写作例析
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom听说你喜欢音乐,他想进一步了解你喜欢的音乐类型以及你与音乐的故事。请根据以下提示,给他写一封邮件,告诉他相关信息。

要求: 词数:80~100。
[审题指导]
1.体裁:应用文
2.人称:以第一人称为主
3.时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
[思路构建]

[精彩范文]
Dear Tom,
I'm happy to share my story about music with you. Among all kinds of music, I like pop music best.
When I was in Grade Eight, I fell in love with pop music. I remember I heard a famous singer's songs on the radio for the first time. The sweet lyrics caught my attention at once. Since then, I've been a big fan of pop music. In my free time, pop music is always by my side.
Whenever I feel stressed out or sad, I listen to my favourite pop songs because they always encourage me and cheer me up. Thanks to pop music, I've made great progress in my studies. Now I love it more and more.
Yours,
Li Hua
高分点评:1.思路清晰,采用"总—分—总"三段式结构。2. fall in love with, cheer...up, thanks to, make great progress等亮点词汇,展示了作者扎实的基本功。3. when引导的时间状语从句以及I remember后的宾语从句的正确运用成为文章的加分点。
实战演练
学校英文校刊主编发起主题为"What Does Music Bring to Me?"的征文,你和同学就此进行了讨论。请综合下图所示的笔记内容,并适当拓展,写一篇短文投稿。

要求: 词数80~100。
What Does Music Bring to Me?

What Does Music Bring to Me?
Music is like a key, which opens a door to the wonderful world for me.
Firstly, music gives me hope and strength. When I feel tired from studying, singing my favourite songs always lifts my spirits. Secondly, music helps me build good relationships. Through joining the music club, I've made friends who share the same love for music. Finally, music opens my eyes to different cultures. Listening to African drumming or Italian opera teaches me about traditions across the world.
Music is not just sounds—it's a colorful journey that makes my life richer and more meaningful.
【思路分析】第一步:以比喻句引入主题:音乐开启多彩世界;第二步:具体阐述音乐价值:精神力量、社交联结、文化视野;第三步:书写结语,将音乐定义为丰富人生的多彩旅程。