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本单元的主题是“中国民间艺术”，要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型介绍某项中国民间艺术。与此相关的写作维度有：①介绍某项中国民间艺术；②介绍某种自己喜欢的手工艺术品。
考查学生介绍中国民间艺术和手工艺品的文章的命题方式有多种，如：根据文字叙述、表格信息、发帖、回帖和思维导图等，写一篇说明文、记叙文、回一封信、发一个电子邮件等。通常要介绍：悠久的历史、外观和材质、制作工艺、使用场景和文化价值等内容。
写作实例
学校在举办关于“中国传统技艺”的英语征文活动，请根据以下提示写一篇 90 词左右的文章，介绍你喜欢的剪纸技艺。要点提示：
1. 剪纸是中国传统技艺，有悠久的历史；所需工具简单，只需要剪刀和纸，红色的纸较为常用；
2. 剪纸的形状多样，如：花卉、鸟、鱼和风景等；用途多样（请举出至少一个例子）；
3. 呼吁保护和传承剪纸工艺。
Paper - cutting
审题指导
1. 体裁：说明文 2. 时态：一般现在时 3. 人称：以第三人称为主
4. 必备词汇：①a traditional Chinese art 一项中国传统技艺 ②have a history of 拥有……的历史 ③a pair of scissors 一把剪刀 ④a colour of luck 幸运的颜色 ⑤in the shape of 呈……形状 ⑥put up 张贴 ⑦be widely used 被广泛应用 ⑧in our everyday lives 在我们日常生活中 ⑨keep it alive 使它延续下去
谋篇布局
佳作剖析
教材原文
P52...has a history of...
P44... in the shape of flowers, birds, fish and landscapes.
P44 At the Spring Festival, we put them up on windows and doors for good luck.
P44...at weddings, we put up “double happiness” in the new couple's home for good wishes.
优秀范文
Paper - cutting
Paper - cutting is a traditional Chinese art. It has a history of over 1,500 years. Paper - cutting only needs simple tools—a pair of scissors and some paper. Chinese people think that red is a colour of luck, so paper - cuts are often red.
Paper - cuts can be in the shape of flowers, birds, fish and landscapes. They are widely used in our everyday lives. At the Spring Festival, we put them up on windows and doors for good luck. At weddings, we put up “double happiness” in the new couple’s home for good wishes.
Let’s work together to protect this traditional Chinese art and keep it alive.
亮点评析
①固定短语 have a history of、a pair of scissors 和宾语从句的使用，体现了作者扎实的语言功底。
②该段正确使用被动语态，是文章的亮点和提分项；恰当使用本单元所学短语和句子，体现了作者学以致用的能力。
③结尾使用祈使句呼吁人们保护并传承这一中国传统技艺。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①know the traditional Chinese art 了解中国传统艺术 ②one of the most popular art forms 最受欢迎的艺术形式之一 ③need a lot of hard work 需要做大量的艰苦工作 ④an important skill 一项重要技能 ⑤be made from 由……制成 ⑥symbols of art and tradition 艺术与传统的象征 ⑦date back to 追溯至…… ⑧It is really important to protect this traditional craft. 保护这项传统工艺确实至关重要。
写作实战
答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D20
中国传统艺术璀璨夺目、绮丽多姿。为了让同学们更多了解中国传统艺术，并推动其保护与传承，本周一你校将举办一场主题为“Talk about a form of traditional art”的英语交流会。你打算介绍中国传统民间艺术——灯笼。请根据下面表格内容，完成发言稿。
要求：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：the Eastern Han Dynasty 东汉；appear 出现；evil spirits 恶魔
As we all know, it is a tradition to watch lanterns at the Lantern Festival. Do you want to know more about Chinese lanterns?
本单元的主题是“中国民间艺术”，要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型介绍某项中国民间艺术。与此相关的写作维度有：①介绍某项中国民间艺术；②介绍某种自己喜欢的手工艺术品。
考查学生介绍中国民间艺术和手工艺品的文章的命题方式有多种，如：根据文字叙述、表格信息、发帖、回帖和思维导图等，写一篇说明文、记叙文、回一封信、发一个电子邮件等。通常要介绍：悠久的历史、外观和材质、制作工艺、使用场景和文化价值等内容。
写作实例
学校在举办关于“中国传统技艺”的英语征文活动，请根据以下提示写一篇 90 词左右的文章，介绍你喜欢的剪纸技艺。要点提示：
1. 剪纸是中国传统技艺，有悠久的历史；所需工具简单，只需要剪刀和纸，红色的纸较为常用；
2. 剪纸的形状多样，如：花卉、鸟、鱼和风景等；用途多样（请举出至少一个例子）；
3. 呼吁保护和传承剪纸工艺。
Paper - cutting
审题指导
1. 体裁：说明文 2. 时态：一般现在时 3. 人称：以第三人称为主
4. 必备词汇：①a traditional Chinese art 一项中国传统技艺 ②have a history of 拥有……的历史 ③a pair of scissors 一把剪刀 ④a colour of luck 幸运的颜色 ⑤in the shape of 呈……形状 ⑥put up 张贴 ⑦be widely used 被广泛应用 ⑧in our everyday lives 在我们日常生活中 ⑨keep it alive 使它延续下去
谋篇布局
佳作剖析
教材原文
P52...has a history of...
