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话题概述
本单元的主题是“家园”，要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型介绍家园。与此相关的写作维度有：①介绍自己的家；②介绍自己的梦想家园。
考查学生介绍家园的文章的命题方式有多种，如：文字叙述、表格信息和思维导图等。通常要介绍：家的位置、类型、大小、房屋布局、最喜欢的地方、家庭活动、个人感受等。写作实例
家是每个人心中宁静的港湾。每个人的家有着不一样的布局，演绎着不同的故事。请以“My home”为题，写一篇短文介绍你的家。内容包括：
1. Where is it? What is it like? What's inside?
2. What do you like best? Why?
3. How do you feel about your home?
要求：
1. 内容必须包括所给全部要点，可适当发挥；2. 条理清楚，行文连贯，语言流畅；3. 词数不少于 90。
My home
审题指导
1. 体裁：说明文 2. 时态：一般现在时 3. 人称：以第一人称为主
4. 必备词汇：①in the south of 在……南部 ②on the twenty - second floor 在二十二层 ③square metre 平方米 ④a living room 一间客厅 ⑤my favourite place 我最喜欢的地方 ⑥share stories about daily lives 分享日常生活故事 ⑦look at the stars in the sky 看天上的星星 ⑧a place full of love and happiness 一个充满爱与幸福的地方
谋篇布局
佳作剖析
教材原文 P8:My family lives in the south of Beijing. Our flat is on the twenty - second floor.P11:Our flat is 98 square metres in area. P16: I love to sit there at night and look at the stars in the sky.
优秀范文My homeMy family lives in the south of① the city. Our flat is on the twenty - second floor. It is 98 square metres in area①. We have a living room, two bedrooms, a kitchen and a bathroom. We also have a very nice balcony.My favourite place is the balcony because② my whole family often chat there after dinner. We share stories about daily lives with each other. I love to sit there at night and look at the stars in the sky. It's very relaxing. My home is not very big, but③ it's really comfortable to live in it with my family. It's a place full of love and happiness.③
亮点评析①该段恰当使用所学短语 in the south of 和 in area，体现了作者学以致用的能力。②使用 because 引导原因状语从句，提升了文章的档次。 ③该段使用 but 连接简单句构成并列句、形容词短语作后置定语，为高级表达，是加分项。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①a big flat with three bedrooms 一套带三间卧室的大公寓 ②water the flowers 给花浇水 ③feel relaxed 感到放松 ④be interested in 对……感兴趣 ⑤a kind of traditional home 一种传统住宅 ⑥his favourite place 他最喜欢的地方 ⑦It's a great place to have fun and rest. 这是一个既能娱乐又能休息的好地方。 ⑧Home is a place to take care of and be thankful for. 家是一个需要悉心照料并心怀感恩的地方。
写作实战
校报正在举行题为“My dream home”的征文活动，请你根据提示写一篇英语短文参与投稿。
提示：
1. 描述你梦想家园的位置和外观；2. 介绍家里的房间和设施；3. 说说你可以在家里做的事情。
要求：
1. 包含以上所有提示要点，条理清晰，语句通顺；
2. 不少于 80 词，可以适当发挥，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
My dream home
Hello, everyone! I'd like to tell you about my dream home.
本单元的主题是“家园”，要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型介绍家园。与此相关的写作维度有：①介绍自己的家；②介绍自己的梦想家园。
考查学生介绍家园的文章的命题方式有多种，如：文字叙述、表格信息和思维导图等。通常要介绍：家的位置、类型、大小、房屋布局、最喜欢的地方、家庭活动、个人感受等。写作实例
家是每个人心中宁静的港湾。每个人的家有着不一样的布局，演绎着不同的故事。请以“My home”为题，写一篇短文介绍你的家。内容包括：
1. Where is it? What is it like? What's inside?
2. What do you like best? Why?
3. How do you feel about your home?
要求：
1. 内容必须包括所给全部要点，可适当发挥；2. 条理清楚，行文连贯，语言流畅；3. 词数不少于 90。
My home
审题指导
1. 体裁：说明文 2. 时态：一般现在时 3. 人称：以第一人称为主
4. 必备词汇：①in the south of 在……南部 ②on the twenty - second floor 在二十二层 ③square metre 平方米 ④a living room 一间客厅 ⑤my favourite place 我最喜欢的地方 ⑥share stories about daily lives 分享日常生活故事 ⑦look at the stars in the sky 看天上的星星 ⑧a place full of love and happiness 一个充满爱与幸福的地方
谋篇布局
佳作剖析
教材原文 P8:My family lives in the south of Beijing. Our flat is on the twenty - second floor.P11:Our flat is 98 square metres in area. P16: I love to sit there at night and look at the stars in the sky.
