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科技的发展改变了世界,各种科技发明让我们的生活越来越多姿多彩。现在请你以“The has influenced me most”为题,写一篇英语短文介绍一项对你影响最大的科技发明。→审主题
内容要点:1.对你影响最大的科技发明是什么;2.介绍这项科技发明的用途;3.表达你对这项科技发明的看法。
写作要求:1.请补全标题,并包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.不少于80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
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The has influenced me most
Technological inventions play an important part in our daily lives.
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The computer has influenced me most
Technological inventions play an important part in our daily lives.
Among all the inventions, the computer has influenced me most and become an essential① part of my life.
The computer has many practical uses in my daily study and life. First, it helps me search for various① study materials online easily, making my homework and review more efficient②. I can also take online courses to learn extra① knowledge beyond textbooks. What’s more, in my free time, I can chat with my friends and relatives far away, watch interesting videos, read e-books and listen to music on it, which relaxes me and enriches my life③.
I think the computer is a great invention. It not only④ brings much convenience to my study and life but also④ broadens my horizons, making my life more colourful②. With the development of technology, the computer will surely become more useful and bring us more surprises.
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亮点评析
①使用高级词汇替换基础词,提升了表达质感。
②巧用现在分词短语作结果状语,代替简单句,使得句式更简洁、更高级,是加分结构。
③使用非限制性定语从句,自然衔接休闲用途的结果,让句子衔接更流畅。
④使用not only...but also...结构,替代了简单的and连接并列谓语,逻辑清晰且句式工整。

优秀范文
The computer has influenced me most
Technological inventions play an important part in our daily lives.
Among all the inventions, the computer has influenced me most and become an essential① part of my life.
The computer has many practical uses in my daily study and life. First, it helps me search for various① study materials online easily, making my homework and review more efficient②. I can also take online courses to learn extra① knowledge beyond textbooks. What’s more, in my free time, I can chat with my friends and relatives far away, watch interesting videos, read e-books and listen to music on it, which relaxes me and enriches my life③.
I think the computer is a great invention. It not only④ brings much convenience to my study and life but also④ broadens my horizons, making my life more colourful②. With the development of technology, the computer will surely become more useful and bring us more surprises.
亮点评析
①使用高级词汇替换基础词,提升了表达质感。
②巧用现在分词短语作结果状语,代替简单句,使得句式更简洁、更高级,是加分结构。
③使用非限制性定语从句,自然衔接休闲用途的结果,让句子衔接更流畅。
④使用not only...but also...结构,替代了简单的and连接并列谓语,逻辑清晰且句式工整。