写作例析
太空是浩瀚的、神秘的。人类对宇宙一直不断地探索。请根据你所学的太空知识，发表一个演讲，描述一下你心目中的宇宙。再结合你自己的感想，向同学们说说你未来的打算。
内容包括：1. What is the universe like?
2. What achievements have scientists and Chinese astronauts made in space exploration?
3. What are your future plans?
作文要求：语句连贯，词数不少于80。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everybody! It's my turn to tell you something about space.
[审题指导]1. 体裁:应用文
2. 话题:航天与航空
3. 人称:以第一人称、第三人称为主
4. 时态:以一般现在时和现在完成时为主
[思路构建]

[精彩范文]
Hello, everybody! It's my turn to tell you something about space. As you know, the universe is very large. There are many galaxies in the universe. For example, a galaxy has billions of stars. The sun is one of them in the solar system. The earth goes around the sun, and the moon goes around the earth.
So far, scientists have done a lot of research about space. Especially, our Chinese astronauts have been to space many times. We have built a great space station. Now, they are working in our own space station.
I am very proud of our country. So I will study hard. I will be an astronaut in the future. What about you?
高分点评：文章结构清楚，思路清晰； 灵活运用了一些短语，比如as you know, for example, billions of, so far, be proud of, in the future, 为文章添彩；最后以 "What about you?" 收尾，既呼应了演讲的互动场景，也能带动听众思考。

Hello, everybody! It's my turn to tell you something about space. As you know, the universe is very large and mysterious. There are a great many galaxies in the whole universe. For example, a common galaxy has billions of bright stars. The sun is just one of the stars in our solar system. The earth travels around the sun all the time, and the moon is always moving around our planet, the earth.
So far, scientists from different countries have done plenty of research on outer space and got lots of new findings. Especially, our Chinese astronauts have been sent into space to finish different tasks many times. We Chinese have built our own independent space station successfully, and now our astronauts are carrying out all kinds of scientific experiments there.
I feel so proud of the great progress our country has made. So I decide to learn science and math well from now on. I will try my best to be an excellent astronaut in the future, and I hope I can walk in the vast space and explore more unknown secrets one day. What about your dream?

1. 审题：本题要求写一篇太空主题的演讲稿，属于应用文范畴，需要覆盖三个指定内容要点：描述宇宙的特征、介绍航天探索相关成就、说明个人未来规划，行文以第一、第三人称为主，主要使用一般现在时和现在完成时，词数不少于80，题干给出的开头不计入总词数。
2. 谋篇：全文可分为三个层次：第一层承接开头介绍宇宙浩瀚广袤的特点，列举星系、太阳系、地月运行规律等基础天文常识，完成第一个要点的表述；第二层用现在完成时介绍人类太空探索的研究进展，重点突出中国航天取得的标志性成果，完成第二个要点的表述；第三层抒发个人感想，说明自己未来的努力方向和理想，完成第三个要点的表述，最后用互动问句收尾，贴合演讲的交流场景。
3. 表达：可以灵活运用as you know、billions of、so far、be proud of等课内重点短语，让行文更流畅自然。

实战演练
2025 年 4 月 24 日,神舟二十号发射成功。
2025 年 8 月 15 日,神舟二十号航天员乘组圆满完成第三次出舱活动。这说明我国的载人航天技术获得了突飞猛进的发展,为人类探索太空做出了巨大的贡献。请你以“My Space Dream”为题写一篇英语短文。词数不少于 80。
内容包括: 1. 你拥有怎样的太空梦;
2. 你想登上哪个星球,你会在这个星球做什么;
3. 你的感想如何。
My Space Dream

My Space Dream
Ever since I was a child, I've been attracted by the stars and the mysterious universe. Even today, every time I watch the sky at night, I imagine what is happening among billions of stars.
I hope to be an astronaut in the future so that I can walk in space. I want to walk on Mars and meet alien life there. Besides, I want to feed animals there.
I know it's not easy to be an astronaut, so I study hard and try to learn more about space in order to be a good astronaut.
【思路分析】第一段:描述自己的太空梦;第二段介绍自己想去的星球以及想做的事;最后一段:表达自己的感想以及如何实现梦想。