十四、书面表达。(共5分)
假设你是Helen,你有一个好朋友叫Lucy。请你根据提示,向大家介绍一下Lucy吧!不少于8句话。

假设你是Helen,你有一个好朋友叫Lucy。请你根据提示,向大家介绍一下Lucy吧!不少于8句话。
答案
One possible version:
I am Helen. I am 11 years old. My good friend is Lucy. She is 11 too. She is good at English and Art. She likes drawing very much. At weekends, she draws in the park. There are four people in her family. Her father is a doctor. He likes going fishing. Her mother is a teacher. She teaches us English. Her sister is a writer. She works at home. Sometimes she plays games with us.
I am Helen. I am 11 years old. My good friend is Lucy. She is 11 too. She is good at English and Art. She likes drawing very much. At weekends, she draws in the park. There are four people in her family. Her father is a doctor. He likes going fishing. Her mother is a teacher. She teaches us English. Her sister is a writer. She works at home. Sometimes she plays games with us.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,要求以Helen的身份介绍好朋友Lucy,需结合思维导图的提示(涵盖周末活动、科目、家庭、爱好等内容),且不少于8句话。解题思路:① 先点明自身身份与年龄,再介绍好友Lucy的基本情况(年龄);② 围绕思维导图的要点展开:说明Lucy擅长的科目、爱好及周末活动;③ 补充Lucy的家庭情况(成员、职业),丰富内容;④ 确保语句通顺,符合英语表达习惯,满足字数要求。
【解析】
根据题目要求,以第一人称Helen的口吻,依次介绍自己、好友Lucy的基本信息(年龄),接着阐述Lucy擅长的科目、爱好及周末活动,再介绍Lucy的家庭成员及各自职业,最后添加互动细节使内容连贯完整,达到不少于8句话的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I am Helen. I am 11 years old. My good friend is Lucy. She is 11 too. She is good at English and Art. She likes drawing very much. At weekends, she draws in the park. There are four people in her family. Her father is a doctor. He likes going fishing. Her mother is a teacher. She teaches us English. Her sister is a writer. She works at home. Sometimes she plays games with us.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、介绍类英语写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求,结合思维导图所有提示要点,内容完整充实,语句通顺自然,逻辑清晰,符合英语写作规范,达到了字数要求,是一篇优秀的介绍类书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语书面表达题,要求以Helen的身份介绍好朋友Lucy,需结合思维导图的提示(涵盖周末活动、科目、家庭、爱好等内容),且不少于8句话。解题思路:① 先点明自身身份与年龄,再介绍好友Lucy的基本情况(年龄);② 围绕思维导图的要点展开:说明Lucy擅长的科目、爱好及周末活动;③ 补充Lucy的家庭情况(成员、职业),丰富内容;④ 确保语句通顺,符合英语表达习惯,满足字数要求。
【解析】
根据题目要求,以第一人称Helen的口吻,依次介绍自己、好友Lucy的基本信息(年龄),接着阐述Lucy擅长的科目、爱好及周末活动,再介绍Lucy的家庭成员及各自职业,最后添加互动细节使内容连贯完整,达到不少于8句话的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I am Helen. I am 11 years old. My good friend is Lucy. She is 11 too. She is good at English and Art. She likes drawing very much. At weekends, she draws in the park. There are four people in her family. Her father is a doctor. He likes going fishing. Her mother is a teacher. She teaches us English. Her sister is a writer. She works at home. Sometimes she plays games with us.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、介绍类英语写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求,结合思维导图所有提示要点,内容完整充实,语句通顺自然,逻辑清晰,符合英语写作规范,达到了字数要求,是一篇优秀的介绍类书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.3
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