典型例题
假如你是李明,本周日由你组织国际交换生去 the Dream City 游玩。请用英语拟一份通知。
内容要点如下:1. 集合时间和地点:上午九点, the Dream City 入口处:2. 观看楚剧,学习剪纸,制作陶土作品;3. 自由活动一小时,可游玩、拍照等,五点乘地铁返校;4. 天气炎热,着轻便装;5. 请补充一至两点个人的想法或建议。
注意:1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;2. 词数 80 左右;3. 内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:entrance n. 入口处;Chu opera 楚剧;clay piece 陶土作品
Hello, everyone! We are going to the Dream City this Sunday.
思路点拨
根据作文要求可知,本题要求写一则通知,体裁应为应用文,人称应以第一人称为主;文章主体部分介绍本周日的游玩安排,时态应为一般将来时。第一段:总体介绍安排;第二段:详述时间、地点、活动等;第三段:表达对此次活动的展望。
假如你是李明,本周日由你组织国际交换生去 the Dream City 游玩。请用英语拟一份通知。
内容要点如下:1. 集合时间和地点:上午九点, the Dream City 入口处:2. 观看楚剧,学习剪纸,制作陶土作品;3. 自由活动一小时,可游玩、拍照等,五点乘地铁返校;4. 天气炎热,着轻便装;5. 请补充一至两点个人的想法或建议。
注意:1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;2. 词数 80 左右;3. 内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:entrance n. 入口处;Chu opera 楚剧;clay piece 陶土作品
Hello, everyone! We are going to the Dream City this Sunday.
思路点拨
根据作文要求可知,本题要求写一则通知,体裁应为应用文,人称应以第一人称为主;文章主体部分介绍本周日的游玩安排,时态应为一般将来时。第一段:总体介绍安排;第二段:详述时间、地点、活动等;第三段:表达对此次活动的展望。
答案
范文欣赏
Hello, everyone! We are going to the Dream City this Sunday.
We will meet at the entrance of the Dream City at 9:00 a. m. We can enjoy the Chu opera, learn paper-cutting and make clay pieces. We will be given an hour to do activities freely. We can do some things such as travelling around and taking photos. We will take the subway to go back to school at five o'clock. It is hot and you can wear light clothes. We must pay attention to safety and never go anywhere alone.
I hope we will have a good time at the Dream City.
Hello, everyone! We are going to the Dream City this Sunday.
We will meet at the entrance of the Dream City at 9:00 a. m. We can enjoy the Chu opera, learn paper-cutting and make clay pieces. We will be given an hour to do activities freely. We can do some things such as travelling around and taking photos. We will take the subway to go back to school at five o'clock. It is hot and you can wear light clothes. We must pay attention to safety and never go anywhere alone.
I hope we will have a good time at the Dream City.
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友 Mike 打算于7月10日至7月12日在青海旅游,请根据所给信息写一封80词左右的英文邮件,帮他制订一个合适的旅行计划。内容包括行程、饮食以及注意事项等,可适当发挥。文中不得出现真实校名和姓名,首段已给出,不计入总词数。

答案
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I'm glad that you'll come to Qinghai on vacation. Here is
the travel plan I made for you.
On the first day, it will be rainy at Qinghai Lake and in
Menyuan, so we'll visit the Qinghai Museum and Ta'er
Temple to learn more about the local history. We'll also taste
local food in Xining. On July 11, we will take a bus to
Qinghai Lake. We can ride bikes, take photos and enjoy
yogurt and beef there. Remember to wear warm clothes because
→remember to do sth意为"记得做某事"(未做);
remember doing sth意为"记得做过某事"(已做)
the lake is cold. On July 12, we will go to Menyuan by train
to see golden canola flowers. Bring your camera!
Hope you'll enjoy yourself in Qinghai. I really can't wait
to see you.
→can't wait to do sth意为"迫不及待做某事"
Li Hua
Dear Mike,
I'm glad that you'll come to Qinghai on vacation. Here is
the travel plan I made for you.
On the first day, it will be rainy at Qinghai Lake and in
Menyuan, so we'll visit the Qinghai Museum and Ta'er
Temple to learn more about the local history. We'll also taste
local food in Xining. On July 11, we will take a bus to
Qinghai Lake. We can ride bikes, take photos and enjoy
yogurt and beef there. Remember to wear warm clothes because
→remember to do sth意为"记得做某事"(未做);
remember doing sth意为"记得做过某事"(已做)
the lake is cold. On July 12, we will go to Menyuan by train
to see golden canola flowers. Bring your camera!
Hope you'll enjoy yourself in Qinghai. I really can't wait
to see you.
→can't wait to do sth意为"迫不及待做某事"
Li Hua
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