(三)
为了丰富学生的校园生活,你校组织了很多社团供学生选择,如乒乓球社、科学社、美术社、戏剧社、音乐社和围棋社等。请根据你的喜好选择一个社团,并用英语给社团的负责人写一封邮件申请加入。
内容提示:1.说明你想加入的社团;
2.加入该社团的原因;
3.你的计划和期待。
要求:1.包含提示中的内容,可适当增加细节;
2.用词准确,意思完整,表达通顺;
3.不少于80词。
Dear sir/madam,
My name is Lily. I'm writing to express my interest in joining
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Lily
为了丰富学生的校园生活,你校组织了很多社团供学生选择,如乒乓球社、科学社、美术社、戏剧社、音乐社和围棋社等。请根据你的喜好选择一个社团,并用英语给社团的负责人写一封邮件申请加入。
内容提示:1.说明你想加入的社团;
2.加入该社团的原因;
3.你的计划和期待。
要求:1.包含提示中的内容,可适当增加细节;
2.用词准确,意思完整,表达通顺;
3.不少于80词。
Dear sir/madam,
My name is Lily. I'm writing to express my interest in joining
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Lily
答案
Dear sir/madam,
My name is Lily. I'm writing to express my interest in joining the Music Club at our school.
Music is very important to me because it helps me relax and enjoy beautiful songs. This is why I want to be a member of the club.
In the club, I hope to share my thoughts about music with other members. We might have different ideas. Because everyone likes different kinds of music. But this helps us learn from each other and understand music better.
I really hope to be a member of the club. Thank you for thinking about my request.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Lily
My name is Lily. I'm writing to express my interest in joining the Music Club at our school.
Music is very important to me because it helps me relax and enjoy beautiful songs. This is why I want to be a member of the club.
In the club, I hope to share my thoughts about music with other members. We might have different ideas. Because everyone likes different kinds of music. But this helps us learn from each other and understand music better.
I really hope to be a member of the club. Thank you for thinking about my request.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Lily
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题,要求写一封申请加入学校社团的邮件。解题思路:① 明确选择的社团,在邮件开头点明申请加入的社团;② 阐述加入该社团的原因,结合自身感受说明理由;③ 说明加入后的计划与期待;④ 遵循邮件格式,确保内容完整、语言通顺,满足词数要求。
【解析】按照邮件的标准结构写作:1. 开头部分:自我介绍并表明申请加入音乐社;2. 原因部分:说明音乐对自己的意义(帮助放松、喜爱音乐);3. 计划与期待部分:希望和社团成员交流音乐、互相学习,加深对音乐的理解;4. 礼貌收尾,表达期待回复的意愿,确保内容覆盖提示要点,语言准确通顺。
【答案】Dear sir/madam,
My name is Lily. I'm writing to express my interest in joining the Music Club at our school.
Music is very important to me because it helps me relax and enjoy beautiful songs. This is why I want to be a member of the club.
In the club, I hope to share my thoughts about music with other members. We might have different ideas. Because everyone likes different kinds of music. But this helps us learn from each other and understand music better.
I really hope to be a member of the club. Thank you for thinking about my request.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Lily
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语书信格式
【点评】本题围绕校园社团主题,考查学生的英语应用文写作能力,要求覆盖指定内容,语言准确通顺,贴近学生生活实际,能有效考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照邮件的标准结构写作:1. 开头部分:自我介绍并表明申请加入音乐社;2. 原因部分:说明音乐对自己的意义(帮助放松、喜爱音乐);3. 计划与期待部分:希望和社团成员交流音乐、互相学习,加深对音乐的理解;4. 礼貌收尾,表达期待回复的意愿,确保内容覆盖提示要点,语言准确通顺。
【答案】Dear sir/madam,
My name is Lily. I'm writing to express my interest in joining the Music Club at our school.
Music is very important to me because it helps me relax and enjoy beautiful songs. This is why I want to be a member of the club.
In the club, I hope to share my thoughts about music with other members. We might have different ideas. Because everyone likes different kinds of music. But this helps us learn from each other and understand music better.
I really hope to be a member of the club. Thank you for thinking about my request.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Lily
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语书信格式
【点评】本题围绕校园社团主题,考查学生的英语应用文写作能力,要求覆盖指定内容,语言准确通顺,贴近学生生活实际,能有效考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
登录