七、书面表达。
学校正举办主题为“My Pocket Money”的英语征文活动,请你谈谈自己的看法。

要求:1. 短文需包括思维导图中的要素,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯;
3. 词数90左右。
学校正举办主题为“My Pocket Money”的英语征文活动,请你谈谈自己的看法。
要求:1. 短文需包括思维导图中的要素,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯;
3. 词数90左右。
答案
One possible version:
I think students should have some pocket money. I get my pocket money from my parents every week.
I usually spend most of my pocket money on pens, books, food and music. I also use some money to help people in need from time to time. I save the rest in my bank account. As Mum always tells me, it is important to save for a rainy day.
I try to manage my money well. At the beginning of each week, I make a budget for my pocket money. It helps me plan what to do with it and have good spending habits.
I think students should have some pocket money. I get my pocket money from my parents every week.
I usually spend most of my pocket money on pens, books, food and music. I also use some money to help people in need from time to time. I save the rest in my bank account. As Mum always tells me, it is important to save for a rainy day.
I try to manage my money well. At the beginning of each week, I make a budget for my pocket money. It helps me plan what to do with it and have good spending habits.
解析
【分析】本题是英语书面表达题,主题为“My Pocket Money”,需涵盖思维导图的三个核心问题:学生是否应有零花钱、零花钱的花费方式、如何更好管理零花钱。解题时,先确定文章结构:开头明确观点(学生应拥有零花钱),中间部分具体说明零花钱的来源、花费情况及剩余处理,最后阐述管理零花钱的方法,注意语言通顺、词数约90词,适当增加细节使行文连贯。
【解析】首先,开篇表明观点:学生应该有零花钱,说明零花钱来自父母每周的给予;接着,具体描述零花钱的使用:大部分用于购买文具、书籍、食物和音乐,偶尔会帮助有需要的人,剩余部分存入银行,引用“save for a rainy day”丰富内容;最后,说明管理方法:每周初制定零花钱预算,帮助规划使用,养成良好消费习惯,确保覆盖所有思维导图要素,符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
I think students should have some pocket money. I get my pocket money from my parents every week.
I usually spend most of my pocket money on pens, books, food and music. I also use some money to help people in need from time to time. I save the rest in my bank account. As Mum always tells me, it is important to save for a rainy day.
I try to manage my money well. At the beginning of each week, I make a budget for my pocket money. It helps me plan what to do with it and have good spending habits.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题写作(零花钱)、应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题,完整覆盖了思维导图的所有要点,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,语言表达准确自然,适当加入细节使文章更丰富,符合征文要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先,开篇表明观点:学生应该有零花钱,说明零花钱来自父母每周的给予;接着,具体描述零花钱的使用:大部分用于购买文具、书籍、食物和音乐,偶尔会帮助有需要的人,剩余部分存入银行,引用“save for a rainy day”丰富内容;最后,说明管理方法:每周初制定零花钱预算,帮助规划使用,养成良好消费习惯,确保覆盖所有思维导图要素,符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
I think students should have some pocket money. I get my pocket money from my parents every week.
I usually spend most of my pocket money on pens, books, food and music. I also use some money to help people in need from time to time. I save the rest in my bank account. As Mum always tells me, it is important to save for a rainy day.
I try to manage my money well. At the beginning of each week, I make a budget for my pocket money. It helps me plan what to do with it and have good spending habits.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题写作(零花钱)、应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题,完整覆盖了思维导图的所有要点,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,语言表达准确自然,适当加入细节使文章更丰富,符合征文要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.5
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