结构分析
| 开头 | 介绍人物,点明梦想/目标 | I am... My friend is... This is a story about... There was a... at school, and... wanted to take part. |
| 中间 | 描述所遇到的困难及努力的过程 | I/He/She was not good at... At first, I/he/she was afraid... I/He/She always forgot... It was difficult for me/him/her... I/He/She wanted to try my/his/her best/practised every day/never gave up/kept trying... |
| 结尾 | 描述结果,抒发感悟,升华主题 | Finally, I/he/she finished... /was happy... Keep trying! Never give up. |
高分实战
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要求:1. 写一件你曾经害怕、但通过努力最终成功做到了的事情;
2. 使用一般过去时;
3. 语句连贯,条理清晰,不少于6句话。

参考范文:
Three weeks ago, there was an English speech contest in our school. I wanted to take part in it.
But I was afraid of speaking in front of many people. And I forgot my words many times when I practised. I wanted to try my best. I wrote down my speech and practised reading it every morning. I also practised in front of the mirror. And I asked my mum to listen to me.
Finally, it was time for the speech. I remembered all the words and finished my speech. I was very happy.