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十二、书面表达(本题有1小题；共计20分)
假设你叫李华,上周你跟父母去了成都研究基地(the Chengdu Research Base)看大熊猫,你的外国笔友 Mike 对这次活动非常感兴趣,请你结合以下信息,用英语写一封回信,分享下你的经历和感受,并给出一些建议。
注意:
(1)文中需包含所有信息,并适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息；
(3)词数70字左右；
(4)信中首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I'm excited to share my wonderful experience at Chengdu Research Base last weekend!
Looking forward to hearing about your adventures too!
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你叫李华,上周你跟父母去了成都研究基地(the Chengdu Research Base)看大熊猫,你的外国笔友 Mike 对这次活动非常感兴趣,请你结合以下信息,用英语写一封回信,分享下你的经历和感受,并给出一些建议。
注意:
(1)文中需包含所有信息,并适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息；
(3)词数70字左右；
(4)信中首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I'm excited to share my wonderful experience at Chengdu Research Base last weekend!
Although the weather was quite hot, my parents and I had an amazing time there. It was my first time to see so many adorable pandas in person, so I can't help taking a lot of photos. We also visited the gift shop where I bought a panda keychain for you!
If you want to have a visit, here are some tips:
First, don't feed the pandas—it's strictly forbidden.
Second, remember to keep quiet as loud noises might disturb them.
Looking forward to hearing about your adventures too!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I'm excited to share my wonderful experience at Chengdu Research Base last weekend! Although the weather was quite hot, my parents and I had an amazing time there. It was my first time to see so many adorable pandas in person, so I can't help taking a lot of photos. We also visited the gift shop where I bought a panda keychain for you!
If you want to have a visit, here are some tips:
First, don't feed the pandas—it's strictly forbidden.
Second, remember to keep quiet as loud noises might disturb them.
Looking forward to hearing about your adventures too!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mike,
I'm excited to share my wonderful experience at Chengdu Research Base last weekend! Although the weather was quite hot, my parents and I had an amazing time there. It was my first time to see so many adorable pandas in person, so I can't help taking a lot of photos. We also visited the gift shop where I bought a panda keychain for you!
If you want to have a visit, here are some tips:
First, don't feed the pandas—it's strictly forbidden.
Second, remember to keep quiet as loud noises might disturb them.
Looking forward to hearing about your adventures too!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给笔友Mike写回信，分享去成都熊猫基地的经历。首先需明确要涵盖表格中的所有信息：天气（炎热晴朗）、活动（看熊猫、买礼物）、参观注意事项（禁止喂食、保持安静）；其次要符合书信的亲切语气，适当添加细节（如拍照）让内容更生动，同时注意词数要求和格式规范，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开头承接已给内容，先点明天气和整体感受：Although the weather was quite hot, my parents and I had an amazing time there.
2. 具体描述活动：It was my first time to see so many adorable pandas in person, so I can't help taking a lot of photos. We also visited the gift shop where I bought a panda keychain for you!
3. 给出参观建议：If you want to have a visit, here are some tips: First, don't feed the pandas—it's strictly forbidden. Second, remember to keep quiet as loud noises might disturb them.
4. 呼应已给结尾，完成书信。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I'm excited to share my wonderful experience at Chengdu Research Base last weekend! Although the weather was quite hot, my parents and I had an amazing time there. It was my first time to see so many adorable pandas in person, so I can't help taking a lot of photos. We also visited the gift shop where I bought a panda keychain for you!
If you want to have a visit, here are some tips:
First, don't feed the pandas—it's strictly forbidden.
Second, remember to keep quiet as loud noises might disturb them.
Looking forward to hearing about your adventures too!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、旅行话题表达、建议句型运用
【点评】
该回信准确涵盖了题目要求的所有信息点，语气亲切自然，符合笔友间交流的风格，适当添加拍照的细节丰富了内容，建议部分清晰明了，词数符合要求，是一篇符合题目标准的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题要求以李华的身份给笔友Mike写回信，分享去成都熊猫基地的经历。首先需明确要涵盖表格中的所有信息：天气（炎热晴朗）、活动（看熊猫、买礼物）、参观注意事项（禁止喂食、保持安静）；其次要符合书信的亲切语气，适当添加细节（如拍照）让内容更生动，同时注意词数要求和格式规范，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开头承接已给内容，先点明天气和整体感受：Although the weather was quite hot, my parents and I had an amazing time there.
2. 具体描述活动：It was my first time to see so many adorable pandas in person, so I can't help taking a lot of photos. We also visited the gift shop where I bought a panda keychain for you!
3. 给出参观建议：If you want to have a visit, here are some tips: First, don't feed the pandas—it's strictly forbidden. Second, remember to keep quiet as loud noises might disturb them.
4. 呼应已给结尾，完成书信。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I'm excited to share my wonderful experience at Chengdu Research Base last weekend! Although the weather was quite hot, my parents and I had an amazing time there. It was my first time to see so many adorable pandas in person, so I can't help taking a lot of photos. We also visited the gift shop where I bought a panda keychain for you!
If you want to have a visit, here are some tips:
First, don't feed the pandas—it's strictly forbidden.
Second, remember to keep quiet as loud noises might disturb them.
Looking forward to hearing about your adventures too!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、旅行话题表达、建议句型运用
【点评】
该回信准确涵盖了题目要求的所有信息点，语气亲切自然，符合笔友间交流的风格，适当添加拍照的细节丰富了内容，建议部分清晰明了，词数符合要求，是一篇符合题目标准的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.3
