假如你是Anna,昨天你们一家为奶奶庆祝了75岁生日。请根据提示,讲述这一天的经历。要求语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,不少于5句话。注意使用一般过去时。
参考词汇:buy flowers,make a cake,have a big dinner

参考词汇:buy flowers,make a cake,have a big dinner
答案
Yesterday was my grandma's 75th birthday. Her birthday was on the 29th of August.
In the morning, my mother and I made a big birthday cake. And my father bought some flowers. In the evening, we had a big dinner together. We ate the birthday cake and took many photos. Grandma was very happy. I felt excited because I could make my grandma happy. I love her very much.
In the morning, my mother and I made a big birthday cake. And my father bought some flowers. In the evening, we had a big dinner together. We ate the birthday cake and took many photos. Grandma was very happy. I felt excited because I could make my grandma happy. I love her very much.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求:以Anna的身份,用一般过去时讲述昨天为奶奶庆祝75岁生日的经历,需结合插图(生日在8月29日)和参考词汇(make a cake、buy flowers、have a big dinner),语句通顺连贯,不少于5句。解题思路:1. 开篇点明奶奶75岁生日的时间(对应插图的August 29);2. 分时段叙述活动:早上和妈妈做蛋糕,爸爸买花;3. 晚上全家一起吃大餐,补充合理细节(如吃蛋糕、拍照);4. 表达家人的感受,使内容完整连贯。
【解析】写作时需注意:1. 时态统一用一般过去时,动词使用过去式(如was, made, bought等);2. 结合参考词汇和插图信息,确保内容符合要求;3. 语句连贯,加入细节满足不少于5句的要求;4. 人称用第一人称“我(Anna)”。具体写作时,先点明生日时间,再分早、晚的活动,最后写感受,形成完整叙事。
【答案】Yesterday was my grandma's 75th birthday. Her birthday was on the 29th of August. In the morning, my mother and I made a big birthday cake. And my father bought some flowers. In the evening, we had a big dinner together. We ate the birthday cake and took many photos. Grandma was very happy. I felt excited because I could make my grandma happy. I love her very much.
【知识点】一般过去时、英语记叙文写作
【点评】本题结合图片和提示词汇,考查学生的英语叙事能力和一般过去时的运用,贴近学生生活,易于上手,能有效考查学生的语言综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时需注意:1. 时态统一用一般过去时,动词使用过去式(如was, made, bought等);2. 结合参考词汇和插图信息,确保内容符合要求;3. 语句连贯,加入细节满足不少于5句的要求;4. 人称用第一人称“我(Anna)”。具体写作时,先点明生日时间,再分早、晚的活动,最后写感受,形成完整叙事。
【答案】Yesterday was my grandma's 75th birthday. Her birthday was on the 29th of August. In the morning, my mother and I made a big birthday cake. And my father bought some flowers. In the evening, we had a big dinner together. We ate the birthday cake and took many photos. Grandma was very happy. I felt excited because I could make my grandma happy. I love her very much.
【知识点】一般过去时、英语记叙文写作
【点评】本题结合图片和提示词汇,考查学生的英语叙事能力和一般过去时的运用,贴近学生生活,易于上手,能有效考查学生的语言综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
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