P44... in the shape of flowers, birds, fish and landscapes.
P44 At the Spring Festival, we put them up on windows and doors for good luck.
P44...at weddings, we put up “double happiness” in the new couple's home for good wishes.
优秀范文
Paper - cutting
Paper - cutting is a traditional Chinese art. It has a history of over 1,500 years. Paper - cutting only needs simple tools—a pair of scissors and some paper. Chinese people think that red is a colour of luck, so paper - cuts are often red.
Paper - cuts can be in the shape of flowers, birds, fish and landscapes. They are widely used in our everyday lives. At the Spring Festival, we put them up on windows and doors for good luck. At weddings, we put up “double happiness” in the new couple’s home for good wishes.
Let’s work together to protect this traditional Chinese art and keep it alive.
亮点评析
①固定短语 have a history of、a pair of scissors 和宾语从句的使用，体现了作者扎实的语言功底。
②该段正确使用被动语态，是文章的亮点和提分项；恰当使用本单元所学短语和句子，体现了作者学以致用的能力。
③结尾使用祈使句呼吁人们保护并传承这一中国传统技艺。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①know the traditional Chinese art 了解中国传统艺术 ②one of the most popular art forms 最受欢迎的艺术形式之一 ③need a lot of hard work 需要做大量的艰苦工作 ④an important skill 一项重要技能 ⑤be made from 由……制成 ⑥symbols of art and tradition 艺术与传统的象征 ⑦date back to 追溯至…… ⑧It is really important to protect this traditional craft. 保护这项传统工艺确实至关重要。
写作实战
答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D20
中国传统艺术璀璨夺目、绮丽多姿。为了让同学们更多了解中国传统艺术，并推动其保护与传承，本周一你校将举办一场主题为“Talk about a form of traditional art”的英语交流会。你打算介绍中国传统民间艺术——灯笼。请根据下面表格内容，完成发言稿。
要求：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：the Eastern Han Dynasty 东汉；appear 出现；evil spirits 恶魔
As we all know, it is a tradition to watch lanterns at the Lantern Festival. Do you want to know more about Chinese lanterns?
Chinese lanterns were first made more than 2,000 years ago. Paper lanterns appeared during the Eastern Han Dynasty. People also used bamboo, wood and silk to make lanterns.
At first, people hung lanterns in front of their doors to drive away evil spirits. Later lanterns started to play an important role in a lot of celebrations, because people think lanterns can bring them happiness and good luck.
Now the lantern is one of the traditional Chinese art forms. It also becomes a symbol of China.
答案
Paper-cutting is a traditional Chinese art with a long history. Paper-cutting only needs a pair of scissors and paper.Chinese people think red is a colour of luck, so paper-cuts are often made of red paper.Paper-cuts can be in different shapes like flowers, birds, fish and landscapes. They are widely used in our everyday lives.At the Spring Festival, we put up paper-cuts on windows or doors for good wishes. At weddings, we stick paper-cuts with "double happiness" on the walls.Let’s work together to protect this traditional art and pass it on to the next generation.
基础版范文As we all know, it is a tradition to watch lanterns at the Lantern Festival. Do you want to know more about Chinese lanterns?Chinese lanterns were first made more than 2,000 years ago. Paper lanterns appeared during the Eastern Han Dynasty. People also used bamboo, wood and silk to make lanterns.At first, people hung lanterns in front of their doors to drive away evil spirits. Later lanterns started to play an important role in a lot of celebrations, because people think lanterns can bring them happiness and good luck. Now the lantern is one of the traditional Chinese art forms. It also becomes a symbol of China.进阶版范文As we all know, it is a tradition to watch lanterns at the Lantern Festival. Do you want to know more about Chinese lanterns?Chinese lanterns dates from more than 2,000 years ago. Later in the Eastern Han Dynasty, people started to make lanterns with paper. Other materials were also used to make lanterns, such as bamboo, wood and silk.At first, people hung lanterns in front of their doors to drive away evil spirits. Later lanterns started to play an important role in a lot of celebrations, because people think lanterns can bring them happiness and good luck. Nowadays, as one of the traditional Chinese art forms, the lantern has become a symbol of China.
