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假如你校英文校报 Cultural Insights 正在征稿,请根据以下具体要求,用英文写一篇短文投稿。
ARTICLES WANTED!
China is an amazing country with different forms of traditional arts. Please choose a form of traditional Chinese art you love and know well, describe its features and tell an experience about it.
Email us at Cultural Insights@126. com. We will publish the best ones in Cultural Insights.
注意:词数80-100。
审题指导: 体裁:记叙文 时态:一般现在时、一般过去时 人称:第一人称为主
写作框架:
优秀范文:
假如你校英文校报 Cultural Insights 正在征稿,请根据以下具体要求,用英文写一篇短文投稿。
ARTICLES WANTED!
China is an amazing country with different forms of traditional arts. Please choose a form of traditional Chinese art you love and know well, describe its features and tell an experience about it.
Email us at Cultural Insights@126. com. We will publish the best ones in Cultural Insights.
注意:词数80-100。
审题指导: 体裁:记叙文 时态:一般现在时、一般过去时 人称:第一人称为主
写作框架:
优秀范文:
答案
There are many different forms of traditional Chinese arts. Among them, my favorite is Chinese paper cutting. It's a popular folk art with a long history. People cut paper into different shapes, like flowers, animals and lucky symbols. It's usually bright red, full of joy and good wishes.
Last Spring Festival, I learned to make a paper-cut of a tiger with my grandma. It was not easy. I cut my finger twice at first. But with her help, I finished a lovely one. I put it up on the window. It made our home more festive. Everyone praised my work.
Chinese paper cutting is not just decoration but it carries our traditions and love for life. I hope more people will learn this wonderful art.
Last Spring Festival, I learned to make a paper-cut of a tiger with my grandma. It was not easy. I cut my finger twice at first. But with her help, I finished a lovely one. I put it up on the window. It made our home more festive. Everyone praised my work.
Chinese paper cutting is not just decoration but it carries our traditions and love for life. I hope more people will learn this wonderful art.
解析
【分析】
本题为英文校报征稿的写作题，需围绕“中国传统艺术”展开，要求选择一种熟悉的传统艺术，描述其特点并讲述相关个人经历，以第一人称写作，时态结合一般现在时（描述艺术特点）和一般过去时（叙述经历），词数控制在80-100。解题思路：先确定易上手的传统艺术（如剪纸），再分三部分构思：开篇介绍艺术的特点（历史、造型、寓意），中间讲述个人相关经历（如和长辈学做剪纸的过程），结尾点明艺术的文化意义，确保内容贴合要求、语言通顺。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 确定写作对象：选择中国剪纸，其特点鲜明且易结合个人经历；
2. 内容组织：
① 开篇（一般现在时）：点明最喜欢的传统艺术是剪纸，介绍其作为民间艺术的历史、造型（花、动物等）、颜色（红色）及寓意（欢乐、祝福）；
② 中间（一般过去时）：叙述去年春节和奶奶学做虎剪纸的经历，描述遇到的小困难（割到手）和完成后的喜悦（贴窗户、被夸奖）；
③ 结尾：点明剪纸承载传统与对生活的热爱，表达期望更多人学习的愿望；
3. 语言控制：用第一人称，时态准确，词数符合80-100要求，避免复杂句式，保证通顺自然。
【答案】
There are many different forms of traditional Chinese arts. Among them, my favorite is Chinese paper cutting. It's a popular folk art with a long history. People cut paper into different shapes, like flowers, animals and lucky symbols. It's usually bright red, full of joy and good wishes.
Last Spring Festival, I learned to make a paper-cut of a tiger with my grandma. It was not easy. I cut my finger twice at first. But with her help, I finished a lovely one. I put it up on the window. It made our home more festive. Everyone praised my work.
Chinese paper cutting is not just decoration but it carries our traditions and love for life. I hope more people will learn this wonderful art.
【知识点】
英文应用文写作、记叙文写作、中国传统文化英文表达
【点评】
本题以校报征稿为真实情境，将中国传统艺术与英语写作结合，既考查学生的英语语言运用能力，又引导学生关注传统艺术，写作框架清晰，易于学生上手，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英文校报征稿的写作题，需围绕“中国传统艺术”展开，要求选择一种熟悉的传统艺术，描述其特点并讲述相关个人经历，以第一人称写作，时态结合一般现在时（描述艺术特点）和一般过去时（叙述经历），词数控制在80-100。解题思路：先确定易上手的传统艺术（如剪纸），再分三部分构思：开篇介绍艺术的特点（历史、造型、寓意），中间讲述个人相关经历（如和长辈学做剪纸的过程），结尾点明艺术的文化意义，确保内容贴合要求、语言通顺。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 确定写作对象：选择中国剪纸，其特点鲜明且易结合个人经历；
2. 内容组织：
① 开篇（一般现在时）：点明最喜欢的传统艺术是剪纸，介绍其作为民间艺术的历史、造型（花、动物等）、颜色（红色）及寓意（欢乐、祝福）；
② 中间（一般过去时）：叙述去年春节和奶奶学做虎剪纸的经历，描述遇到的小困难（割到手）和完成后的喜悦（贴窗户、被夸奖）；
③ 结尾：点明剪纸承载传统与对生活的热爱，表达期望更多人学习的愿望；
3. 语言控制：用第一人称，时态准确，词数符合80-100要求，避免复杂句式，保证通顺自然。
【答案】
There are many different forms of traditional Chinese arts. Among them, my favorite is Chinese paper cutting. It's a popular folk art with a long history. People cut paper into different shapes, like flowers, animals and lucky symbols. It's usually bright red, full of joy and good wishes.
Last Spring Festival, I learned to make a paper-cut of a tiger with my grandma. It was not easy. I cut my finger twice at first. But with her help, I finished a lovely one. I put it up on the window. It made our home more festive. Everyone praised my work.
Chinese paper cutting is not just decoration but it carries our traditions and love for life. I hope more people will learn this wonderful art.
【知识点】
英文应用文写作、记叙文写作、中国传统文化英文表达
【点评】
本题以校报征稿为真实情境，将中国传统艺术与英语写作结合，既考查学生的英语语言运用能力，又引导学生关注传统艺术，写作框架清晰，易于学生上手，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
