七、书面表达。
在你的周围，有许多不同类型的人，有助人为乐的，有意志坚强的，有坚持到底终获成功的……请你根据以下提示，以“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容要点：
1. 此人基本信息与品质（职业/身份、年龄、性格特点）；
2. 列举他/她的1~2个典型事例（做了什么）；
3. 他/她对你的影响（从中学到了什么）。
要求：
1. 短文须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
2. 词数90左右；
3. 短文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。
The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most

One possible version：
The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
My mother is the person who has influenced me most. She is in her forties and works as a doctor in a local hospital.
She always listens to my problems patiently and advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can't be too careful. She often works extra hours and has devoted most of her time to her work.
Therefore, I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor. I hope I can be a person like her—caring, responsible and hard-working. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health and take more time to relax.

【分析】
首先审题，明确题目要求：以“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”为题写英语短文，需包含三个核心要点：1. 人物基本信息与品质；2. 1-2个典型事例；3. 对自己的影响。写作时需注意词数90左右，不得提及个人信息，适当发挥使文章连贯。接着确定写作思路：选定人物（如母亲），先介绍其身份、年龄与性格；再选取典型事例体现其品质；最后阐述对自己的影响及感悟，确保内容紧扣主题、逻辑清晰。
【解析】
第一步：确定人物为母亲，介绍其基本信息与品质：母亲四十多岁，是当地医院的医生，性格耐心、负责、勤奋。第二步：列举典型事例：耐心倾听“我”的问题并给出建议，作为医生工作严谨、常加班。第三步：阐述对自己的影响：从母亲身上学到关心他人、有责任感、努力的品质，希望成为像母亲一样的人，也希望母亲注意自身健康。写作时注意用词准确，句子衔接自然，控制词数在要求范围内。
【答案】
The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
My mother is the person who has influenced me most. She is in her forties and works as a doctor in a local hospital.
She always listens to my problems patiently and advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can't be too careful. She often works extra hours and has devoted most of her time to her work.
Therefore, I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor. I hope I can be a person like her—caring, responsible and hard-working. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health and take more time to relax.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，人物介绍类写作，要点整合写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，涵盖所有要求要点，人物形象立体鲜明，事例具体生动，情感表达真挚自然，语言通顺流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6