(陕西咸阳开学考)李华在暑假参加夏令营活动时认识了来自澳大利亚的Coco,她近期给李华发来邮件介绍了自己的家人,同时也很好奇李华的家庭情况。请你以李华的名义给她回一封邮件,介绍自己的家人。要点如下:
1. 你和你家人的基本信息:外貌、性格、职业、爱好……(至少介绍两位家庭成员);
2. 你和你的家人的周末活动:活动内容、感受……
要求:1. 必须包括全部要点,可以适当补充;
2. 内容完整,结构连贯,70词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Coco,
How are you these days? I'm very happy to get a letter from you. Let me tell you something about my family.

Yours,
Li Hua
第一步 学审题
学审题,明晰写作思路
1. 审主题:题干要求介绍自己的家人,写作主题为"家庭";
2. 审文体:题干要求写一封邮件,文体应为应用文;
3. 审人称:题干要求以李华的名义写一封邮件,介绍自己的家人,人称应包括第一人称、第三人称;
4. 审时态:介绍自己的家庭,时态应为一般现在时;
5. 审要点:①介绍自己家庭成员的情况,包括性格、爱好、工作等;②介绍家庭活动及感受。
第二步 搭框架
搭框架,掌握写作技巧

第三步 背范文
背范文,品析高分佳作
Dear Coco,
How are you these days? I'm very happy to get a letter from you.
Let me tell you something about my family.①
There are three people in my family. They are my parents and I. My father is a doctor and he is strict. My mother is a nurse and she is patient. They work in different hospitals. They like playing badminton together. I am in Class 8, Grade 7 in a middle school. I like singing. On weekends, all of us do many things together, such as cleaning, cooking and shopping.② I often help my mum do the cooking, and clean up after dinner.
East or west, home is the best.③ I love my family. I enjoy spending time with my family.
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点赏析
①本句用let引导的祈使句来引出写作话题;
②there be句型介绍家庭的人数,丰富句型;
③巧妙引用谚语"East or west, home is the best."表达自己对家的感受,升华主题。

Dear Coco,
How are you these days? I'm very happy to get a letter from you. Let me tell you something about my family.
There are three people in my family. They are my parents and I. My father is a doctor and he is strict. My mother is a nurse and she is patient. They work in different hospitals. They like playing badminton together. I am in Class 8, Grade 7 in a middle school. I like singing. On weekends, all of us do many things together, such as cleaning, cooking and shopping. I often help my mum do the cooking, and clean up after dinner.
East or west, home is the best. I love my family. I enjoy spending time with my family.
Yours,
Li Hua

这是一篇应用文邮件写作，需以李华的名义给Coco介绍自己的家庭。写作时需注意：1. 主题围绕“家庭”，采用第一人称和第三人称，时态为一般现在时；2. 需涵盖家人基本信息（职业、性格、爱好等，至少介绍两位家庭成员）以及周末家庭活动和自身感受；3. 可运用let引导的祈使句引出话题，there be句型介绍家庭人数，引用谚语升华主题，保证内容完整连贯，符合词数要求。