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六、书面表达
请以“The person I admire”为话题，写一篇英语短文。写作内容必须包含以下四点：
1. What challenges, doubts or fears did the person face?
2. What did the person do to overcome the challenges?
3. What did the person achieve?
4. What are your comments and ideas about this person?
要求：
1. 语句通顺，语法正确；
2. 不少于80词；
3. 书写规范，内容完整。
请以“The person I admire”为话题，写一篇英语短文。写作内容必须包含以下四点：
1. What challenges, doubts or fears did the person face?
2. What did the person do to overcome the challenges?
3. What did the person achieve?
4. What are your comments and ideas about this person?
要求：
1. 语句通顺，语法正确；
2. 不少于80词；
3. 书写规范，内容完整。
答案
One possible version:
The person I admire
The person I admire is Yuan Longping, the "Father of Hybrid Rice". When he began his research, many people doubted his idea, and he faced difficulties like poor equipment and natural disasters that ruined his experi-
ments.
But he never gave up. He worked day and night in the fields, testing seeds over and over again. Finally, he developed hybrid rice that greatly increased food production, feeding bil- lions of people worldwide.
Yuan Longping is a true hero to me. His hard work and strong spirit encourage me to keep going when I face challenges.
The person I admire
The person I admire is Yuan Longping, the "Father of Hybrid Rice". When he began his research, many people doubted his idea, and he faced difficulties like poor equipment and natural disasters that ruined his experi-
ments.
But he never gave up. He worked day and night in the fields, testing seeds over and over again. Finally, he developed hybrid rice that greatly increased food production, feeding bil- lions of people worldwide.
Yuan Longping is a true hero to me. His hard work and strong spirit encourage me to keep going when I face challenges.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语话题书面表达，写作需紧扣题目给出的四个核心要点展开。首先确定敬佩的人物（如袁隆平，这类有明确事迹的人物便于填充内容）；接着对应四个要求梳理内容：①明确人物面临的挑战（如他人质疑、实验设备简陋、自然灾害破坏实验等）；②梳理人物克服挑战的具体行动（如田间日夜劳作、反复测试种子等）；③提炼人物取得的成就（如杂交水稻研发成功、大幅增产、养活全球数十亿人等）；④表达个人评价与感悟（如敬佩其精神、受其激励等）；最后确保语句通顺、语法正确，字数不少于80词。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开篇点明敬佩的人物，如袁隆平（“杂交水稻之父”）；2. 阐述人物面临的挑战：研究初期遭他人质疑，实验受设备简陋、自然灾害影响；3. 说明克服挑战的行动：日夜在田间工作，反复测试种子；4. 介绍成就：成功研发杂交水稻，大幅提高粮食产量，养活全球数十亿人；5. 结尾表达个人评价，点明其精神对自己的激励作用。需覆盖所有要点，符合英语表达习惯，保证语句通顺、语法正确。
【答案】
One possible version:
The person I admire
The person I admire is Yuan Longping, the "Father of Hybrid Rice". When he began his research, many people doubted his idea, and he faced difficulties like poor equipment and natural disasters that ruined his experiments.
But he never gave up. He worked day and night in the fields, testing seeds over and over again. Finally, he developed hybrid rice that greatly increased food production, feeding billions of people worldwide.
Yuan Longping is a true hero to me. His hard work and strong spirit encourage me to keep going when I face challenges.
【知识点】
英语话题作文、英语书面表达
【点评】
本题为英语话题书面表达题，要求明确，考查学生的英语语言组织与逻辑表达能力，围绕指定要点展开，内容积极向上，贴近学生熟悉的人物素材，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇英语话题书面表达，写作需紧扣题目给出的四个核心要点展开。首先确定敬佩的人物（如袁隆平，这类有明确事迹的人物便于填充内容）；接着对应四个要求梳理内容：①明确人物面临的挑战（如他人质疑、实验设备简陋、自然灾害破坏实验等）；②梳理人物克服挑战的具体行动（如田间日夜劳作、反复测试种子等）；③提炼人物取得的成就（如杂交水稻研发成功、大幅增产、养活全球数十亿人等）；④表达个人评价与感悟（如敬佩其精神、受其激励等）；最后确保语句通顺、语法正确，字数不少于80词。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开篇点明敬佩的人物，如袁隆平（“杂交水稻之父”）；2. 阐述人物面临的挑战：研究初期遭他人质疑，实验受设备简陋、自然灾害影响；3. 说明克服挑战的行动：日夜在田间工作，反复测试种子；4. 介绍成就：成功研发杂交水稻，大幅提高粮食产量，养活全球数十亿人；5. 结尾表达个人评价，点明其精神对自己的激励作用。需覆盖所有要点，符合英语表达习惯，保证语句通顺、语法正确。
【答案】
One possible version:
The person I admire
The person I admire is Yuan Longping, the "Father of Hybrid Rice". When he began his research, many people doubted his idea, and he faced difficulties like poor equipment and natural disasters that ruined his experiments.
But he never gave up. He worked day and night in the fields, testing seeds over and over again. Finally, he developed hybrid rice that greatly increased food production, feeding billions of people worldwide.
Yuan Longping is a true hero to me. His hard work and strong spirit encourage me to keep going when I face challenges.
【知识点】
英语话题作文、英语书面表达
【点评】
本题为英语话题书面表达题，要求明确，考查学生的英语语言组织与逻辑表达能力，围绕指定要点展开，内容积极向上，贴近学生熟悉的人物素材，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
