【小试牛刀】
好奇心能推动人们探索未知,造就伟大的科学成就。下周五,学校将举办“校园科学日”活动。为此,英语俱乐部面向全体同学征集以“好奇心”为主题的文章,请你根据下图提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。

要求:80—100词,行文连贯,可适当发挥,文中不得出现真实校名、人名。
好奇心能推动人们探索未知,造就伟大的科学成就。下周五,学校将举办“校园科学日”活动。为此,英语俱乐部面向全体同学征集以“好奇心”为主题的文章,请你根据下图提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
要求:80—100词,行文连贯,可适当发挥,文中不得出现真实校名、人名。
答案
【小试牛刀】
Possible version:
As is known to us all, curiosity is the best teacher in our life. It encourages us to explore the unknown and make countless great achievements for the world.
For example, Cai Lun, a famous ancient Chinese inventor, was curious about better writing materials. He spent years testing different materials and greatly improved papermaking technology. His invention played an important role in spreading Chinese culture worldwide.
Let's look at Yuan Longping, a great modern Chinese scientist. He was curious about increasing rice output to end hunger. He kept doing experiments patiently and finally developed hybrid rice. His great work has helped feed billions of people.
As students, we should stay curious in our daily life. First, we should be interested in small things around us. Second, we need to ask more questions. In this way, curiosity can guide us to keep learning and make steady progress.
Possible version:
As is known to us all, curiosity is the best teacher in our life. It encourages us to explore the unknown and make countless great achievements for the world.
For example, Cai Lun, a famous ancient Chinese inventor, was curious about better writing materials. He spent years testing different materials and greatly improved papermaking technology. His invention played an important role in spreading Chinese culture worldwide.
Let's look at Yuan Longping, a great modern Chinese scientist. He was curious about increasing rice output to end hunger. He kept doing experiments patiently and finally developed hybrid rice. His great work has helped feed billions of people.
As students, we should stay curious in our daily life. First, we should be interested in small things around us. Second, we need to ask more questions. In this way, curiosity can guide us to keep learning and make steady progress.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题写作题,要求围绕“好奇心”主题,结合思维导图的三个要点(好奇心的重要性、科学家因好奇取得成就的例子、日常保持好奇心的方法)完成短文。写作思路:1. 开篇点明好奇心的重要性,引出主题;2. 选取典型科学家事例(如蔡伦、袁隆平),论证好奇心推动成就;3. 结合学生身份,说明日常保持好奇心的具体做法,确保行文连贯,词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 开头用简洁语句点明好奇心是人生最好的老师,强调其对探索未知、取得成就的作用;2. 列举蔡伦因好奇改进造纸术、袁隆平因好奇研发杂交水稻的事例,支撑好奇心的重要性;3. 针对学生群体,提出关注身边小事、多提问等保持好奇心的方法;最后检查词数(80-100词),确保无真实校名、人名,行文流畅。
【答案】
Possible version:
As is known to us all, curiosity is the best teacher in our life. It encourages us to explore the unknown and make countless great achievements for the world.
For example, Cai Lun, a famous ancient Chinese inventor, was curious about better writing materials. He spent years testing different materials and greatly improved papermaking technology. His invention played an important role in spreading Chinese culture worldwide.
Let's look at Yuan Longping, a great modern Chinese scientist. He was curious about increasing rice output to end hunger. He kept doing experiments patiently and finally developed hybrid rice. His great work has helped feed billions of people.
As students, we should stay curious in our daily life. First, we should be interested in small things around us. Second, we need to ask more questions. In this way, curiosity can guide us to keep learning and make steady progress.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、记叙文写作
【点评】
范文结构清晰,紧扣主题,通过具体事例论证好奇心的重要性,同时给出学生保持好奇心的可行方法,语言流畅自然,符合投稿要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语话题写作题,要求围绕“好奇心”主题,结合思维导图的三个要点(好奇心的重要性、科学家因好奇取得成就的例子、日常保持好奇心的方法)完成短文。写作思路:1. 开篇点明好奇心的重要性,引出主题;2. 选取典型科学家事例(如蔡伦、袁隆平),论证好奇心推动成就;3. 结合学生身份,说明日常保持好奇心的具体做法,确保行文连贯,词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 开头用简洁语句点明好奇心是人生最好的老师,强调其对探索未知、取得成就的作用;2. 列举蔡伦因好奇改进造纸术、袁隆平因好奇研发杂交水稻的事例,支撑好奇心的重要性;3. 针对学生群体,提出关注身边小事、多提问等保持好奇心的方法;最后检查词数(80-100词),确保无真实校名、人名,行文流畅。
【答案】
Possible version:
As is known to us all, curiosity is the best teacher in our life. It encourages us to explore the unknown and make countless great achievements for the world.
For example, Cai Lun, a famous ancient Chinese inventor, was curious about better writing materials. He spent years testing different materials and greatly improved papermaking technology. His invention played an important role in spreading Chinese culture worldwide.
Let's look at Yuan Longping, a great modern Chinese scientist. He was curious about increasing rice output to end hunger. He kept doing experiments patiently and finally developed hybrid rice. His great work has helped feed billions of people.
As students, we should stay curious in our daily life. First, we should be interested in small things around us. Second, we need to ask more questions. In this way, curiosity can guide us to keep learning and make steady progress.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、记叙文写作
【点评】
范文结构清晰,紧扣主题,通过具体事例论证好奇心的重要性,同时给出学生保持好奇心的可行方法,语言流畅自然,符合投稿要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
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