经典例题
假如你是Andrew,你的好友Sandy在听说你学习了DIY相关课程后,给你写了一封邮件,向你请教如何制作沙拉。请你根据以下提示,用英语给她回一封邮件。

要求:
(1)语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚;
(2)不少于80词。
假如你是Andrew,你的好友Sandy在听说你学习了DIY相关课程后,给你写了一封邮件,向你请教如何制作沙拉。请你根据以下提示,用英语给她回一封邮件。
要求:
(1)语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚;
(2)不少于80词。
答案
Dear Sandy,
I'm glad you turn to me for advice on making salad after I learned the DIY lessons. It is really easy to make and tastes great!
First, let's talk about the preparation. For the food, you can pick your favourite fresh fruits like apples, bananas and strawberries, you also need some fresh lettuce and a bottle of yogurt. As for tools, you only need a fruit knife, a cutting board, a big bowl and a spoon.
Now follow the steps: Wash all the fruits and lettuce clean first, then cut them into small pieces and put them into the big bowl. Next, pour the yogurt into the bowl and mix everything up with the spoon. The whole process only takes less than 10 minutes!
You can have a try now, I'm sure you will make a wonderful salad.
Yours,
Andrew
I'm glad you turn to me for advice on making salad after I learned the DIY lessons. It is really easy to make and tastes great!
First, let's talk about the preparation. For the food, you can pick your favourite fresh fruits like apples, bananas and strawberries, you also need some fresh lettuce and a bottle of yogurt. As for tools, you only need a fruit knife, a cutting board, a big bowl and a spoon.
Now follow the steps: Wash all the fruits and lettuce clean first, then cut them into small pieces and put them into the big bowl. Next, pour the yogurt into the bowl and mix everything up with the spoon. The whole process only takes less than 10 minutes!
You can have a try now, I'm sure you will make a wonderful salad.
Yours,
Andrew
解析
【分析】
本题要求以Andrew的身份给好友Sandy回邮件,解答制作沙拉的问题,需围绕提示的三个核心点(准备的食材、所需工具、制作步骤)展开,采用亲切的书信语气,保证语言通顺连贯、条理清晰,且不少于80词。解题思路为:先确定书信格式(称呼、正文、署名),正文分三部分对应提示问题,最后鼓励对方尝试,确保内容符合要求。
【解析】
按照书信结构,开头点明收到Sandy的求助,说明制作沙拉简单;正文依次说明:1. 食材准备:新鲜水果(如苹果、香蕉、草莓)、生菜、酸奶;2. 所需工具:水果刀、砧板、大碗、勺子;3. 制作步骤:先清洗所有食材,再切小块放入大碗,接着倒入酸奶搅拌均匀;结尾鼓励对方尝试,署名Andrew,保证语言自然流畅,符合要求。
【答案】
Dear Sandy,
I'm glad you turn to me for advice on making salad after I learned the DIY lessons. It is really easy to make and tastes great!
First, let's talk about the preparation. For the food, you can pick your favourite fresh fruits like apples, bananas and strawberries, you also need some fresh lettuce and a bottle of yogurt. As for tools, you only need a fruit knife, a cutting board, a big bowl and a spoon.
Now follow the steps: Wash all the fruits and lettuce clean first, then cut them into small pieces and put them into the big bowl. Next, pour the yogurt into the bowl and mix everything up with the spoon. The whole process only takes less than 10 minutes!
You can have a try now, I'm sure you will make a wonderful salad.
Yours,
Andrew
【知识点】
英语书信写作、日常话题英语表达、DIY操作描述
【点评】
本题结合生活实际的DIY主题,考查学生的英语书信写作能力,要求整合提示信息完成写作,既考查语言运用能力,又贴近生活,能激发学生的写作兴趣,需注意格式和内容的条理性。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题要求以Andrew的身份给好友Sandy回邮件,解答制作沙拉的问题,需围绕提示的三个核心点(准备的食材、所需工具、制作步骤)展开,采用亲切的书信语气,保证语言通顺连贯、条理清晰,且不少于80词。解题思路为:先确定书信格式(称呼、正文、署名),正文分三部分对应提示问题,最后鼓励对方尝试,确保内容符合要求。
【解析】
按照书信结构,开头点明收到Sandy的求助,说明制作沙拉简单;正文依次说明:1. 食材准备:新鲜水果(如苹果、香蕉、草莓)、生菜、酸奶;2. 所需工具:水果刀、砧板、大碗、勺子;3. 制作步骤:先清洗所有食材,再切小块放入大碗,接着倒入酸奶搅拌均匀;结尾鼓励对方尝试,署名Andrew,保证语言自然流畅,符合要求。
【答案】
Dear Sandy,
I'm glad you turn to me for advice on making salad after I learned the DIY lessons. It is really easy to make and tastes great!
First, let's talk about the preparation. For the food, you can pick your favourite fresh fruits like apples, bananas and strawberries, you also need some fresh lettuce and a bottle of yogurt. As for tools, you only need a fruit knife, a cutting board, a big bowl and a spoon.
Now follow the steps: Wash all the fruits and lettuce clean first, then cut them into small pieces and put them into the big bowl. Next, pour the yogurt into the bowl and mix everything up with the spoon. The whole process only takes less than 10 minutes!
You can have a try now, I'm sure you will make a wonderful salad.
Yours,
Andrew
【知识点】
英语书信写作、日常话题英语表达、DIY操作描述
【点评】
本题结合生活实际的DIY主题,考查学生的英语书信写作能力,要求整合提示信息完成写作,既考查语言运用能力,又贴近生活,能激发学生的写作兴趣,需注意格式和内容的条理性。
【难度系数】
0.3
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