基础版范文As we all know, it is a tradition to watch lanterns at the Lantern Festival. Do you want to know more about Chinese lanterns?Chinese lanterns were first made more than 2,000 years ago. Paper lanterns appeared during the Eastern Han Dynasty. People also used bamboo, wood and silk to make lanterns.At first, people hung lanterns in front of their doors to drive away evil spirits. Later lanterns started to play an important role in a lot of celebrations, because people think lanterns can bring them happiness and good luck. Now the lantern is one of the traditional Chinese art forms. It also becomes a symbol of China.进阶版范文As we all know, it is a tradition to watch lanterns at the Lantern Festival. Do you want to know more about Chinese lanterns?Chinese lanterns dates from more than 2,000 years ago. Later in the Eastern Han Dynasty, people started to make lanterns with paper. Other materials were also used to make lanterns, such as bamboo, wood and silk.At first, people hung lanterns in front of their doors to drive away evil spirits. Later lanterns started to play an important role in a lot of celebrations, because people think lanterns can bring them happiness and good luck. Nowadays, as one of the traditional Chinese art forms, the lantern has become a symbol of China.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语说明文写作题，要求介绍中国传统民间艺术——灯笼。解题思路：1. 审题：明确体裁为说明文，时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主，词数80左右；2. 谋篇：承接给定开头，依次介绍灯笼的历史（起源于东汉，距今2000多年）、制作材料（纸、竹、木、丝等）、用途与文化意义（最初驱邪，后用于庆祝活动，象征好运），最后点明灯笼的地位与象征；3. 语言：运用单元所学短语，确保语句连贯，符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头：承接题目给定句子，引出灯笼话题；2. 介绍历史与材料：说明灯笼的起源时间及制作材料；3. 阐述用途与意义：讲述灯笼最初驱邪的作用，后来在庆祝活动中的应用及象征意义；4. 结尾：点明灯笼是中国传统艺术形式之一，是中国的象征，收束全文。
【答案】
As we all know, it is a tradition to watch lanterns at the Lantern Festival. Do you want to know more about Chinese lanterns?Chinese lanterns date from more than 2,000 years ago. Later in the Eastern Han Dynasty, people started to make lanterns with paper. Other materials were also used to make lanterns, such as bamboo, wood and silk.At first, people hung lanterns in front of their doors to drive away evil spirits. Later lanterns started to play an important role in a lot of celebrations, because people think lanterns can bring them happiness and good luck. Nowadays, as one of the traditional Chinese art forms, the lantern has become a symbol of China.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作、中国传统艺术词汇运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，涵盖灯笼的历史、材料、用途及文化意义，结构清晰，语言流畅，符合题目要求，运用了单元所学短语和句型，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语说明文写作题，要求介绍中国传统民间艺术——灯笼。解题思路：1. 审题：明确体裁为说明文，时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主，词数80左右；2. 谋篇：承接给定开头，依次介绍灯笼的历史（起源于东汉，距今2000多年）、制作材料（纸、竹、木、丝等）、用途与文化意义（最初驱邪，后用于庆祝活动，象征好运），最后点明灯笼的地位与象征；3. 语言：运用单元所学短语，确保语句连贯，符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头：承接题目给定句子，引出灯笼话题；2. 介绍历史与材料：说明灯笼的起源时间及制作材料；3. 阐述用途与意义：讲述灯笼最初驱邪的作用，后来在庆祝活动中的应用及象征意义；4. 结尾：点明灯笼是中国传统艺术形式之一，是中国的象征，收束全文。
【答案】
As we all know, it is a tradition to watch lanterns at the Lantern Festival. Do you want to know more about Chinese lanterns?Chinese lanterns date from more than 2,000 years ago. Later in the Eastern Han Dynasty, people started to make lanterns with paper. Other materials were also used to make lanterns, such as bamboo, wood and silk.At first, people hung lanterns in front of their doors to drive away evil spirits. Later lanterns started to play an important role in a lot of celebrations, because people think lanterns can bring them happiness and good luck. Nowadays, as one of the traditional Chinese art forms, the lantern has become a symbol of China.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作、中国传统艺术词汇运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，涵盖灯笼的历史、材料、用途及文化意义，结构清晰，语言流畅，符合题目要求，运用了单元所学短语和句型，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