优秀范文My homeMy family lives in the south of① the city. Our flat is on the twenty - second floor. It is 98 square metres in area①. We have a living room, two bedrooms, a kitchen and a bathroom. We also have a very nice balcony.My favourite place is the balcony because② my whole family often chat there after dinner. We share stories about daily lives with each other. I love to sit there at night and look at the stars in the sky. It's very relaxing. My home is not very big, but③ it's really comfortable to live in it with my family. It's a place full of love and happiness.③
亮点评析①该段恰当使用所学短语 in the south of 和 in area，体现了作者学以致用的能力。②使用 because 引导原因状语从句，提升了文章的档次。 ③该段使用 but 连接简单句构成并列句、形容词短语作后置定语，为高级表达，是加分项。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①a big flat with three bedrooms 一套带三间卧室的大公寓 ②water the flowers 给花浇水 ③feel relaxed 感到放松 ④be interested in 对……感兴趣 ⑤a kind of traditional home 一种传统住宅 ⑥his favourite place 他最喜欢的地方 ⑦It's a great place to have fun and rest. 这是一个既能娱乐又能休息的好地方。 ⑧Home is a place to take care of and be thankful for. 家是一个需要悉心照料并心怀感恩的地方。
写作实战
校报正在举行题为“My dream home”的征文活动，请你根据提示写一篇英语短文参与投稿。
提示：
1. 描述你梦想家园的位置和外观；2. 介绍家里的房间和设施；3. 说说你可以在家里做的事情。
要求：
1. 包含以上所有提示要点，条理清晰，语句通顺；
2. 不少于 80 词，可以适当发挥，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
My dream home
Hello, everyone! I'd like to tell you about my dream home.
My dream home is in the centre of a small town. It is very big and has a beautiful garden behind it.
The house has eight rooms in it. On the ground floor, there is a big living room, a kitchen and a dining room. A study, three bedrooms and a bathroom are on the first floor.
My favourite place is the bright study because I like reading. I would like to invite my friends to read there. It will be great! I can also enjoy beautiful flowers and have lots of fun in the garden. It's very relaxing. I love my dream home.
答案
【解析】：本题是译林版七年级下册Unit 1的主题写作，要求以“My home”为题介绍自己的家，需遵循“位置布局-最爱的地方及原因-表达情感”的三段式结构创作。写作时需使用本单元核心词汇，时态用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主，要涵盖题目要求的所有要点，保证行文连贯、语言流畅，词数符合要求。
【答案】：
My home
My family lives in a new neighbourhood in the south of our city. Our flat is on the twenty-second floor. It is 120 square metres in area. We have three bedrooms, a big living room and a modern kitchen. We also have a small but lovely balcony.
My favourite place is the balcony. We share stories about our daily lives there after dinner. I love to look at the stars in the sky and read my favourite books there. It's my quiet little world.
My home is not very big, but it's warm and full of love. It's a place where I feel safe and happy all the time.
基础版范文My dream homeHello, everyone! I'd like to tell you about my dream home.My dream home is in the centre of a small town. It is very big and has a beautiful garden behind it.The house has eight rooms in it. On the ground floor, there is a big living room, a kitchen and a dining room. A study, three bedrooms and a bathroom are on the first floor.My favourite place is the bright study because I like reading. I would like to invite my friends to read there. It will be great! I can also enjoy beautiful flowers and have lots of fun in the garden. It's very relaxing. I love my dream home.
进阶版范文My dream homeHello, everyone! I'd like to tell you about my dream home.My dream home is in a small town by the seaside. It is a large house with two floors. Behind the house is a garden with lots of beautiful flowers.On the ground floor, there is a big and bright living room. It is the perfect place to relax after a hard day's work. On the first floor, I have a bedroom of my own. It is clean and comfortable. I like the garden best because I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing there.At the weekend, my family and I can take a walk on the beach together. I think it will be very wonderful.
【答案】：
My home
My family lives in a new neighbourhood in the south of our city. Our flat is on the twenty-second floor. It is 120 square metres in area. We have three bedrooms, a big living room and a modern kitchen. We also have a small but lovely balcony.
