实战演练
假如你是北京阳光中学八年级学生 Nancy，请以“My school life”为题，写一篇短文向英国的笔友介绍你的学校生活。
要点:1. 上午8点开始,下午4点结束。一天6节课,学习各种科目。
2. 学校有餐厅,中午在学校餐厅吃饭,饭后同学们可以……
3. 课后作业不多,有时间进行课外活动……
4. 每周五下午参加社团活动,最喜欢……Club,可以……
要求:1. 包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
2. 不少于90个词(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
【写作指导】

My school life
Dear friend,
I'm Nancy, a Grade 8 student from Beijing Sunshine Middle School. I'd like to tell you something about my colourful school life.
Our school starts at 8 a.m. and ends at 4 p.m. We have 6 classes a day, and we learn all kinds of subjects, such as Chinese, Maths, English, History and Physics. There is a bright and clean dining hall in our school, so we have lunch there at noon. After lunch, we can walk around the garden or chat with our classmates for a rest. We don't have much homework after class, so we have enough time to take part in after-school activities. I often play volleyball with my friends or read different books in the school library. We can join different club activities every Friday afternoon. My favourite is the Drawing Club, where I can learn new drawing skills and share my creative works with other members.
I always enjoy my school life a lot.
What about your school life? Write to me soon.
Yours,
Nancy

【分析】
本题为英语话题应用文写作，要求以北京阳光中学八年级学生Nancy的身份介绍学校生活。解题思路：首先明确写作结构，开头引入主题，中间分点覆盖所有给定要点（作息与课程、午餐安排、课后活动、周五社团），结尾询问对方学校生活；其次适当添加合理细节使内容连贯，确保词数达标，语言符合八年级学生的英语水平。
【解析】
1. 开头已给出，点明身份与写作目的；
2. 介绍学校作息与课程：说明学校上午8点开始、下午4点结束，一天6节课，学习语文、数学等各类科目；
3. 描述午餐情况：提及学校有餐厅，中午在餐厅用餐，饭后可散步或和同学聊天放松；
4. 说明课后安排：课后作业不多，有时间参加课外活动，如打排球、去图书馆看书；
5. 介绍周五社团活动：每周五下午参加社团，最喜欢绘画社团，可学习新绘画技巧、分享作品；
6. 结尾询问对方学校生活，呼应开头。
【答案】
My school life
Dear friend,
I'm Nancy, a Grade 8 student from Beijing Sunshine Middle School. I'd like to tell you something about my colourful school life.
Our school starts at 8 a.m. and ends at 4 p.m. We have 6 classes a day, and we learn all kinds of subjects, such as Chinese, Maths, English, History and Physics. There is a bright and clean dining hall in our school, so we have lunch there at noon. After lunch, we can walk around the garden or chat with our classmates for a rest. We don't have much homework after class, so we have enough time to take part in after-school activities. I often play volleyball with my friends or read different books in the school library. We can join different club activities every Friday afternoon. My favourite is the Drawing Club, where I can learn new drawing skills and share my creative works with other members.
I always enjoy my school life a lot.
What about your school life? Write to me soon.
Yours,
Nancy
【知识点】
英语话题作文,英语应用文写作,学校生活话题
【点评】
该作文完整覆盖题目所有要点，内容充实，细节合理，行文连贯，结构清晰，语言符合八年级学生水平，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.3

本文是一篇材料作文，根据提示可知：① 人称：用第一人称；② 时态：用一般现在时；③ 以时间顺序为轴，采用“总体描述→课程安排→午间活动→课后时光→特色社团”的递进式结构来描述学校日常生活。
【写作提纲】
My school life
introduction
I’m ... I am a Year 8 student in ...
Let me tell you something about ...
main body
My school starts at ... and finishes at ...
After lunch， often ... After class，we ...
Every Friday afternoon，we ...
conclusion
I always have fun at school.
【小试身手】
My school life
Hi, I’m Nancy. I am a Year 8 student in Sunshine Middle School. Now let me tell you something about my school life.




I always have fun at school.

One possible version:
My school life
Hi, I'm Nancy. I am a Year 8 student in Sunshine Middle School. Now let me tell you something about my school life.
My school starts at 8:00 a. m. and finishes at 4:00 p. m. We have six lessons every day. At school, we learn all kinds of subjects.
There is a dining hall in our school. We have lunch there. After lunch, we often chat with each other or listen to music. After class, we don't have too much homework, and we have time for after-school activities. We can borrow books from our library or play sports in the playground. Every Friday afternoon, we go to clubs. My favourite club is the Reading Club. We can bring in books from home. We can also discuss the books with our classmates.
I always have fun at school.

【分析】本题为八年级英语材料作文，要求用第一人称、一般现在时，按照“介绍-主体（学校作息、午间活动、课后活动、周五社团）-结论”的结构写作。解题思路：① 明确已给出的introduction部分，无需修改；② 补全main body内容：先写学校作息及日常课程，再写午间食堂活动，接着写课后课外活动，最后写周五社团活动；③ 衔接给定结论句，确保内容连贯、符合学校实际，时态人称正确。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 确定人称（第一人称we）和时态（一般现在时），符合题目要求；2. 对应main body第一部分，填写学校作息（上午8点开始、下午4点结束，每天六节课，学习各类科目）；3. 午间部分：说明在食堂用餐，午间活动为聊天、听音乐；4. 课后部分：说明作业不多，有时间进行课外活动（如图书馆借书、操场运动）；5. 周五下午：参加社团（如阅读俱乐部），带书和同学讨论；6. 用给定结论句收尾，完成全文。
【答案】One possible version:
My school life
Hi, I'm Nancy. I am a Year 8 student in Sunshine Middle School. Now let me tell you something about my school life.
My school starts at 8:00 a. m. and finishes at 4:00 p. m. We have six lessons every day. At school, we learn all kinds of subjects.
There is a dining hall in our school. We have lunch there. After lunch, we often chat with each other or listen to music. After class, we don't have too much homework, and we have time for after-school activities. We can borrow books from our library or play sports in the playground. Every Friday afternoon, we go to clubs. My favourite club is the Reading Club. We can bring in books from home. We can also discuss the books with our classmates.
I always have fun at school.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般现在时、学校生活话题表达
【点评】本文严格遵循题目结构，人称时态正确，内容贴合学生实际，细节丰富，覆盖所有提纲要点，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6