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七、书面表达
假如你被学校评为“运动之星”，英语老师邀请你在本周五的英语课上和同学分享你的运动情况，请根据下面的提示问题，用英语写一篇发言稿。
提示问题：
1. 你最喜欢什么运动? 你平时和谁一起做这项运动?
2. 体育课你会干什么? 你认为体育课上的活动怎么样?
3. 作为“运动之星”，关于做运动，你有什么好的建议给大家?
写作要求：
1. 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
2. 词数 70 左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear classmates，
I’m happy to be a Sports Star this term.
Thank you.
假如你被学校评为“运动之星”，英语老师邀请你在本周五的英语课上和同学分享你的运动情况，请根据下面的提示问题，用英语写一篇发言稿。
提示问题：
1. 你最喜欢什么运动? 你平时和谁一起做这项运动?
2. 体育课你会干什么? 你认为体育课上的活动怎么样?
3. 作为“运动之星”，关于做运动，你有什么好的建议给大家?
写作要求：
1. 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
2. 词数 70 左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear classmates，
I’m happy to be a Sports Star this term.
Thank you.
答案
One possible version:
Dear classmates,
I’m happy to be a Sports Star this term. My favourite sport is playing basketball. I like to play basketball with my friends after school. I have three PE classes every week. In PE classes, my classmates and I always play many kinds of ball games, such as football, baseball, basketball and ping-pong. I think they are interesting and they are good for our health.
I also want to tell you something about doing sports. First, it’s important to warm up before exercise. Second, you need to wear sports shoes when you do sports. Third, you can take some water with you.
Hope everyone of us can love sports and keep fit.
Thank you.
Dear classmates,
I’m happy to be a Sports Star this term. My favourite sport is playing basketball. I like to play basketball with my friends after school. I have three PE classes every week. In PE classes, my classmates and I always play many kinds of ball games, such as football, baseball, basketball and ping-pong. I think they are interesting and they are good for our health.
I also want to tell you something about doing sports. First, it’s important to warm up before exercise. Second, you need to wear sports shoes when you do sports. Third, you can take some water with you.
Hope everyone of us can love sports and keep fit.
Thank you.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道题要明确写作身份是获评“运动之星”的学生，文体是英语课的分享发言稿，要逐一对应题干给出的3个提示问题避免漏点：第一步先回应第一个问题，点明自己最喜欢的运动，说明日常和谁一起开展这项运动；第二步回应第二个问题，介绍自己在体育课的常规活动，再说明自己对体育课活动的评价；第三步回应第三个问题，给出几条贴合学生日常的合理运动建议，最后补充一句呼吁大家坚持运动的语句，衔接好题干给出的开头和结尾，控制总词数在70左右，注意不要出现真实的地名、校名、人名，行文风格自然口语化，符合课堂分享的场景即可。
【解析】
1. 承接题干给出的开头句，首先回答第一个提示要点：明确写出自己最喜欢的运动是打篮球，说明日常放学后会和朋友一起打球，完成第一个问题的内容覆盖。
2. 接下来回答第二个提示要点：先说明自己在体育课上会和同学参与各类球类运动，比如足球、棒球、篮球、乒乓球，再表达自己的看法，认为这些活动很有趣，对健康有益，完成第二个问题的内容覆盖。
3. 最后回答第三个提示要点：给出3条实用的运动建议，分别是运动前热身、运动时穿运动鞋、随身带饮用水，最后补充一句呼吁大家热爱运动、保持健康的语句，衔接题干给出的结尾Thank you，整体行文流畅，符合词数要求，没有出现违规的真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear classmates,
I’m happy to be a Sports Star this term. My favourite sport is playing basketball. I like to play basketball with my friends after school. I have three PE classes every week. In PE classes, my classmates and I always play many kinds of ball games, such as football, baseball, basketball and ping-pong. I think they are interesting and they are good for our health.
I also want to tell you something about doing sports. First, it’s important to warm up before exercise. Second, you need to wear sports shoes when you do sports. Third, you can take some water with you.
Hope everyone of us can love sports and keep fit.
Thank you.
【知识点】
发言稿写作，运动类话题，书面表达要点整合
【点评】
本题属于校园场景下的基础应用文写作题，话题贴合学生日常学习生活，所有写作提示清晰明确，学生只需要按照提示顺序逐一对应填充内容，适当添加简单的衔接语句，控制好词数，规避真实个人信息即可完成合格的作文，同时题目也引导学生了解正确的运动常识，兼具知识性和实用性。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道题要明确写作身份是获评“运动之星”的学生，文体是英语课的分享发言稿，要逐一对应题干给出的3个提示问题避免漏点：第一步先回应第一个问题，点明自己最喜欢的运动，说明日常和谁一起开展这项运动；第二步回应第二个问题，介绍自己在体育课的常规活动，再说明自己对体育课活动的评价；第三步回应第三个问题，给出几条贴合学生日常的合理运动建议，最后补充一句呼吁大家坚持运动的语句，衔接好题干给出的开头和结尾，控制总词数在70左右，注意不要出现真实的地名、校名、人名，行文风格自然口语化，符合课堂分享的场景即可。
【解析】
1. 承接题干给出的开头句，首先回答第一个提示要点：明确写出自己最喜欢的运动是打篮球，说明日常放学后会和朋友一起打球，完成第一个问题的内容覆盖。
2. 接下来回答第二个提示要点：先说明自己在体育课上会和同学参与各类球类运动，比如足球、棒球、篮球、乒乓球，再表达自己的看法，认为这些活动很有趣，对健康有益，完成第二个问题的内容覆盖。
3. 最后回答第三个提示要点：给出3条实用的运动建议，分别是运动前热身、运动时穿运动鞋、随身带饮用水，最后补充一句呼吁大家热爱运动、保持健康的语句，衔接题干给出的结尾Thank you，整体行文流畅，符合词数要求，没有出现违规的真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear classmates,
I’m happy to be a Sports Star this term. My favourite sport is playing basketball. I like to play basketball with my friends after school. I have three PE classes every week. In PE classes, my classmates and I always play many kinds of ball games, such as football, baseball, basketball and ping-pong. I think they are interesting and they are good for our health.
I also want to tell you something about doing sports. First, it’s important to warm up before exercise. Second, you need to wear sports shoes when you do sports. Third, you can take some water with you.
Hope everyone of us can love sports and keep fit.
Thank you.
【知识点】
发言稿写作，运动类话题，书面表达要点整合
【点评】
本题属于校园场景下的基础应用文写作题，话题贴合学生日常学习生活，所有写作提示清晰明确，学生只需要按照提示顺序逐一对应填充内容，适当添加简单的衔接语句，控制好词数，规避真实个人信息即可完成合格的作文，同时题目也引导学生了解正确的运动常识，兼具知识性和实用性。
【难度系数】
0.7
