知识点】
英语话题作文、英语应用文写作、学习类话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，先分享个人学习经历再给出针对性建议，覆盖了所有提示信息，语言通顺流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合题目要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语话题应用文写作，要求围绕“How to Be a Wise Learner”主题，结合自身学习经历（需包含“做作业有困难、向老师求助”）和给俱乐部成员的建议（需包含“养成良好学习习惯”），适当补充内容，词数80左右，开头、结尾已给出。解题思路：1. 先梳理写作结构，分两部分展开：第一部分分享个人学习经历，点明遇到的困难、求助过程及后续改变；第二部分提出合理的学习建议；2. 确保覆盖所有提示信息，补充细节使内容连贯；3. 注意语言通顺，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
首先衔接开头，讲述个人经历：说明自己曾有做作业的困难，感到沮丧，向老师求助后，学会记笔记、及时复习，逐步取得进步；接着提出建议：除养成良好学习习惯外，补充合理建议（如合理管理时间、遇到困难不放弃），最后收尾。写作时需注意用词准确，语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Hi guys,
Today I'm very glad to share my experience of becoming a wise learner. I once had trouble doing my homework, which made me feel upset and frustrated. Luckily, my teachers gave me much help and careful encouragement. I learned to take notes carefully and review lessons in time. At last, I made much progress step by step.
To be wise learners, I think we should develop good learning habits. We also need to manage time wisely and stay determined, never giving up when facing difficulties. I believe we will all improve a lot through effort.
Thank you.
【知识点】
英语话题作文、英语应用文写作、学习类话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，先分享个人学习经历再给出针对性建议，覆盖了所有提示信息，语言通顺流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合题目要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
