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Ⅱ. 书面表达。
假如你是李华，本周你校要进行有关“畅想未来”的英语作文竞赛，请你以“My Life in 20 Years”为题写一篇英语短文，畅想20年后的生活。
要点提示：
(1) What job will you do?
(2) Where will you live?
(3) What will you do in your spare time?
(4) What pets will you keep?
(5) What clothes will you wear?
要求：
(1) 涵盖以上提示内容，语句通顺，内容完整，语法正确；
(2) 可适当发挥，但内容要合情合理；
(3) 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Life in 20 Years
My life in 20 years will be wonderful.
假如你是李华，本周你校要进行有关“畅想未来”的英语作文竞赛，请你以“My Life in 20 Years”为题写一篇英语短文，畅想20年后的生活。
要点提示：
(1) What job will you do?
(2) Where will you live?
(3) What will you do in your spare time?
(4) What pets will you keep?
(5) What clothes will you wear?
要求：
(1) 涵盖以上提示内容，语句通顺，内容完整，语法正确；
(2) 可适当发挥，但内容要合情合理；
(3) 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Life in 20 Years
My life in 20 years will be wonderful.
In 20 years, I think I'll be a pilot. I'll work in Beijing, because my parents work in Beijing.
I want to live with them. I'll live in a large apartment.
As a pilot, I can have a few days off every month. I think I'll keep a pet dog in my apartment.
There'll be a park near my home. I'll take a walk after dinner.
In my spare time, I will also play chess with my friends in the park.
On weekdays, I will go to work, wearing smart clothes.
After work, I will look less smart.
I believe my future will be beautiful if I try my best.
答案
Ⅱ. One possible version:
My Life in 20 Years
My life in 20 years will be wonderful.
In 20 years, I think I'll be a pilot. I'll work in Beijing, because my parents work in Beijing. I want to live with them. I'll live in a large apartment. As a pilot, I can have a few days off every month. I think I'll keep a pet dog in my apartment. There'll be a park near my home. I'll take a walk after dinner. In my spare time, I will also play chess with my friends in the park. On weekdays, I will go to work, wearing smart clothes. After work, I will look less smart.
I believe my future will be beautiful if I try my best.
My Life in 20 Years
My life in 20 years will be wonderful.
In 20 years, I think I'll be a pilot. I'll work in Beijing, because my parents work in Beijing. I want to live with them. I'll live in a large apartment. As a pilot, I can have a few days off every month. I think I'll keep a pet dog in my apartment. There'll be a park near my home. I'll take a walk after dinner. In my spare time, I will also play chess with my friends in the park. On weekdays, I will go to work, wearing smart clothes. After work, I will look less smart.
I believe my future will be beautiful if I try my best.
解析
【分析】本题是英语话题书面表达题，要求以“My Life in 20 Years”为题，围绕“畅想未来”主题，涵盖职业、居住地点、业余活动、宠物、穿着五个要点写作。解题思路：首先确定20年后的职业（如飞行员），对应居住地点（北京，与父母同住）；接着安排业余活动（利用假期散步、和朋友下棋）；然后确定宠物（宠物狗）；再说明不同场景的穿着（工作时正式，休闲时随意）；最后表达对未来的期许，全程使用一般将来时，确保语句通顺、要点齐全、符合字数要求。
【解析】根据题目要求，需覆盖所有提示要点：1. 职业设定为飞行员，工作地点在北京（与父母同住）；2. 居住在大公寓；3. 业余时间可散步、和朋友下棋；4. 养宠物狗；5. 工作时穿正式服装，休闲时穿休闲装。使用一般将来时组织语句，确保内容完整、语法正确，符合80词左右的要求，最后收尾表达对未来的美好期待。
【答案】Ⅱ. One possible version:
My Life in 20 Years
My life in 20 years will be wonderful.
In 20 years, I think I'll be a pilot. I'll work in Beijing, because my parents work in Beijing. I want to live with them. I'll live in a large apartment. As a pilot, I can have a few days off every month. I think I'll keep a pet dog in my apartment. There'll be a park near my home. I'll take a walk after dinner. In my spare time, I will also play chess with my friends in the park. On weekdays, I will go to work, wearing smart clothes. After work, I will look less smart.
I believe my future will be beautiful if I try my best.
【知识点】英语话题作文、一般将来时应用
【点评】本题为初中英语常见的话题书面表达题，主题贴近学生生活，要求明确，考查学生运用一般将来时描述未来生活的语言组织能力，需覆盖所有提示要点并适当发挥，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】根据题目要求，需覆盖所有提示要点：1. 职业设定为飞行员，工作地点在北京（与父母同住）；2. 居住在大公寓；3. 业余时间可散步、和朋友下棋；4. 养宠物狗；5. 工作时穿正式服装，休闲时穿休闲装。使用一般将来时组织语句，确保内容完整、语法正确，符合80词左右的要求，最后收尾表达对未来的美好期待。
【答案】Ⅱ. One possible version:
My Life in 20 Years
My life in 20 years will be wonderful.
In 20 years, I think I'll be a pilot. I'll work in Beijing, because my parents work in Beijing. I want to live with them. I'll live in a large apartment. As a pilot, I can have a few days off every month. I think I'll keep a pet dog in my apartment. There'll be a park near my home. I'll take a walk after dinner. In my spare time, I will also play chess with my friends in the park. On weekdays, I will go to work, wearing smart clothes. After work, I will look less smart.
I believe my future will be beautiful if I try my best.
【知识点】英语话题作文、一般将来时应用
【点评】本题为初中英语常见的话题书面表达题，主题贴近学生生活，要求明确，考查学生运用一般将来时描述未来生活的语言组织能力，需覆盖所有提示要点并适当发挥，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
