中国有许多传统节日,如端午节、元宵节和春节。今天的主题是端午节。请你根据表格中的提示
审人称:以第三人称为主 → 审时态:一般现在时 → 审主题
内容,写一篇文章介绍一下中国人通常如何庆祝端午节。
节日时间 | 通常在每年的六月份
庆祝方式 | 1.家人聚会 2.吃粽子 3.观看龙舟赛
表达你的观点 | ……

审要点
要求:1.文中须包含所有提示内容,可以适当发挥;
2.词数80左右。→ 审词数



写作支架
开头 — 引出话题：
There are some traditional festivals in China. Let’s get to know !
It usually comes every year.
中间 — 详细描述庆祝方式：
Chinese people usually celebrate .
First, people usually get together and .（高分句式1）
Second, eating zongzi is .
Third, people love to watch . The races are always .（高分句式2）
结尾 — 表达观点：
I the Dragon Boat Festival best.
I on that day.

参考范文：
# The Dragon Boat Festival
There are some traditional festivals in China. Let's get to know the Dragon Boat Festival! It usually comes in June every year.
Chinese people usually celebrate it happily. First, people usually get together with their family and have a big warm dinner. Second, eating zongzi is a very important custom for this festival. Third, people love to watch the dragon boat races. The races are always very exciting.
I like the Dragon Boat Festival best. I always have a wonderful time with my family on that day.
（全文约80词，覆盖所有提示要点，符合写作要求）
写作支架填空参考：
1. the Dragon Boat Festival
2. in June
3. this festival in many ways
4. with their family
5. enjoy the family time
6. an important custom of the festival
7. the dragon boat races
8. very exciting
9. like
10. always have a good time

【分析】
首先明确题目要求：以第三人称、一般现在时介绍中国人庆祝端午节，需包含节日时间（每年六月）、庆祝方式（家人聚会、吃粽子、龙舟赛）及个人观点，词数约80词，需使用给定写作支架。解题思路：1. 开头用支架引出端午节，点明时间；2. 中间分三点详细描述庆祝方式，运用高分句式丰富内容；3. 结尾表达对端午节的喜爱及当天的感受，确保覆盖所有要点，符合时态和词数要求。
【解析】
按照题目要求，遵循第三人称、一般现在时，结合写作支架完成写作：
开头：There are some traditional festivals in China. Let’s get to know the Dragon Boat Festival! It usually comes in June every year.
中间：Chinese people usually celebrate it happily. First, people usually get together with their family and have a big warm dinner. Second, eating zongzi is a very important custom for this festival. Third, people love to watch the dragon boat races. The races are always very exciting.
结尾：I like the Dragon Boat Festival best. I always have a wonderful time with my family on that day.
全文约80词，覆盖所有提示内容，符合写作要求。
【答案】
# The Dragon Boat Festival
There are some traditional festivals in China. Let's get to know the Dragon Boat Festival! It usually comes in June every year.
Chinese people usually celebrate it happily. First, people usually get together with their family and have a big warm dinner. Second, eating zongzi is a very important custom for this festival. Third, people love to watch the dragon boat races. The races are always very exciting.
I like the Dragon Boat Festival best. I always have a wonderful time with my family on that day.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时运用、节日话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，以第三人称、一般现在时准确介绍了端午节的时间、庆祝方式及个人感受，结构清晰，语言流畅，覆盖所有提示要点，词数符合要求，是一篇优秀的节日话题短文。
【难度系数】
0.6