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[结尾句]
They should take action to make the country energetic and strong. (人物期望)
[名言警句]
Where there is a will, there is a way.
有志者事竟成。
写作演练»
假如你有一位非遗剪纸传承人朋友王先生,请你根据以下信息,向大家介绍你的朋友。
1. 他是一位年轻男子;2. 他只需要剪刀和纸,就能创作出令人惊叹的艺术品;3. 制作过程(process)主要包括三个步骤;4. 我认为……
[思路点拨]
1. 体裁:记叙文;2. 人称:第三人称为主;3. 时态:一般现在时。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Today I will introduce my friend Mr Wang to you.
(更多精彩作文素材见"强基手册")
They should take action to make the country energetic and strong. (人物期望)
[名言警句]
Where there is a will, there is a way.
有志者事竟成。
写作演练»
假如你有一位非遗剪纸传承人朋友王先生,请你根据以下信息,向大家介绍你的朋友。
1. 他是一位年轻男子;2. 他只需要剪刀和纸,就能创作出令人惊叹的艺术品;3. 制作过程(process)主要包括三个步骤;4. 我认为……
[思路点拨]
1. 体裁:记叙文;2. 人称:第三人称为主;3. 时态:一般现在时。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Today I will introduce my friend Mr Wang to you.
(更多精彩作文素材见"强基手册")
答案
One possible version:
Today I will introduce my friend Mr Wang to you. He is a young man. What makes him special is that he's an inheritor of paper-cutting, which is a traditional Chinese intangible cultural heritage.
Mr Wang only needs scissors and paper to create amazing artworks. The process includes three main steps. First, fold the paper. Then, draw patterns on it. Finally, cut the paper carefully with scissors. Watching him work is like seeing magic happen! His skilled hands can turn ordinary paper into beautiful patterns of flowers, animals or Chinese characters.
I think his paper-cutting skill is not only creative but also meaningful as it carries our cultural traditions. I would love to learn this skill from him because it's both fun and valuable. Maybe some day I can make my own work to decorate my home during festivals!
Today I will introduce my friend Mr Wang to you. He is a young man. What makes him special is that he's an inheritor of paper-cutting, which is a traditional Chinese intangible cultural heritage.
Mr Wang only needs scissors and paper to create amazing artworks. The process includes three main steps. First, fold the paper. Then, draw patterns on it. Finally, cut the paper carefully with scissors. Watching him work is like seeing magic happen! His skilled hands can turn ordinary paper into beautiful patterns of flowers, animals or Chinese characters.
I think his paper-cutting skill is not only creative but also meaningful as it carries our cultural traditions. I would love to learn this skill from him because it's both fun and valuable. Maybe some day I can make my own work to decorate my home during festivals!
解析
【分析】
本题要求介绍非遗剪纸传承人王先生，属于英语记叙文写作。需遵循以下思路：1. 开篇点题，用指定句式引出介绍对象；2. 主体部分依次说明王先生的身份（年轻男子、剪纸传承人）、创作工具（剪刀和纸）、制作剪纸的三个步骤（用First/Then/Finally衔接），并运用"turn...into..."结构描述其创作成果；3. 结尾表达对剪纸的看法及个人期望。需注意人称以第三人称为主，时态用一般现在时，覆盖题目给出的所有要点。
【解析】
1. 开篇：用"Today I will introduce my friend Mr Wang to you."点题，补充说明他是年轻男子及剪纸传承人的身份；
2. 主体：先写他仅用剪刀和纸创作艺术品，再按顺序用First（折纸）、Then（画图案）、Finally（剪纸）说明制作步骤，接着用"turn ordinary paper into beautiful patterns"描述其创作成果；
3. 结尾：表达对剪纸技能的看法（有创意且有意义，承载文化），并说明自己想学习的期望。
【答案】
One possible version:
Today I will introduce my friend Mr Wang to you. He is a young man. What makes him special is that he's an inheritor of paper-cutting, which is a traditional Chinese intangible cultural heritage.
Mr Wang only needs scissors and paper to create amazing artworks. The process includes three main steps. First, fold the paper. Then, draw patterns on it. Finally, cut the paper carefully with scissors. Watching him work is like seeing magic happen! His skilled hands can turn ordinary paper into beautiful patterns of flowers, animals or Chinese characters.
I think his paper-cutting skill is not only creative but also meaningful as it carries our cultural traditions. I would love to learn this skill from him because it's both fun and valuable. Maybe some day I can make my own work to decorate my home during festivals!
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，一般现在时，固定短语运用
【点评】
本文结构清晰，严格遵循写作提纲要求，覆盖了所有要点，语言流畅自然，加入细节描写让内容更生动，符合英语写作规范。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求介绍非遗剪纸传承人王先生，属于英语记叙文写作。需遵循以下思路：1. 开篇点题，用指定句式引出介绍对象；2. 主体部分依次说明王先生的身份（年轻男子、剪纸传承人）、创作工具（剪刀和纸）、制作剪纸的三个步骤（用First/Then/Finally衔接），并运用"turn...into..."结构描述其创作成果；3. 结尾表达对剪纸的看法及个人期望。需注意人称以第三人称为主，时态用一般现在时，覆盖题目给出的所有要点。
【解析】
1. 开篇：用"Today I will introduce my friend Mr Wang to you."点题，补充说明他是年轻男子及剪纸传承人的身份；
2. 主体：先写他仅用剪刀和纸创作艺术品，再按顺序用First（折纸）、Then（画图案）、Finally（剪纸）说明制作步骤，接着用"turn ordinary paper into beautiful patterns"描述其创作成果；
3. 结尾：表达对剪纸技能的看法（有创意且有意义，承载文化），并说明自己想学习的期望。
【答案】
One possible version:
Today I will introduce my friend Mr Wang to you. He is a young man. What makes him special is that he's an inheritor of paper-cutting, which is a traditional Chinese intangible cultural heritage.
Mr Wang only needs scissors and paper to create amazing artworks. The process includes three main steps. First, fold the paper. Then, draw patterns on it. Finally, cut the paper carefully with scissors. Watching him work is like seeing magic happen! His skilled hands can turn ordinary paper into beautiful patterns of flowers, animals or Chinese characters.
I think his paper-cutting skill is not only creative but also meaningful as it carries our cultural traditions. I would love to learn this skill from him because it's both fun and valuable. Maybe some day I can make my own work to decorate my home during festivals!
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，一般现在时，固定短语运用
【点评】
本文结构清晰，严格遵循写作提纲要求，覆盖了所有要点，语言流畅自然，加入细节描写让内容更生动，符合英语写作规范。
【难度系数】
0.5
