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Ⅶ. 书面表达
一个榜样不仅具备优秀的能力和品质，更重要的是他/她的人格魅力和对社会的贡献。生命中总有一些值得我们学习的榜样。最近，江苏教育电视台将举办题为“The Great Person I Admire Most”的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
要求:1. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥;2. 词数 100 左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
The Great Person I Admire Most
It is my great honour to stand here to make a speech.
题中题 044
一个榜样不仅具备优秀的能力和品质，更重要的是他/她的人格魅力和对社会的贡献。生命中总有一些值得我们学习的榜样。最近，江苏教育电视台将举办题为“The Great Person I Admire Most”的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
要求:1. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥;2. 词数 100 左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
The Great Person I Admire Most
It is my great honour to stand here to make a speech.
题中题 044
答案
One possible version:
The Great Person I Admire Most
It is my great honour to stand here to make a speech.
Standing here, many great figures come into my mind. Among them, I admire Yuan Longping most, an agricultural pioneer of China. There are many people suffering from hunger even today. To help more people to get enough food, Yuan Longping devoted himself to improving the output of hybrid rice. Thanks to his research, the output has been doubled. More importantly, Yuan Longping was willing to share his achievement with others, which helped the whole world to solve the hunger problem.
As for me, Yuan Longping is the greatest person in the world. It is his devotion that has inspired me a lot. Actually, I have some difficulty in learning English. However, where there is devotion, there is a way. I really believe that my devotion can make me an expert in English.
Thank you for your listening.
【审题】本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿。本文主要时态为一般现在时，在描述人物过往经历时应用一般过去时。学生需要根据流程中的内容写作，不要遗落要点并适当增加细节。
【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我最尊敬的人是袁隆平”来引出下文中对袁隆平的介绍；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“介绍、经历和贡献”三方面入手，重点介绍袁隆平；第三步，书写结语。袁隆平的事迹对“我”有很大的影响。
【短语积累】①suffer from 遭受
②devote oneself to 致力于
③thanks to 由于，归功于
【高分句型】①More importantly, Yuan Longping was willing to share his achievement with others, which helped the whole world to solve the hunger problem.（which 引导的定语从句）
②It is his devotion that has inspired me a lot.（强调句）
The Great Person I Admire Most
It is my great honour to stand here to make a speech.
Standing here, many great figures come into my mind. Among them, I admire Yuan Longping most, an agricultural pioneer of China. There are many people suffering from hunger even today. To help more people to get enough food, Yuan Longping devoted himself to improving the output of hybrid rice. Thanks to his research, the output has been doubled. More importantly, Yuan Longping was willing to share his achievement with others, which helped the whole world to solve the hunger problem.
As for me, Yuan Longping is the greatest person in the world. It is his devotion that has inspired me a lot. Actually, I have some difficulty in learning English. However, where there is devotion, there is a way. I really believe that my devotion can make me an expert in English.
Thank you for your listening.
【审题】本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿。本文主要时态为一般现在时，在描述人物过往经历时应用一般过去时。学生需要根据流程中的内容写作，不要遗落要点并适当增加细节。
【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我最尊敬的人是袁隆平”来引出下文中对袁隆平的介绍；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“介绍、经历和贡献”三方面入手，重点介绍袁隆平；第三步，书写结语。袁隆平的事迹对“我”有很大的影响。
【短语积累】①suffer from 遭受
②devote oneself to 致力于
③thanks to 由于，归功于
【高分句型】①More importantly, Yuan Longping was willing to share his achievement with others, which helped the whole world to solve the hunger problem.（which 引导的定语从句）
②It is his devotion that has inspired me a lot.（强调句）
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求是写题为“The Great Person I Admire Most”的英语演讲稿，需涵盖流程图的三个核心要点：人物介绍（国籍、性格）、经历（教育、事例）、贡献与影响，词数100左右且开头已给出。解题思路为：第一步，引出自己最敬佩的人物；第二步，按流程图模块展开介绍，重点突出人物的核心贡献；第三步，结合自身谈该人物的影响，最后礼貌收尾。
【解析】
1. 确定时态：介绍人物现状用一般现在时，描述过往经历用一般过去时；
2. 紧扣流程图要点：介绍部分点明人物身份（如袁隆平，中国农业先驱）；经历部分简述其研究杂交水稻的事例；贡献部分说明其解决饥饿问题的成果；
3. 结合自身影响呼应主题，使用恰当短语（如suffer from、devote oneself to）和句式（如定语从句、强调句）提升表达效果，控制词数在要求范围内。
【答案】
One possible version:
The Great Person I Admire Most
It is my great honour to stand here to make a speech.
Standing here, many great figures come into my mind. Among them, I admire Yuan Longping most, an agricultural pioneer of China. There are many people suffering from hunger even today. To help more people to get enough food, Yuan Longping devoted himself to improving the output of hybrid rice. Thanks to his research, the output has been doubled. More importantly, Yuan Longping was willing to share his achievement with others, which helped the whole world to solve the hunger problem.
As for me, Yuan Longping is the greatest person in the world. It is his devotion that has inspired me a lot. Actually, I have some difficulty in learning English. However, where there is devotion, there is a way. I really believe that my devotion can make me an expert in English.
Thank you for your listening.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、演讲稿写作、人物介绍
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求和流程图要点，内容完整逻辑清晰，句式丰富且符合演讲稿格式，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确题目要求是写题为“The Great Person I Admire Most”的英语演讲稿，需涵盖流程图的三个核心要点：人物介绍（国籍、性格）、经历（教育、事例）、贡献与影响，词数100左右且开头已给出。解题思路为：第一步，引出自己最敬佩的人物；第二步，按流程图模块展开介绍，重点突出人物的核心贡献；第三步，结合自身谈该人物的影响，最后礼貌收尾。
【解析】
1. 确定时态：介绍人物现状用一般现在时，描述过往经历用一般过去时；
2. 紧扣流程图要点：介绍部分点明人物身份（如袁隆平，中国农业先驱）；经历部分简述其研究杂交水稻的事例；贡献部分说明其解决饥饿问题的成果；
3. 结合自身影响呼应主题，使用恰当短语（如suffer from、devote oneself to）和句式（如定语从句、强调句）提升表达效果，控制词数在要求范围内。
【答案】
One possible version:
The Great Person I Admire Most
It is my great honour to stand here to make a speech.
Standing here, many great figures come into my mind. Among them, I admire Yuan Longping most, an agricultural pioneer of China. There are many people suffering from hunger even today. To help more people to get enough food, Yuan Longping devoted himself to improving the output of hybrid rice. Thanks to his research, the output has been doubled. More importantly, Yuan Longping was willing to share his achievement with others, which helped the whole world to solve the hunger problem.
As for me, Yuan Longping is the greatest person in the world. It is his devotion that has inspired me a lot. Actually, I have some difficulty in learning English. However, where there is devotion, there is a way. I really believe that my devotion can make me an expert in English.
Thank you for your listening.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、演讲稿写作、人物介绍
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求和流程图要点，内容完整逻辑清晰，句式丰富且符合演讲稿格式，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
