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七、书面表达。（满分20分）
学校英文校刊 YOUTH TIMES 发布了招募冬令营营员信息。假如你是李华，你想参加冬令营。请你根据招募内容，用英语给校刊写一封申请信。
注意：
1. 内容须涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir or Madam，
Thanks for offering us such great camps.
Yours，
Li Hua
学校英文校刊 YOUTH TIMES 发布了招募冬令营营员信息。假如你是李华，你想参加冬令营。请你根据招募内容，用英语给校刊写一封申请信。
注意：
1. 内容须涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir or Madam，
Thanks for offering us such great camps.
I do expect to join one of them.
I’d like to join the Growing-up Camp. Firstly, I’m a helpful person who is always ready to help others. I can listen to friends’ worries and help them solve problems as possible as I can. Secondly, working with some other grown-ups will teach me how to face difficulties bravely. Moreover, it is beneficial for me to develop my critical thinking. I believe the camp will make me more confident as well as thoughtful. Lastly, communicating with different people helps me make new friends.
I really hope to be a member of the camp. I would really appreciate it if you approve of my application. Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours，
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for offering us such great camps. I do expect to join one of them.
I’d like to join the Growing-up Camp. Firstly, I’m a helpful person who is always ready to help others. I can listen to friends’ worries and help them solve problems as possible as I can. Secondly, working with some other grown-ups will teach me how to face difficulties bravely. Moreover, it is beneficial for me to develop my critical thinking. I believe the camp will make me more confident as well as thoughtful. Lastly, communicating with different people helps me make new friends.
I really hope to be a member of the camp. I would really appreciate it if you approve of my application. Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for offering us such great camps. I do expect to join one of them.
I’d like to join the Growing-up Camp. Firstly, I’m a helpful person who is always ready to help others. I can listen to friends’ worries and help them solve problems as possible as I can. Secondly, working with some other grown-ups will teach me how to face difficulties bravely. Moreover, it is beneficial for me to develop my critical thinking. I believe the camp will make me more confident as well as thoughtful. Lastly, communicating with different people helps me make new friends.
I really hope to be a member of the camp. I would really appreciate it if you approve of my application. Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一封申请参加冬令营的英语信，需从三个冬令营中选一个，涵盖对应活动要点，语言通顺，80词左右，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：首先明确选择的冬令营（如成长营），然后围绕该营的活动（分享烦恼、解决问题等）阐述申请理由，结合自身特点（如善于倾听、想提升能力等），最后表达申请意愿，注意不提及个人身份，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 确定选择的冬令营：选Growing-up Camp（成长营）；
2. 阐述理由：结合成长营的活动（分享烦恼、解决问题），说明自身适合的点（如善于倾听他人烦恼、想学习面对困难、提升思维能力、结交朋友等）；
3. 补充申请意愿，礼貌收尾，确保内容涵盖所有要点，语言流畅，符合词数要求，不出现个人身份信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for offering us such great camps. I do expect to join one of them.
I’d like to join the Growing-up Camp. Firstly, I’m a helpful person who is always ready to listen to friends’ worries and help them solve problems as possible as I can. Secondly, working with others will teach me how to face difficulties bravely and develop my critical thinking. Moreover, communicating with different people helps me make new friends. I really hope to be a member of the camp. I would really appreciate it if you approve of my application. Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书面表达、申请信写作
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求学生根据给定的冬令营信息完成申请信，需涵盖要点，语言通顺，符合格式要求，能考查学生的语言运用和逻辑表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求写一封申请参加冬令营的英语信，需从三个冬令营中选一个，涵盖对应活动要点，语言通顺，80词左右，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：首先明确选择的冬令营（如成长营），然后围绕该营的活动（分享烦恼、解决问题等）阐述申请理由，结合自身特点（如善于倾听、想提升能力等），最后表达申请意愿，注意不提及个人身份，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 确定选择的冬令营：选Growing-up Camp（成长营）；
2. 阐述理由：结合成长营的活动（分享烦恼、解决问题），说明自身适合的点（如善于倾听他人烦恼、想学习面对困难、提升思维能力、结交朋友等）；
3. 补充申请意愿，礼貌收尾，确保内容涵盖所有要点，语言流畅，符合词数要求，不出现个人身份信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for offering us such great camps. I do expect to join one of them.
I’d like to join the Growing-up Camp. Firstly, I’m a helpful person who is always ready to listen to friends’ worries and help them solve problems as possible as I can. Secondly, working with others will teach me how to face difficulties bravely and develop my critical thinking. Moreover, communicating with different people helps me make new friends. I really hope to be a member of the camp. I would really appreciate it if you approve of my application. Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书面表达、申请信写作
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求学生根据给定的冬令营信息完成申请信，需涵盖要点，语言通顺，符合格式要求，能考查学生的语言运用和逻辑表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
