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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D18
「2026 辽宁大连普兰店期末」
家人是我们生命中最重要的人，而节日则让家庭的温暖加倍。假设你是李辉，你们学校英语报专栏现征集以“Celebrating a Festival with My Family”为题的短文，请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文。
提示:(1)你最喜欢和家人一起庆祝的中国传统节日的名称；
(2)你们通常进行的庆祝活动；
(3)你的感受。
注意:(1)词数不少于80；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Celebrating a Festival with My Family
「2026 辽宁大连普兰店期末」
家人是我们生命中最重要的人，而节日则让家庭的温暖加倍。假设你是李辉，你们学校英语报专栏现征集以“Celebrating a Festival with My Family”为题的短文，请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文。
提示:(1)你最喜欢和家人一起庆祝的中国传统节日的名称；
(2)你们通常进行的庆祝活动；
(3)你的感受。
注意:(1)词数不少于80；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Celebrating a Festival with My Family
答案
主题写作专项
基础版范文
Celebrating a Festival with My Family
The Spring Festival is my favorite traditional festival. I love to celebrate it with my family.
Before the festival, we clean our house together to welcome good luck. On the eve of the Spring Festival, we enjoy a big family dinner. After dinner, we watch the Spring Festival Gala and play games together. At midnight, we set off fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year.
I feel so excited and warm during the Spring Festival. Spending this special time with my family brings me great joy.
进阶版范文
Celebrating a Festival with My Family
The Spring Festival is my favorite traditional festival. The festival gives me a special time to spend with my family.
Before the festival comes, we clean our house together. We think that it is a way to sweep away bad luck and bring good luck. On the eve of the Spring Festival, we enjoy a big family dinner. After dinner, we watch the Spring Festival Gala and play games together. At midnight, we set off fireworks in order to celebrate the beginning of a new year.
Spending this special time with my family makes me feel so excited and warm. It reminds me that home is a place full of happiness.
基础版范文
Celebrating a Festival with My Family
The Spring Festival is my favorite traditional festival. I love to celebrate it with my family.
Before the festival, we clean our house together to welcome good luck. On the eve of the Spring Festival, we enjoy a big family dinner. After dinner, we watch the Spring Festival Gala and play games together. At midnight, we set off fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year.
I feel so excited and warm during the Spring Festival. Spending this special time with my family brings me great joy.
进阶版范文
Celebrating a Festival with My Family
The Spring Festival is my favorite traditional festival. The festival gives me a special time to spend with my family.
Before the festival comes, we clean our house together. We think that it is a way to sweep away bad luck and bring good luck. On the eve of the Spring Festival, we enjoy a big family dinner. After dinner, we watch the Spring Festival Gala and play games together. At midnight, we set off fireworks in order to celebrate the beginning of a new year.
Spending this special time with my family makes me feel so excited and warm. It reminds me that home is a place full of happiness.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作主题为“和家人一起庆祝节日”，需紧扣三个提示要点：1. 点明最喜欢的中国传统节日（选春节，贴合常见话题）；2. 梳理具体庆祝活动（节前打扫房屋、除夕年夜饭、看春晚、放烟花等）；3. 表达个人感受（温暖、快乐）。写作时要注意词数要求，语句连贯，避免真实姓名及学校信息，结构清晰，分段落呈现。
【解析】
1. 开头段：直接点明最喜欢的节日是春节，引出与家人庆祝的主题；
2. 中间段：按时间顺序叙述庆祝活动，节前打扫房屋寓意迎好运，除夕的家庭聚餐、看春晚、放烟花等细节，覆盖提示要求；
3. 结尾段：表达与家人共度节日的温暖与快乐，抒发真情实感。写作时需注意用词准确，符合英语表达习惯，确保词数达标。
【答案】
Celebrating a Festival with My Family
The Spring Festival is my favorite traditional festival. I love to celebrate it with my family.
Before the festival, we clean our house together to welcome good luck. On the eve of the Spring Festival, we enjoy a big family dinner. After dinner, we watch the Spring Festival Gala and play games together. At midnight, we set off fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year.
I feel so excited and warm during the Spring Festival. Spending this special time with my family brings me great joy.
【知识点】
英语主题写作；节日话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，围绕“和家人庆祝春节”展开，结构清晰，按时间顺序叙述庆祝活动，情感真挚自然，语言流畅，符合词数要求，完美覆盖所有提示要点，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作主题为“和家人一起庆祝节日”，需紧扣三个提示要点：1. 点明最喜欢的中国传统节日（选春节，贴合常见话题）；2. 梳理具体庆祝活动（节前打扫房屋、除夕年夜饭、看春晚、放烟花等）；3. 表达个人感受（温暖、快乐）。写作时要注意词数要求，语句连贯，避免真实姓名及学校信息，结构清晰，分段落呈现。
【解析】
1. 开头段：直接点明最喜欢的节日是春节，引出与家人庆祝的主题；
2. 中间段：按时间顺序叙述庆祝活动，节前打扫房屋寓意迎好运，除夕的家庭聚餐、看春晚、放烟花等细节，覆盖提示要求；
3. 结尾段：表达与家人共度节日的温暖与快乐，抒发真情实感。写作时需注意用词准确，符合英语表达习惯，确保词数达标。
【答案】
Celebrating a Festival with My Family
The Spring Festival is my favorite traditional festival. I love to celebrate it with my family.
Before the festival, we clean our house together to welcome good luck. On the eve of the Spring Festival, we enjoy a big family dinner. After dinner, we watch the Spring Festival Gala and play games together. At midnight, we set off fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year.
I feel so excited and warm during the Spring Festival. Spending this special time with my family brings me great joy.
【知识点】
英语主题写作；节日话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，围绕“和家人庆祝春节”展开，结构清晰，按时间顺序叙述庆祝活动，情感真挚自然，语言流畅，符合词数要求，完美覆盖所有提示要点，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
