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改革开放以来,中国的每一城每一村都在发生着变化。请根据以下提示,以"Changes in My Hometown"为题,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。注意要点完整、语法正确、语意连贯。可适当发挥。
Changes in My Hometown
Changes in My Hometown
My hometown is a beautiful city.
思路点拨
本题要求学生介绍自己家乡的变化,体裁应为说明文,人称应以第一人称单数和第三人称单数为主;介绍家乡过去的情况,应以一般过去时为主,介绍现在的情况应以现在完成时和一般现在时为主。第一段:总体介绍家乡的情况;第二段:描述家乡过去的样子;第三段:描述家乡现在的样子;第四段:表达自己的感受。
改革开放以来,中国的每一城每一村都在发生着变化。请根据以下提示,以"Changes in My Hometown"为题,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。注意要点完整、语法正确、语意连贯。可适当发挥。
Changes in My Hometown
Changes in My Hometown
My hometown is a beautiful city.
思路点拨
本题要求学生介绍自己家乡的变化,体裁应为说明文,人称应以第一人称单数和第三人称单数为主;介绍家乡过去的情况,应以一般过去时为主,介绍现在的情况应以现在完成时和一般现在时为主。第一段:总体介绍家乡的情况;第二段:描述家乡过去的样子;第三段:描述家乡现在的样子;第四段:表达自己的感受。
答案
范文欣赏
Changes in My Hometown
My hometown is a beautiful city. Great changes have taken place in it over the years.
In the past, it used to be a quiet place. There was dirty water, bad air, narrow roads and old houses. People could only get around by bike or on foot.
Now it has turned into a very modern city. There are many new squares, wide streets, a lot of tall buildings, clean water and fresh air. People can drive a car or take a bus to go somewhere.
Now we are enjoying comfortable lives. I hope it will be more and more beautiful.
Changes in My Hometown
My hometown is a beautiful city. Great changes have taken place in it over the years.
In the past, it used to be a quiet place. There was dirty water, bad air, narrow roads and old houses. People could only get around by bike or on foot.
Now it has turned into a very modern city. There are many new squares, wide streets, a lot of tall buildings, clean water and fresh air. People can drive a car or take a bus to go somewhere.
Now we are enjoying comfortable lives. I hope it will be more and more beautiful.
某英文报举办"我的家乡"主题征文活动。请根据下表提示,以"The Changes in My Hometown"为题,用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。
要求:1、语句通顺,书写整洁。
2、不得出现真实姓名和班级。
The Changes in My Hometown
要求:1、语句通顺,书写整洁。
2、不得出现真实姓名和班级。
The Changes in My Hometown
In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived
a poor life. The houses were old and small. The roads were
narrow. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish
everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors
came here.
a poor life. The houses were old and small. The roads were
narrow. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish
everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors
came here.
Now great changes have taken place in my
hometown. The environment has become more beautiful.
hometown. The environment has become more beautiful.
The mountains have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the
sky bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass
everywhere.
sky bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass
everywhere.
People live a better life. Their houses are large
and bright. Many people have their own cars.
and bright. Many people have their own cars.
Every year,
thousands of people from all over the world come to visit my
hometown.
thousands of people from all over the world come to visit my
hometown.
They can taste a lot of delicious local food here.
此处live还可以换成lead或have
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in
the future.
the future.
“比较级+比较级”意为“越来越……”
答案
写作能力突破
One possible version:
The Changes in My Hometown
In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived
a poor life. The houses were old and small. The roads were
narrow. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish
everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors
came here.
Now great changes have taken place in my
hometown. The environment has become more beautiful.
The mountains have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the
sky bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass
everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large
and bright. Many people have their own cars. Every year,
thousands of people from all over the world come to visit my
hometown. They can taste a lot of delicious local food here.
此处live还可以换成lead或have
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in
the future.
“比较级+比较级”意为“越来越……”
One possible version:
The Changes in My Hometown
In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived
a poor life. The houses were old and small. The roads were
narrow. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish
everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors
came here.
Now great changes have taken place in my
hometown. The environment has become more beautiful.
The mountains have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the
sky bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass
everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large
and bright. Many people have their own cars. Every year,
thousands of people from all over the world come to visit my
hometown. They can taste a lot of delicious local food here.
此处live还可以换成lead或have
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in
the future.
“比较级+比较级”意为“越来越……”
