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Lily 的好朋友 Amy 因为不擅长跳高感到很难过，甚至不想参加运动会了。Lily 不知道怎么安慰她，于是给你发微信求助。请你以“如何帮助 Amy 开心起来”为主题，给 Lily 写一段建议，帮她出出主意，告诉她可以通过做些什么来鼓励 Amy，让 Amy 重新振作起来。
要求:1. 文章中要有一句第三人称单数的肯定句和一句第三人称单数的否定句;2. 提出至少2点建议;3. 语言流畅,语法正确;4. 不少于5句话(不包含已给出的句子)。
I'm sorry to hear that Amy is sad because
Lily 的好朋友 Amy 因为不擅长跳高感到很难过，甚至不想参加运动会了。Lily 不知道怎么安慰她，于是给你发微信求助。请你以“如何帮助 Amy 开心起来”为主题，给 Lily 写一段建议，帮她出出主意，告诉她可以通过做些什么来鼓励 Amy，让 Amy 重新振作起来。
要求:1. 文章中要有一句第三人称单数的肯定句和一句第三人称单数的否定句;2. 提出至少2点建议;3. 语言流畅,语法正确;4. 不少于5句话(不包含已给出的句子)。
I'm sorry to hear that Amy is sad because
she isn't good at the high jump
. Here are some ideas for you to help her.First, you can talk to her and tell her not to give up. She doesn't have to be good at everything.
You can practise jumping with her after school.
Spending time with her makes her feel better. She loves your company and can feel happy soon.
You can also tell her that it's okay to feel sad sometimes, but trying her best is the most important thing.
When she feels your care, she will smile again.
答案
I'm sorry to hear that Amy is sad because she isn't good at the high jump. Here are some ideas for you to help her.
First, you can talk to her and tell her not to give up. She doesn't have to be good at everything. You can practise jumping with her after school. Spending time with her makes her feel better. She loves your company and can feel happy soon. You can also tell her that it's okay to feel sad sometimes, but trying her best is the most important thing. When she feels your care, she will smile again.
First, you can talk to her and tell her not to give up. She doesn't have to be good at everything. You can practise jumping with her after school. Spending time with her makes her feel better. She loves your company and can feel happy soon. You can also tell her that it's okay to feel sad sometimes, but trying her best is the most important thing. When she feels your care, she will smile again.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语建议类写作题，解题思路如下：首先补全开头原因，紧扣Amy不擅长跳高的语境；其次提出至少2条具体可行的鼓励建议，如陪伴练习、强调尽力的重要性；最后确保包含一句第三人称单数肯定句和一句否定句，且句子数量不少于5句，语言流畅语法正确。
【解析】
I'm sorry to hear that Amy is sad because she isn't good at the high jump. Here are some ideas for you to help her. First, you can talk to her and tell her not to give up. She doesn't have to be good at everything. You can practise jumping with her after school. Spending time with her makes her feel better. She loves your company and can feel happy soon. You can also tell her that it's okay to feel sad sometimes, but trying her best is the most important thing. When she feels your care, she will smile again.
【答案】
I'm sorry to hear that Amy is sad because she isn't good at the high jump. Here are some ideas for you to help her. First, you can talk to her and tell her not to give up. She doesn't have to be good at everything. You can practise jumping with her after school. Spending time with her makes her feel better. She loves your company and can feel happy soon. You can also tell her that it's okay to feel sad sometimes, but trying her best is the most important thing. When she feels your care, she will smile again.
【知识点】
英语建议类写作；第三人称单数句式运用
【点评】
本题围绕安慰朋友的主题，既考查学生的英语语言组织能力，又渗透了人际交往的情感引导，要求明确，符合英语学科核心素养的培养方向，学生需结合语境合理满足句式和内容要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语建议类写作题，解题思路如下：首先补全开头原因，紧扣Amy不擅长跳高的语境；其次提出至少2条具体可行的鼓励建议，如陪伴练习、强调尽力的重要性；最后确保包含一句第三人称单数肯定句和一句否定句，且句子数量不少于5句，语言流畅语法正确。
【解析】
I'm sorry to hear that Amy is sad because she isn't good at the high jump. Here are some ideas for you to help her. First, you can talk to her and tell her not to give up. She doesn't have to be good at everything. You can practise jumping with her after school. Spending time with her makes her feel better. She loves your company and can feel happy soon. You can also tell her that it's okay to feel sad sometimes, but trying her best is the most important thing. When she feels your care, she will smile again.
【答案】
I'm sorry to hear that Amy is sad because she isn't good at the high jump. Here are some ideas for you to help her. First, you can talk to her and tell her not to give up. She doesn't have to be good at everything. You can practise jumping with her after school. Spending time with her makes her feel better. She loves your company and can feel happy soon. You can also tell her that it's okay to feel sad sometimes, but trying her best is the most important thing. When she feels your care, she will smile again.
【知识点】
英语建议类写作；第三人称单数句式运用
【点评】
本题围绕安慰朋友的主题，既考查学生的英语语言组织能力，又渗透了人际交往的情感引导，要求明确，符合英语学科核心素养的培养方向，学生需结合语境合理满足句式和内容要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