My favourite place is the balcony. We share stories about our daily lives there after dinner. I love to look at the stars in the sky and read my favourite books there. It's my quiet little world.
My home is not very big, but it's warm and full of love. It's a place where I feel safe and happy all the time.
基础版范文My dream homeHello, everyone! I'd like to tell you about my dream home.My dream home is in the centre of a small town. It is very big and has a beautiful garden behind it.The house has eight rooms in it. On the ground floor, there is a big living room, a kitchen and a dining room. A study, three bedrooms and a bathroom are on the first floor.My favourite place is the bright study because I like reading. I would like to invite my friends to read there. It will be great! I can also enjoy beautiful flowers and have lots of fun in the garden. It's very relaxing. I love my dream home.
进阶版范文My dream homeHello, everyone! I'd like to tell you about my dream home.My dream home is in a small town by the seaside. It is a large house with two floors. Behind the house is a garden with lots of beautiful flowers.On the ground floor, there is a big and bright living room. It is the perfect place to relax after a hard day's work. On the first floor, I have a bedroom of my own. It is clean and comfortable. I like the garden best because I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing there.At the weekend, my family and I can take a walk on the beach together. I think it will be very wonderful.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My dream home”为题完成英语短文，开头已给出，需补全内容。解题思路：1. 明确写作要求：包含梦想家园的位置外观、房间设施、可做的事，使用一般现在时，第一人称，词数不少于80；2. 结构规划：先介绍梦想家园的位置与外观，再说明房间设施，最后描述在家中可做的事及个人感受；3. 运用单元核心词汇与句型，保证语句连贯、符合语法规范。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，介绍梦想家园的位置与外观：My dream home is in a small town by the seaside. It is a large house with two floors. Behind the house is a garden with lots of beautiful flowers.
2. 介绍房间设施与喜爱的区域：On the ground floor, there is a big and bright living room. It is the perfect place to relax after a hard day's work. On the first floor, I have a bedroom of my own. It is clean and comfortable. I like the garden best because I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing there.
3. 描述可做的事与情感：At the weekend, my family and I can take a walk on the beach together. I think it will be very wonderful.
【答案】
My dream home
Hello, everyone! I'd like to tell you about my dream home.
My dream home is in a small town by the seaside. It is a large house with two floors. Behind the house is a garden with lots of beautiful flowers.
On the ground floor, there is a big and bright living room. It is the perfect place to relax after a hard day's work. On the first floor, I have a bedroom of my own. It is clean and comfortable. I like the garden best because I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing there.
At the weekend, my family and I can take a walk on the beach together. I think it will be very wonderful.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、一般现在时运用、家园相关词汇
【点评】
该范文符合题目所有要求，结构清晰，涵盖位置外观、房间设施、可做的事等要点，语言流畅自然，运用了单元核心词汇与句型，准确表达了对梦想家园的向往，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以“My dream home”为题完成英语短文，开头已给出，需补全内容。解题思路：1. 明确写作要求：包含梦想家园的位置外观、房间设施、可做的事，使用一般现在时，第一人称，词数不少于80；2. 结构规划：先介绍梦想家园的位置与外观，再说明房间设施，最后描述在家中可做的事及个人感受；3. 运用单元核心词汇与句型，保证语句连贯、符合语法规范。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，介绍梦想家园的位置与外观：My dream home is in a small town by the seaside. It is a large house with two floors. Behind the house is a garden with lots of beautiful flowers.
2. 介绍房间设施与喜爱的区域：On the ground floor, there is a big and bright living room. It is the perfect place to relax after a hard day's work. On the first floor, I have a bedroom of my own. It is clean and comfortable. I like the garden best because I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing there.
3. 描述可做的事与情感：At the weekend, my family and I can take a walk on the beach together. I think it will be very wonderful.
【答案】
My dream home
Hello, everyone! I'd like to tell you about my dream home.
My dream home is in a small town by the seaside. It is a large house with two floors. Behind the house is a garden with lots of beautiful flowers.
On the ground floor, there is a big and bright living room. It is the perfect place to relax after a hard day's work. On the first floor, I have a bedroom of my own. It is clean and comfortable. I like the garden best because I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing there.
At the weekend, my family and I can take a walk on the beach together. I think it will be very wonderful.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、一般现在时运用、家园相关词汇
【点评】
该范文符合题目所有要求，结构清晰，涵盖位置外观、房间设施、可做的事等要点，语言流畅自然，运用了单元核心词汇与句型，准确表达了对梦想家园的向往，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
