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假如你是来自北京的李华，上周末你和妈妈到上海游玩。请根据以下要点给爸爸写封邮件，简述你们的活动和感受。要点如下：
1.第一天:去了上海迪士尼乐园;2.第二天:参观了东方明珠电视塔,品尝了当地的美食。
Dear Dad,
Love,
Li Hua
假如你是来自北京的李华，上周末你和妈妈到上海游玩。请根据以下要点给爸爸写封邮件，简述你们的活动和感受。要点如下：
1.第一天:去了上海迪士尼乐园;2.第二天:参观了东方明珠电视塔,品尝了当地的美食。
Dear Dad,
Mum and I had a great time in Shanghai last weekend. It was sunny and windy. Last Saturday, we went to Shanghai Disney Resort and took a lot of photos there. Also, I was lucky to meet some visitors from the US. And I talked with them in English. It was a good chance for me to practise my English.
The next day, we visited the Oriental Pearl Tower. It's a tall building and people can see the beautiful scenery of Shanghai on the top. So many people visit it every day. We also tried local food and it tasted really delicious!
We were tired last weekend, but we had great fun.
Love,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Dad,
Mum and I had a great time in Shanghai last weekend. It was sunny and windy. Last Saturday, we went to Shanghai Disney Resort and took a lot of photos there. Also, I was lucky to meet some visitors from the US. And I talked with them in English. It was a good chance for me to practise my English. The next day, we visited the Oriental Pearl Tower. It's a tall building and people can see the beautiful scenery of Shanghai on the top. So many people visit it every day. We also tried local food and it tasted really delicious!
We were tired last weekend, but we had great fun.
Love,
Li Hua
Dear Dad,
Mum and I had a great time in Shanghai last weekend. It was sunny and windy. Last Saturday, we went to Shanghai Disney Resort and took a lot of photos there. Also, I was lucky to meet some visitors from the US. And I talked with them in English. It was a good chance for me to practise my English. The next day, we visited the Oriental Pearl Tower. It's a tall building and people can see the beautiful scenery of Shanghai on the top. So many people visit it every day. We also tried local food and it tasted really delicious!
We were tired last weekend, but we had great fun.
Love,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给爸爸写一封邮件，简述上周末和妈妈在上海的游玩经历，需涵盖两个核心要点：第一天前往上海迪士尼乐园，第二天参观东方明珠电视塔并品尝当地美食。解题思路如下：1. 遵循英文邮件的标准格式，开头用称呼“Dear Dad”，结尾用署名“Love, Li Hua”；2. 确定全文时态为一般过去时，用于描述已发生的活动；3. 整合给定要点，适当补充合理细节（如游玩时的小插曲、天气、个人感受），让内容连贯充实；4. 结尾总结整体感受，呼应邮件主题，语气亲切自然，符合给家人写信的语境。
【解析】
首先点明邮件背景：妈妈和我上周末在上海度过了愉快的时光；接着描述第一天的活动：前往上海迪士尼乐园，补充拍照、遇到美国游客并练习英语的细节，丰富内容；再写第二天的活动：参观东方明珠电视塔，说明其特点（高耸、可俯瞰上海美景），随后品尝当地美食，描述味道；最后总结：虽然疲惫但玩得很开心，完成邮件收尾。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Dad,
Mum and I had a great time in Shanghai last weekend. It was sunny and windy. Last Saturday, we went to Shanghai Disney Resort and took a lot of photos there. Also, I was lucky to meet some visitors from the US. And I talked with them in English. It was a good chance for me to practise my English. The next day, we visited the Oriental Pearl Tower. It's a tall building and people can see the beautiful scenery of Shanghai on the top. So many people visit it every day. We also tried local food and it tasted really delicious!
We were tired last weekend, but we had great fun.
Love,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、一般过去时、要点整合写作
【点评】
本题是初中英语常见的应用文写作题，要求学生掌握英文邮件格式，准确运用一般过去时描述过去经历，整合给定要点并适当拓展细节，考察学生的语言组织与综合运用能力，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以李华的身份给爸爸写一封邮件，简述上周末和妈妈在上海的游玩经历，需涵盖两个核心要点：第一天前往上海迪士尼乐园，第二天参观东方明珠电视塔并品尝当地美食。解题思路如下：1. 遵循英文邮件的标准格式，开头用称呼“Dear Dad”，结尾用署名“Love, Li Hua”；2. 确定全文时态为一般过去时，用于描述已发生的活动；3. 整合给定要点，适当补充合理细节（如游玩时的小插曲、天气、个人感受），让内容连贯充实；4. 结尾总结整体感受，呼应邮件主题，语气亲切自然，符合给家人写信的语境。
【解析】
首先点明邮件背景：妈妈和我上周末在上海度过了愉快的时光；接着描述第一天的活动：前往上海迪士尼乐园，补充拍照、遇到美国游客并练习英语的细节，丰富内容；再写第二天的活动：参观东方明珠电视塔，说明其特点（高耸、可俯瞰上海美景），随后品尝当地美食，描述味道；最后总结：虽然疲惫但玩得很开心，完成邮件收尾。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Dad,
Mum and I had a great time in Shanghai last weekend. It was sunny and windy. Last Saturday, we went to Shanghai Disney Resort and took a lot of photos there. Also, I was lucky to meet some visitors from the US. And I talked with them in English. It was a good chance for me to practise my English. The next day, we visited the Oriental Pearl Tower. It's a tall building and people can see the beautiful scenery of Shanghai on the top. So many people visit it every day. We also tried local food and it tasted really delicious!
We were tired last weekend, but we had great fun.
Love,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、一般过去时、要点整合写作
【点评】
本题是初中英语常见的应用文写作题，要求学生掌握英文邮件格式，准确运用一般过去时描述过去经历，整合给定要点并适当拓展细节，考察学生的语言组织与综合运用能力，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
