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[2025 北京市丰台区期末]假设你是李华，你们学校正在举办主题为“绿色家园，从我做起”的英语演讲比赛。你选择调查你们小区家庭资源浪费情况，下图是部分统计结果。请写一篇 90 词左右的演讲稿，简要说明图表内容，并对如何建设绿色家园提出建议。
What are the main waste problems in our community?
Type of waste
▭ Waste of Energy and Water ▦ Food Waste
▧ Overuse of Disposables Other Waste
[2025 北京市丰台区期末]假设你是李华，你们学校正在举办主题为“绿色家园，从我做起”的英语演讲比赛。你选择调查你们小区家庭资源浪费情况，下图是部分统计结果。请写一篇 90 词左右的演讲稿，简要说明图表内容，并对如何建设绿色家园提出建议。
What are the main waste problems in our community?
Type of waste
▭ Waste of Energy and Water ▦ Food Waste
▧ Overuse of Disposables Other Waste
答案
Dear teachers and friends,
It's my great honor to give a speech here. I recently did a survey on waste problems in our community. The result shows 45% of the waste is energy and water waste, 25% is overuse of disposables, 20% is food waste, and the rest 10% is other waste.
To build a green home, we should turn off lights and taps in time, use cloth bags instead of disposable products, and never order more food than we can finish. Small actions can make a big difference! Let's take action now.
It's my great honor to give a speech here. I recently did a survey on waste problems in our community. The result shows 45% of the waste is energy and water waste, 25% is overuse of disposables, 20% is food waste, and the rest 10% is other waste.
To build a green home, we should turn off lights and taps in time, use cloth bags instead of disposable products, and never order more food than we can finish. Small actions can make a big difference! Let's take action now.
解析
【分析】
作为李华撰写演讲稿，需遵循英语应用文（演讲稿）的格式：开头问候并点明演讲主题与调查背景，准确解读饼图的四类浪费占比，结合浪费问题提出贴合主题的环保建议，最后呼吁行动，同时控制词数在90左右，语言要正式且亲切。
【解析】
1. 开头：以“Dear teachers and friends”问候，说明演讲荣幸及小区浪费调查的背景；
2. 解读图表：对应饼图的四个类别及百分比，清晰说明45%为能源和水浪费、25%为一次性用品过度使用、20%为食物浪费、10%为其他浪费；
3. 提出建议：针对浪费问题给出具体可行的环保措施，如随手关水电、用布袋代替一次性用品、适量点餐；
4. 结尾：用简洁呼吁句收尾，符合演讲稿的感染力要求，总词数控制在规定范围内。
【答案】
Dear teachers and friends,
It's my great honor to give a speech here. I recently did a survey on waste problems in our community. The result shows 45% of the waste is energy and water waste, 25% is overuse of disposables, 20% is food waste, and the rest 10% is other waste.
To build a green home, we should turn off lights and taps in time, use cloth bags instead of disposable products, and never order more food than we can finish. Small actions can make a big difference! Let's take action now.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、图表信息解读、环保话题表达
【点评】
本题考查英语应用文写作能力，要求结合给定饼图信息完成演讲稿，需准确解读图表数据并提出合理建议，兼顾语言规范性与内容完整性，符合期末测试的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
作为李华撰写演讲稿，需遵循英语应用文（演讲稿）的格式：开头问候并点明演讲主题与调查背景，准确解读饼图的四类浪费占比，结合浪费问题提出贴合主题的环保建议，最后呼吁行动，同时控制词数在90左右，语言要正式且亲切。
【解析】
1. 开头：以“Dear teachers and friends”问候，说明演讲荣幸及小区浪费调查的背景；
2. 解读图表：对应饼图的四个类别及百分比，清晰说明45%为能源和水浪费、25%为一次性用品过度使用、20%为食物浪费、10%为其他浪费；
3. 提出建议：针对浪费问题给出具体可行的环保措施，如随手关水电、用布袋代替一次性用品、适量点餐；
4. 结尾：用简洁呼吁句收尾，符合演讲稿的感染力要求，总词数控制在规定范围内。
【答案】
Dear teachers and friends,
It's my great honor to give a speech here. I recently did a survey on waste problems in our community. The result shows 45% of the waste is energy and water waste, 25% is overuse of disposables, 20% is food waste, and the rest 10% is other waste.
To build a green home, we should turn off lights and taps in time, use cloth bags instead of disposable products, and never order more food than we can finish. Small actions can make a big difference! Let's take action now.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、图表信息解读、环保话题表达
【点评】
本题考查英语应用文写作能力，要求结合给定饼图信息完成演讲稿，需准确解读图表数据并提出合理建议，兼顾语言规范性与内容完整性，符合期末测试的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
素材积累»
[开头句]
1. A clean environment can help people feel happy and keep healthy. （益处）
2. As students, we should try our best to protect the environment. （责任）
[中间句]
1. It not only can protect the environment, but also is good for our health. （益处）
2. We can save energy by turning off the lights when leaving the room. （做法）
[结尾句]
1. I think if everyone does something, our environment will become better. （希望）
2. Let's go plastic-free! （号召）
[名言警句]
Protect the earth today, for our tomorrow.
守护今日的地球，为了我们的明天。
写作演练»
为了引导学生爱护校园，维护共同的学习生活环境，近日，学校决定开展“Let's go green in our school”的主题演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇90词左右的演讲稿。
[思路点拨]
1. 体裁:说明文;2. 人称:第一人称;3. 时态:一般现在时。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Let's go green in our school
Boys and girls,
As students, we should actively take part in environmental protection in our school.
Thank you!
