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九、2025·连云港新海实验中学期中书面表达16分
假如你是Daniel，想邀请John来你的新家做客。请你根据下面提供的信息，用英文完成一封邀请信。
要求：1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 内容需包含思维导图中的要点，可以适当发挥；3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，字迹工整。
Dear John,
I would like to invite you to my new home.
Yours,
Daniel
假如你是Daniel，想邀请John来你的新家做客。请你根据下面提供的信息，用英文完成一封邀请信。
要求：1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 内容需包含思维导图中的要点，可以适当发挥；3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，字迹工整。
Dear John,
I would like to invite you to my new home.
Yours,
Daniel
答案
九、One possible version:
Dear John,
I would like to invite you to my new home.
My home is in the city centre and it has two floors. There
is a garden in front of my house. I grow flowers in it when
spring comes. Behind my house is Starlight Road. Walk along
→当句子的主语为名词短语时,behind
引导的介词短语可以位于句首引起完全倒装,常见于强调地
点的场景。
Starlight Road and turn right at the second crossing, and then
you'll find Moonlight Park. You may also find my new home
next to the park.
There is a big bedroom on the first floor. We can stay
there at night. If you want to watch films, we can go to the
second floor. There is a home cinema for us to enjoy.
Besides, my neighbours are kind and friendly.
I'm sure you will have a good time here.
Yours,
Daniel
思路引导[总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为邀请信。②时态:主要为“一
般现在时”。③提示:写作要点已给出,学生应注意不要遗
漏提示要点,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍新家的位置和房子的情况;第二步,介绍路线;
第三步,介绍邻居的情况。
[亮点词汇]
①in front of在……前面 ②at the second crossing在第二
个十字路口 ③next to在……旁边,挨着 ④have a good
time玩得愉快
[高分句型]
①I grow flowers in it when spring comes. when引导的时
间状语从句
②Walk along Starlight Road and turn right at the second
crossing, and then you'll find Moonlight Park. 祈使句+
and+一般将来时
③If you want to watch films, we can go to the second floor.
if引导的条件状语从句
Dear John,
I would like to invite you to my new home.
My home is in the city centre and it has two floors. There
is a garden in front of my house. I grow flowers in it when
spring comes. Behind my house is Starlight Road. Walk along
→当句子的主语为名词短语时,behind
引导的介词短语可以位于句首引起完全倒装,常见于强调地
点的场景。
Starlight Road and turn right at the second crossing, and then
you'll find Moonlight Park. You may also find my new home
next to the park.
There is a big bedroom on the first floor. We can stay
there at night. If you want to watch films, we can go to the
second floor. There is a home cinema for us to enjoy.
Besides, my neighbours are kind and friendly.
I'm sure you will have a good time here.
Yours,
Daniel
思路引导[总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为邀请信。②时态:主要为“一
般现在时”。③提示:写作要点已给出,学生应注意不要遗
漏提示要点,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍新家的位置和房子的情况;第二步,介绍路线;
第三步,介绍邻居的情况。
[亮点词汇]
①in front of在……前面 ②at the second crossing在第二
个十字路口 ③next to在……旁边,挨着 ④have a good
time玩得愉快
[高分句型]
①I grow flowers in it when spring comes. when引导的时
间状语从句
②Walk along Starlight Road and turn right at the second
crossing, and then you'll find Moonlight Park. 祈使句+
and+一般将来时
③If you want to watch films, we can go to the second floor.
if引导的条件状语从句
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一封邀请信，需围绕思维导图的“位置、路线、房子情况、邻居”四个核心要点展开。首先明确写作结构：开头已给出，先介绍新家的位置与房子基本情况，再说明前往新家的路线，接着补充房子的功能细节，最后介绍邻居特点并表达期待。写作时需用一般现在时，语句连贯，适当添加细节丰富内容，控制字数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 介绍新家位置与房子：说明新家在市中心，有两层，前面有花园，可添加“春天在花园种花”的细节，后面是星光路；
2. 说明路线：沿着星光路走，在第二个十字路口右转，会看到月光公园，新家就在公园旁边；
3. 补充房子功能：一楼有卧室，二楼有家庭影院，可一起看电影；
4. 介绍邻居：邻居友善；
5. 结尾表达期待对方到来的心情，完成邀请信。
【答案】
Dear John,
I would like to invite you to my new home.
My home is in the city centre and it has two floors. There is a garden in front of my house. I grow flowers in it when spring comes. Behind my house is Starlight Road. Walk along Starlight Road and turn right at the second crossing, and then you'll find Moonlight Park. You may also find my new home next to the park.
There is a big bedroom on the first floor. We can stay there at night. If you want to watch films, we can go to the second floor. There is a home cinema for us to enjoy.
Besides, my neighbours are kind and friendly.
I'm sure you will have a good time here.
Yours,
Daniel
【知识点】
邀请信写作、英语方位表达、应用文写作
【点评】
本文为符合要求的邀请信，覆盖了思维导图所有要点，结构清晰，时态正确，语句通顺，适当添加细节使内容更丰富，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求写一封邀请信，需围绕思维导图的“位置、路线、房子情况、邻居”四个核心要点展开。首先明确写作结构：开头已给出，先介绍新家的位置与房子基本情况，再说明前往新家的路线，接着补充房子的功能细节，最后介绍邻居特点并表达期待。写作时需用一般现在时，语句连贯，适当添加细节丰富内容，控制字数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 介绍新家位置与房子：说明新家在市中心，有两层，前面有花园，可添加“春天在花园种花”的细节，后面是星光路；
2. 说明路线：沿着星光路走，在第二个十字路口右转，会看到月光公园，新家就在公园旁边；
3. 补充房子功能：一楼有卧室，二楼有家庭影院，可一起看电影；
4. 介绍邻居：邻居友善；
5. 结尾表达期待对方到来的心情，完成邀请信。
【答案】
Dear John,
I would like to invite you to my new home.
My home is in the city centre and it has two floors. There is a garden in front of my house. I grow flowers in it when spring comes. Behind my house is Starlight Road. Walk along Starlight Road and turn right at the second crossing, and then you'll find Moonlight Park. You may also find my new home next to the park.
There is a big bedroom on the first floor. We can stay there at night. If you want to watch films, we can go to the second floor. There is a home cinema for us to enjoy.
Besides, my neighbours are kind and friendly.
I'm sure you will have a good time here.
Yours,
Daniel
【知识点】
邀请信写作、英语方位表达、应用文写作
【点评】
本文为符合要求的邀请信，覆盖了思维导图所有要点，结构清晰，时态正确，语句通顺，适当添加细节使内容更丰富，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
