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八、书面表达。(10 分)
下面是李医生今天上午写的病例本,请根据内容提示,简单介绍一下三位病人的情况以及医生给出的建议。
要求:语句通顺,书写规范,不少于5句话,开头已给出。
Doctor Li has three patients(病人) today.
下面是李医生今天上午写的病例本,请根据内容提示,简单介绍一下三位病人的情况以及医生给出的建议。
要求:语句通顺,书写规范,不少于5句话,开头已给出。
Doctor Li has three patients(病人) today.
Amy is 13 years old. She has a toothache. She should brush her teeth in the morning and before bedtime. David is 11. He has a headache. Bob is 12. He has a bad cold and he coughs. Doctor Li tells David and Bob that they should stay in bed and they should drink much warm water.
答案
参考范文：
Doctor Li has three patients today. Amy
is 13 years old. She has a toothache. She
should brush her teeth in the morning and
before bedtime. David is 11. He has a
headache. Bob is 12. He has a bad cold and
he coughs. Doctor Li tells David and Bob
that they should stay in bed and they should
drink much warm water.
Doctor Li has three patients today. Amy
is 13 years old. She has a toothache. She
should brush her teeth in the morning and
before bedtime. David is 11. He has a
headache. Bob is 12. He has a bad cold and
he coughs. Doctor Li tells David and Bob
that they should stay in bed and they should
drink much warm water.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先明确写作要求：结合表格给出的病例信息，依次介绍三位病人的年龄、症状和对应医嘱，且内容不少于5句话。第一步先逐个提取核心信息：第一位病人Amy13岁，症状是牙疼，医嘱是早晚刷牙；第二位病人David11岁，症状是头疼；第三位病人Bob12岁，症状是重感冒咳嗽，两人共同的医嘱是卧床休息、多喝温水。接下来顺着题目给出的开头，按照Amy→David→Bob的顺序，把提取的信息用通顺的基础英语句子依次表述，保证语法正确、信息完整，满足句数要求即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，先介绍第一位病人Amy的基础信息：Amy is 13 years old. 接着说明她的症状：She has a toothache. 再给出对应的医生建议：She should brush her teeth in the morning and before bedtime.
2. 接下来介绍第二位病人David的信息：David is 11. 说明他的症状：He has a headache.
3. 然后介绍第三位病人Bob的信息：Bob is 12. 说明他的症状：He has a bad cold and he coughs.
4. 最后补充David和Bob两人共同的医嘱：Doctor Li tells David and Bob that they should stay in bed and they should drink much warm water.
所有内容完全覆盖表格给出的全部信息，语句通顺，句数远高于不少于5句的要求，符合写作规范。
【答案】
Doctor Li has three patients today. Amy is 13 years old. She has a toothache. She should brush her teeth in the morning and before bedtime. David is 11. He has a headache. Bob is 12. He has a bad cold and he coughs. Doctor Li tells David and Bob that they should stay in bed and they should drink much warm water.
【知识点】
健康类话题写作，图表信息提取，情态动词用法
【点评】
本题是低难度的图表提示类英语书面表达，只需要学生准确从表格中提取三类核心信息，用基础简单句串联即可完成。写作时注意第三人称单数谓语动词的正确变形，以及情态动词should后接动词原形的规则，避免低级语法错误，很容易拿到满分，主要考察学生基础的信息整合和语句组织能力。
【难度系数】
0.8
拿到这道题首先明确写作要求：结合表格给出的病例信息，依次介绍三位病人的年龄、症状和对应医嘱，且内容不少于5句话。第一步先逐个提取核心信息：第一位病人Amy13岁，症状是牙疼，医嘱是早晚刷牙；第二位病人David11岁，症状是头疼；第三位病人Bob12岁，症状是重感冒咳嗽，两人共同的医嘱是卧床休息、多喝温水。接下来顺着题目给出的开头，按照Amy→David→Bob的顺序，把提取的信息用通顺的基础英语句子依次表述，保证语法正确、信息完整，满足句数要求即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，先介绍第一位病人Amy的基础信息：Amy is 13 years old. 接着说明她的症状：She has a toothache. 再给出对应的医生建议：She should brush her teeth in the morning and before bedtime.
2. 接下来介绍第二位病人David的信息：David is 11. 说明他的症状：He has a headache.
3. 然后介绍第三位病人Bob的信息：Bob is 12. 说明他的症状：He has a bad cold and he coughs.
4. 最后补充David和Bob两人共同的医嘱：Doctor Li tells David and Bob that they should stay in bed and they should drink much warm water.
所有内容完全覆盖表格给出的全部信息，语句通顺，句数远高于不少于5句的要求，符合写作规范。
【答案】
Doctor Li has three patients today. Amy is 13 years old. She has a toothache. She should brush her teeth in the morning and before bedtime. David is 11. He has a headache. Bob is 12. He has a bad cold and he coughs. Doctor Li tells David and Bob that they should stay in bed and they should drink much warm water.
【知识点】
健康类话题写作，图表信息提取，情态动词用法
【点评】
本题是低难度的图表提示类英语书面表达，只需要学生准确从表格中提取三类核心信息，用基础简单句串联即可完成。写作时注意第三人称单数谓语动词的正确变形，以及情态动词should后接动词原形的规则，避免低级语法错误，很容易拿到满分，主要考察学生基础的信息整合和语句组织能力。
【难度系数】
0.8