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
[开头句]
1. A clean environment can help people feel happy and keep healthy. （益处）
2. As students, we should try our best to protect the environment. （责任）
[中间句]
1. It not only can protect the environment, but also is good for our health. （益处）
2. We can save energy by turning off the lights when leaving the room. （做法）
[结尾句]
1. I think if everyone does something, our environment will become better. （希望）
2. Let's go plastic-free! （号召）
[名言警句]
Protect the earth today, for our tomorrow.
守护今日的地球，为了我们的明天。
写作演练»
为了引导学生爱护校园，维护共同的学习生活环境，近日，学校决定开展“Let's go green in our school”的主题演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇90词左右的演讲稿。
[思路点拨]
1. 体裁:说明文;2. 人称:第一人称;3. 时态:一般现在时。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Let's go green in our school
Boys and girls,
As students, we should actively take part in environmental protection in our school.
Here is what we can do. First, we should save resources. Turn off lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Use both sides of paper.
Second, sort rubbish correctly and collect recyclable items like plastic bottles. This helps reduce waste.
Going green in our school is meaningful. It saves resources, protects our environment, and makes our campus cleaner and more beautiful.
It also helps shape a green school culture and spreads the concept of sustainable living.
Let's start from today. Take small actions in our daily life.
Together, we can make our school a greener and better place for everyone.
Thank you!
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
答案
One possible version:
Let’s go green in our school
Boys and girls,
As students, we should actively take part in environmental protection in our school.
Here is what we can do. First, we should save resources. Turn off lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Use both sides of paper. Second, sort rubbish correctly and collect recyclable items like plastic bottles. This helps reduce waste.
Going green in our school is meaningful. It saves resources, protects our environment, and makes our campus cleaner and more beautiful. It also helps shape a green school culture and spreads the concept of sustainable living.
Let’s start from today. Take small actions in our daily life. Together, we can make our school a greener and better place for everyone.
Thank you!
Let’s go green in our school
Boys and girls,
As students, we should actively take part in environmental protection in our school.
Here is what we can do. First, we should save resources. Turn off lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Use both sides of paper. Second, sort rubbish correctly and collect recyclable items like plastic bottles. This helps reduce waste.
Going green in our school is meaningful. It saves resources, protects our environment, and makes our campus cleaner and more beautiful. It also helps shape a green school culture and spreads the concept of sustainable living.
Let’s start from today. Take small actions in our daily life. Together, we can make our school a greener and better place for everyone.
Thank you!
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一篇主题为“Let's go green in our school”的英语演讲稿，需按照“开篇引入、主体阐述、结尾号召”的结构完成。首先开篇点题，说明学生应参与校园环保；主体部分先列举校园环保的具体做法，再阐述环保的意义；结尾发出号召，呼吁从日常小事做起。需结合给定素材，确保符合字数、时态和人称要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇：直接点题，呼应主题，说明学生应积极参与校园环保；
2. 主体：① 列举具体做法：离开教室时关灯、风扇，双面用纸，正确分类垃圾；② 阐述意义：节约资源、保护环境、塑造绿色校园文化；
3. 结尾：发出号召，呼吁从自身小事做起，共同打造绿色校园。
按照上述结构，结合素材内容组织语言，形成符合要求的演讲稿。
【答案】
Let’s go green in our school
Boys and girls,
As students, we should actively take part in environmental protection in our school.
Here is what we can do. First, we should save resources. Turn off lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Use both sides of paper. Second, sort rubbish correctly and collect recyclable items like plastic bottles. This helps reduce waste.
Going green in our school is meaningful. It saves resources, protects our environment, and makes our campus cleaner and more beautiful. It also helps shape a green school culture and spreads the concept of sustainable living.
Let’s start from today. Take small actions in our daily life. Together, we can make our school a greener and better place for everyone.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作；环境保护主题写作
【点评】
这篇演讲稿结构清晰，紧扣主题，涵盖环保做法、意义和号召，语言简洁流畅，符合字数要求，是一篇优秀的范文，适合学生学习借鉴。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求写一篇主题为“Let's go green in our school”的英语演讲稿，需按照“开篇引入、主体阐述、结尾号召”的结构完成。首先开篇点题，说明学生应参与校园环保；主体部分先列举校园环保的具体做法，再阐述环保的意义；结尾发出号召，呼吁从日常小事做起。需结合给定素材，确保符合字数、时态和人称要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇：直接点题，呼应主题，说明学生应积极参与校园环保；
2. 主体：① 列举具体做法：离开教室时关灯、风扇，双面用纸，正确分类垃圾；② 阐述意义：节约资源、保护环境、塑造绿色校园文化；
3. 结尾：发出号召，呼吁从自身小事做起，共同打造绿色校园。
按照上述结构，结合素材内容组织语言，形成符合要求的演讲稿。
【答案】
Let’s go green in our school
Boys and girls,
As students, we should actively take part in environmental protection in our school.
Here is what we can do. First, we should save resources. Turn off lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Use both sides of paper. Second, sort rubbish correctly and collect recyclable items like plastic bottles. This helps reduce waste.
Going green in our school is meaningful. It saves resources, protects our environment, and makes our campus cleaner and more beautiful. It also helps shape a green school culture and spreads the concept of sustainable living.
Let’s start from today. Take small actions in our daily life. Together, we can make our school a greener and better place for everyone.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作；环境保护主题写作
【点评】
这篇演讲稿结构清晰，紧扣主题，涵盖环保做法、意义和号召，语言简洁流畅，符合字数要求，是一篇优秀的范文，适合学生学习借鉴。
【难度系数】
0.5
