2026年初中必刷题七年级英语上册沪教版第94页答案
[2026广东深圳期末]假如你是李华,你和同学们在这学期参加了学校组织的郊游活动。作为学校校刊的英文记者,请你为本次郊游写一篇英文报道。
内容包括:
(1)郊游时间:10月15日上午8点到下午4点;
(2)活动安排:上午:①长途徒步旅行 ②拍摄照片 下午:①野餐 ②清理垃圾;
(3)活动感受。
注意:
(1)不少于100词(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)要点齐全,可适当发挥;
(3)不得出现真实姓名和校名;
(4)条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。

Do you still remember the school trip this term? The trip was on 15th October, and it started at 8 a.m. and ended at 4 p.m. It was pretty relaxing to take part in so many activities.

In the morning, we went on a long hike and enjoyed the beautiful view of autumn along the way. We took a lot of nice photos and then played some interesting games.

In the afternoon, we went on a picnic and ate some delicious snacks, such as chocolate cakes and biscuits. After that, we worked together to pick up the litter and take away the trash. Finally, we got back to school by school bus.

We really had a fantastic time there. We all can't wait for the next school trip.

答案

【参考范文】
Do you still remember the school trip this term? The trip was on 15th October, and it started at 8 a.m. and ended at 4 p.m. It was pretty relaxing to take part in so many activities.
In the morning, we went on a long hike and enjoyed the beautiful view of autumn along the way. We took a lot of nice photos and then played some interesting games. In the afternoon, we went on a picnic and ate some delicious snacks, such as chocolate cakes and biscuits. After that, we worked together to pick up the litter and take away the trash. Finally, we got back to school by school bus.
We really had a fantastic time there. We all can't wait for the next school trip.

解析

【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题,要求以校刊英文记者的身份,为学校郊游活动写一篇英文报道。解题思路如下:1. 明确写作身份与主题,确定采用一般过去时叙述活动;2. 梳理题目给出的所有要点:郊游时间(10月15日8:00-16:00)、上午活动(长途徒步、拍照)、下午活动(野餐、清理垃圾)、活动感受;3. 适当补充合理细节(如徒步的秋景、野餐的食物等),确保字数达标、语句连贯,不出现真实姓名和校名。
【解析】
写作时遵循“总-分-总”结构:1. 开头衔接已给内容,引出本次郊游并说明时间;2. 中间分上午、下午两部分详细描述活动,补充细节使内容更丰富;3. 结尾表达活动感受,呼应主题。注意要点齐全,语言通顺,符合校刊报道的正式且自然的风格。
【答案】
Do you still remember the school trip this term? The trip was on 15th October, and it started at 8 a.m. and ended at 4 p.m. It was pretty relaxing to take part in so many activities.
In the morning, we went on a long hike and enjoyed the beautiful view of autumn along the way. We took a lot of nice photos and then played some interesting games. In the afternoon, we went on a picnic and ate some delicious snacks, such as chocolate cakes and biscuits. After that, we worked together to pick up the litter and take away the trash. Finally, we got back to school by school bus.
We really had a fantastic time there. We all can't wait for the next school trip.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作,英文报道写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求,涵盖所有要点,补充了合理细节,语言流畅自然,符合校刊报道的风格,是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6